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  1. Ok, i used a Latin translator and got a good one: Valiridis which is a combonation of the words great and green. I like the name so I'll use it.
  2. John had finally learned the language of these creatures, who called themselves the Wookies. He was able to project images into their minds to speak with them, and he could understand what they said, but their language was immpossible for humans to speak. The Wookies had foud him not far from his ship, badly wounded from the impact, but they dared not go to close to the Stare Ghot because they feared witchcraft and evil. The had sent their Shaman and a few warriors out to examine it though. John asked if he could return to the ship, but the healer said he was to injured. He stared down from the tree platform at the jungle floor below. The wookie tree city was amazing and huge, and apparently there were even bigger ones. John could not wait to inform the Republic about these magnificent creatures, who looked like they could rip a man limb from limb with ease.
  3. John awoke, unsure where he was. The last thing he remembered was over-straining himself in his attempt to save the crew. He heard a deep growling sound and turned on the palette he was lying on to see a huge fur covered beast holding a large crossbow. He tried to get up but his head hurt to much, and the beast wouldn't let him. He reached out with the force to try to see if this lifeform was intelligent, finding that it was just as sentinent as a human. Using his powers, he tried to communicate with the creature.
  4. I'll be Arya's green dragon when the time comes for her to get him. Name: Valiridis Age: When he comes, just hatched Species: Dragon Description: Emerald green scales and deep green eyes with large claws and wings (duh) Magic User: yes Favoriot Weapon: Claws and fire later
  5. I LOVE Eragon, the movie was a huge disapointment though. My favoriot char is Arya, so I'll be her. Name: Arya Age: 100 (edited) Species: Elf Picture and/or Description: here Magic User: Yes Weapon: Sword, no name Look at this: Whenever Arya casts magic, it takes the form of green magic. So just as Eragon casts blue magic and his dragon, Saphira, is blue, there is a good chance that Arya might already have or obtain the next and last dragon egg and have it hatch for her. (From Wikipedia) Also from wikipedia- Apparently the cover [for book 3] will feature a green dragon looking to the right
  6. O/T- Nice drawing, I made a bunch of drawings of different things such as the Republic frigate, however I have no scanner. I made a model of a Republic fighter in Google Sketch-up http://sketchup.google.com/3dwarehouse/details?mid=33519f5342b93de350a0ed3463ddd5f . Finally, the Star Ghost exited the atmosphere, however it was to late for John, he had fainted from the over-use of his power. But he had saved the crew from boiled blood and charred flesh, well, those on the bridge at least. The remainder of the crew had perished, including an entire battalion of soldiers. The ship plummeted to the forest below, going into a sort of flat spin because of the entry angle. The bridge crew was trying to maintain a steady course, but all forms of control had been lost. They crashed.
  7. O/T- sorry I was gone for a week, I was really busy. Wookies have lower level of technology because they have had no contact with the outside world, but they can have crossbows, the ancestor of the bowcaster and some advanced pulley and elevator systems for their tree houses. IF anyone ever post again In an enormous explosion, the first Sith cruiser exploded, sending debris flying in every direction, heavily damaging the other Sith cruiser that was nearby. John only turned breifly to observe this before his attention was brought back to the critical condition of his ship. Emergency lights painted the bridge a blood red, eerily lighting the faces of those around him. He could sense their fear, he struggled to control his own. With one final groan, the Star Ghost's aft armour plating peeled off due to the strange entry angle into the Kashyykian atmosphere. "Sir, heat levels are rising!" John didn't need to be told, he could feels the growing heat and the sweat pouring off of him. The temperature was hotter than a Tatooine summer day already. As they gained speed, the Star Ghost became enveloped in a white flame, like a shooting star. John realized in horror that in a matter of minutes the temperature would boil their blood and kill them all. He reached for the force, comforted by it's familiar touch, and made a barrier around the bridge. He knew everyone else on the ship would die, but he could only protect a small area. From the Republic cruisers, it looked as if everyone on the ship was dead already, so they made no action to send a landing craft down. They didn't notice the Warp V heading towwards the planet either, they were to busy with the Sith cruiser, which they had boarded and taken many prisoner.
  8. Although John was glad that the Warp V had joined the battle, he was afraid it was to late for the Star Ghost. He was stuggling to make the descision to abandon ship and get into the escape pods. The Republic cruisers would send search parties to find their escape pods down on Kashyyk. The Star Ghost was begining to lose altitude now, entering the first layer of the green planet's atmosphere, John was about to give the order to get to the escape pods when the Frigate above them broke in half. John sensed the deaths, and was temporarily unable to do anything, being overwhelmed by the loss of life. That moment cost him the chance to launch the escape pods, as a part of the frigate smashed into the middle of the Star Ghost, forcing him to order the blast doors shut to stop loss of air. It was all or nothing now, most likely nothing. Finally, 2 Frigates and a Cruiser exited hyperspace and began firing upon the Sith Cruisers. Unfortunatly, the Star Ghost had lost her comm array, and was begining to plummet to the planet below. "Captain! Open all emergancy flaps and ready for descent!" John shouted. "Yes, Sir!" "Come in shallow, we already lost alot of our hull and I'm worried that any debris that falls of could hit the bridge." "Yes sir, seting descent angle to 30 degrees!"
  9. John sensed Sem before he saw his ship, originally thinking he was a Sith, then thinking he was a Jedi, then finally coming to the conclusion that he was neither, just a Force Sensitive (O/T- you are right?). "Hailing the Warp V, this is republic cruiser the Star Ghost, we are in a bit of a predicament, will you help? More Republic Cruisers are on the way but the ship is breaking up and i need help fast!" John said. The Star Ghost now threatened to lose orbital stability and plummet to planet below, a forest world, uninhabbited, by the name of Kashyyke (sp?). Rumour was that there were huge hairy beasts, capable of tearing a man limb from limb down there(O/T- Soon will discover wookies). It was the last place short of Korriban that John wanted to crash on. "Sir, we have lost 75% of our weaponry and the Navigation computer is gone!" A fearful Luitenant told John with a red face. "Captain, activate all boosters and open emergancy flaps, we need to maintain orbit!" John shouted.
  10. OT- I guess Anakin is right, there aren't really enough people, but I'm kinda bored, and on top of that, no one else has joined. I don't care if you use Yoda, however he was only 900 years old (only lol) and this is set at least 10000 years before he was born. But I guess he could be his ancestor or whatever. Having heard the distress call, a Republic figate with a small fighter escort exited hyperspace. They began to open fire on the enemy vessals. Right now the battle was not going well at all for the Star Ghost, which had lost large sections of the hull and many crewmembers. As another missile hit the ship, John was temporarily blinded as it hit right next to the bridge viewing platform, barley missing the window. The Republic frigate could do nothing about the much larger Sith cruisers so positioned itself above the Star Ghost to ward of attacking fighters. It's small escort encircled both of the ships. "Hailing the Star Ghost, this is Republic Frigate Designation 181, more ships are on their way." The frigate captain called. John got on the intercomm. "This is the Star Ghost, we thank you for your timely aid, when will the other ships arrive, we can't hold much longer!" John said. "They are en-route now, Frigate 181 out." came the reply.
  11. Well if anyone actually looks at this again, I am still posting on this (I admit I was going to give up checking) The Star Ghost loomed through space, scanning for Sith ships and other hostile craft. John walked up the bridge isle and examined the vast blackness before him. "Captain have you found anything?" He asked the young man at the helm. "No sir, no enemy presence since they fled yesterday." The captain replyed "Keep searching, i sense a great disturbance in the force, we are definatly not alone." "Yes, sir." "Well Captain I for one will be very glad when this is all over- wait- BRACE YOURSELVES!" It was to late, the Sith cruisers and fighters came out of hyperspace, immeadeatly opening fire on the Star Ghost, the whole craft shook under the enemy's fire. "Return fire," John shouted. "Send a distress call at once!" The sheilds (very archaic back then) went out fast, exposing the hull, which was immediatly breach by enemy fire. The battle was not going well at all.
  12. //I don't really like the idea of D&R threads so I decided to start this RPG the good old fashion way, by having character recruitment and the RPG on the same thread.// This RPG is set before the events of KOTOR 1, during the Great Hyperspace war when the hyperdrive was invented. (I'm going to make up my own story about the whole thing because I know nothing about what really happened) --- The hyperdrive was invented by a brilliant physicist on Curoscant by the name of Jaden Narr. Recognising the potential of this device, the govornment immeadiatly seized the device and Jaden, taking his plans and building a new kind of spacecraft, one that would finally be able to travel outside of the Curoscant system. The craft, New Horizons 1, was lightly armed and had a crew of 10 scientists and one Jedi representative named Darn Kash. Two days after it had left the system, a plea for help came through the force to the Jedi Temple from Darn. That was the last time he was heard from, ever. Furios at the loss of their scientists and expensive device, the govornment built a new ship, heavily armoured and armed with a platoon of soldiers on board. After the ship entered hyperspace, they arrived in the Corellia system. In a few hours they detected multiple projectiles coming at them from a small orbital station, which they destroyed. The ship quickly fled back to Curoscant, but something followed. They then realised that Corellia must have captured the New Horizons 1 and built their own hyperdrive off of it. A huge war ingnited, hyperdrives were mass produced on both sides. Curoscant won the war, and took over Corellia, then turned towards other systems. Eventually, everyone had hyperdrives, and the planets conquered by Curoscant became the Republic. Then, out of the fringes of the galaxy came a dark force which began coquering planets on it's own. They were the Sith. The war that followed would be brutal and bloody, the Great Hyperspace War had begun. This RPG is set 10 years into the war Rules: No super characters No PC killing without permission Have fun Don't be stupid Character Creation (You can use the character database if you want): Name: Gender: Age: Apperance: Class: (Jedi, Dark Jedi, soldier etc.) Alignment: Faction: (Republic, Sith, or Mercenary) Rank: (Master padawan general etc.) Ship: (optional) Equipment: Bio: ME---- Name: John Lavelle Gender: Male Age: 23 Apperance: Tall, Dark brown hair, blue eyes Class: Jedi Alignment: Light Faction: Republic Rank: Knight Ship: The Star Ghost, a heavy cruiser with a hanger and a 12 fighter escort, 20 turbolaser batteries, and 2 space to surface missile bay, 2 space to space missile bays. Equipment: Dual Blue lightsabers, red robes and white platebody Bio: John was taken for Jedi training when he was 5, he showed alot of promise and was quickly given the rank of knight. We will star when more people come.
  13. In this case, RPG's are ussually stories which you can join by creating a character and making him/her interact with the other user's characters through text (Thus the caption "without those nifty 3d graphics" on the forum entry area) Also now people are starting to use recruitment and discussion threads alot where you create your character then after enough people have joined or whetever the creator starts another thread with the rpg and jumps strainght into the story. For example, in Duel of the Fates. you have to fill out a character creation sheet to create your character. If you want to create your own rpg then you have to create a small (or large if you want) background story for your RPG and possibly a character creation sheet (most rpg's have them). Here is a basic charater sheet example: Name: Appearance: (Height, hair color, etc.) Class: (Soldier, Jedi, etc.) Alignment: (Dark, Light, None) Faction: (Jedi Order, Republic, Sith, Mercenary, etc.) Rank: (If you are a Jedi/Sith: Master, Apprentice, etc. , if you a re a soldier: General Captain etc.) Ship: (optional) Equipment: (armor, blasters, etc) Bio: (background story of your character, optional) For better ideas on how to do RPG's, read through one and see what people are doing. Remember also that people may take a few hours to a day to reply to anything. Star Ghost *EDIT* I almost forgot, usually there is a basic set of rules for rpg's: No super characters No killing of player's characters without permission No controlling other player's characters And sometimes: No controlling important NPC's such as the "Emporer" or whatever faction leaders the rpg may have No creating major plot changes
  14. About 10,000 years before the events of KOTOR 1, the Republic spanned the entire galaxy with no opposition. The Jedi were at there strongest, with connections to the force that were so strong they were incomprehensible. Then one man, a prominent Jedi named Kairn, found darkness. Kairn was captain of the republic vessel Wintersprung. It was a small cruiser assinged to patrolling the border of the unknown regions the outer rim, a dangerous job, but they were safe. Or so they thought. During one of their routine patrolling runs, they encoutered a mysterious gravitational region, that was to strong to escape from. Kairn immediatly sensed the Force, along with a deep sense of forboding. The Wintersprung attempted to send an emergancy trannsmission, but the signal was being jammed by an unknown force. Kairn sensed death all around him, and almost became sick. He promptly fainted. When he awoke, he found himself in an acient stone room. He felt as if darkness was closing in all around him. He remembered his Jedi training and attempted to clear his mind, at which point he felt a black presence in his mind. "Muahaha! Feeble human, follower of light! Who are you to come here fool?" The presence said. "We were dragged in by a gravitational force- Where's my crew? And where's my apprentice? I cannot sense him..." Kairn said. "NO what have you done to her?" He cried as he fell to the ground in pain. "Your crew could not withstand the power of this place and were immediatly but very painfully destroyed by the power of this place. You were strong enough to survive, which is suprising considering you follow the Light." "What is there but the light, and what happened to my apprentice?" "Your apprentice was neither to weak nor strong enough, so she is caught in an eternal web of pain in the black pyramid." "No, I can feel it... aaaaahhhh... pain" "Ahh yes I see you have formed a bond with your apprentice, hahaha." "I must... set... her... free." "You will not, we have awaited this moment. She fuffiled an ancient prophecy that we have... Now is our time." "Who.. are... you?" "We are the Sith. You petty humans know of us in your subconcius mind. We anre evil, we are darkness, we are hatred, we are fear! We our your nightmares. And know we shall consume the galaxy with our power! For millenia we have waited for the prophecy... We shall use the girl's pain to open the portal into your world, which we have been trying so hard to enter since we were spawned of darkness!" "NO... release her... please... I can not bear the pain..." "But there are ways you can use the pain blinded human fool! Join with us and you shall weild a power able to control the galaxy!" At this point Kairn attempted to clear his mind of the pain and the presence, putting all of his effort into it. However, even his great power in the force was unable to stop the darkness, and he was crushed in pain. "Ahhh that's better fool. I sense you will now bow before the Sith..." "Yes, master" "My name is Darth Talk'ana. I will put you into stasis, but when you awake, you will be in our city, Hardak." "Wait-..." A few hours later Kairn awoke to find himself in a dark land with a blood red sky. He felt great pain inside of him, but he was able to walk. There was a huge black pyramid infront of him, surrounded by a series of smaller red ones. He immeddeatly felt drawn to the place, and was unable to stop himself from going to it. The closer he got, the more pain built up inside him, although he was unable to tear away from the massive structure. There was a figure dressed in black robes, slightly taller than him, standing next to a small red pyramid. It beckoned to him, revealing a pale hand with abnormally long fingers and nails. The face was recesed in darkness. "You aren't Darth Talk'ana..." "No, I am the Chronicler of the Sith, the teacher and librarian." "What are... these... pyramids?" "Strutures built by the ancients, containing knowledge. Knowledge that you will soon be subjected to..." The Chronicler waved his hand, and all of the red pyramids began glowing brightly. Kairn was somehow whipped into the black pyramid in the center. Endless knowledge began pouring into his head. Darkness and hatred flowed into his mind, corrupting him. He speant many days in there learning of darkness, the light flowed out of him freely, and he was fully corrupt. When he emerged, there was a gathering of hundreds of Sith outside the pyramids. Somehow he knew that the portal was about to be opened. He remembered what he had learned about channeling his pain into power, and used it to give him the strength to follow the Chronicler, who was beckoning him again. "Come my child, you will return here when the portal is open, first you must consturct your sword and take your robes." "Yes Chronicler" The Jedi order had lost all sense of Kairn and his apprentice Leena, until one day, a total of two weeks after the Wintersprung had been lost, they felt him and a terrible darkness which they could not understand, but only momentarily. Their senses were blocked, and they were unable to percive the comming darkness. The Sith emerged on a small planet, inhabited by a race of humanoids who would become known as the Creators. Coruppted by the Sith, they constucted devices and sites of terrible dark power, that the Sith would use to Darken the galaxy. Devices such as the Star Forge. Over the next few standard years, Jedi began dissapearing, as if erased from the Force. The council decided to immeadiatly investigate, but they were to late. Worlds on the Outer Rim were razed by massive battle cruisers and completely destroyed by dark powers that are still unknown... Then the first disastorous open battle between a sith cruiser and a detachment of the Republic fleet sparked chaos. The war began, the Jedi searched all the resources they had in an attempt to find out who their attackers were, but came up with nothing. They were brley a match for the skill of the Sith warriors. They mostly met former Jedi and other species in the Sith ranks, and whenever they met an actual Sith Lord, They were destroyed. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Sorry that was so long guys, i just had some inspiration... Rules: Standard RPG rules apply (No godding, pking without consent, etc) No being a Sith Lord or any main Character such as Kairn This is a serious RPG, don't fool around to much ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Character sheet: Name: Age: Race: Appearance: Faction: (Sith, Jedi, Republic, Mercenary, etc) Class: (Jedi Master, Jedi knight, Dark Jedi, Soldier, etc) Rank: (Luitenat, General, etc) Equipment: Ship: (Optional) Hitory: (Optional) Name: John Lavelle Age: 20 Race: Mirluka Appearance: Dark brown hair, blue eyes, handsome, moderatly tall Faction: Jedi Class: Jedi Knight Rank: General Equipment: White robes with silver Breastplate and thigh gaurds made of force-energized alloys, Darkbane (a doublebladed vibrosword charged with force energies weildable only by a Light Side Jedi) Ship: The Star Ghost, a heavy Republic cruiser armed with missiles and turbolasers, carrying 2 squadrens of fighters and a large shuttle. Also can carry a battalion of troops and has a special meditaion room in the captian's chambers. Hitory: The normal, a regular 5 year-old drafted into the Jedi academy on Kataar, as most Mirlukans were. He was pacticularly storng in the force and excelled through the ranks quikly. He became a General when the war started. ----------------------------------------------------------------------- The Star Ghost slowly passed through the system as John stood watching on the bridge. He couldn't see as a human could, rather he could percive the world around him through the force. This was the gift and the curse of the Mirluka. They were invaluable assets to the Republic in this time, being some of the only ones who could 'see' the Sith through the Force. He saw many things, perhaps to many. He saw death, darkness, fear, hatred, but he also saw hope. Then he saw that a Sith cruiser was about to come out of hyperspace. "Scramble defenses now, incoming cruiser!" He shouted. "Yes Sir!" "Transmit a warning to all the planets in the system to be on full alert, and contact the Republic! Colonel, I want to see all squadrens in the air now!"
  15. I assume it's over... I hate it when things like that happen to great mod ideas... HELLO? CREATOR OF THREAD? ARE YOU ALIVE? Maybe he will see the new replies in his e-mail if he used that option.
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