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.....The phantom followed the story of a battle between the rebels and imperials. In the middle of the battle a firespray ship came out of a riff in space. It attacked both sides and both imperials and rebels declared it an enemy. Several brave rebel pilots including Jax, Stu, Gus and Don went after him. They chased him down to a planet. There the phantom killed Gus. Jax then captured him. Jax returned him to a rebel cruiser. Stu stayed there to stand guard while the other now joined by Mira (Gus’s sister) are fighting a loosing battle against the imperials. Jax and Nekx try a daring assault on a lancer frigate. They succeed in stealing co-ordinates to the rebel base and something else … they lured the lancer into a asteroid field where it was damaged and thought destroyed. A fleet of rebel cruisers turned up and they succeeded in destroying the other star destroyers. Jax returns to a cruiser where he is told the phantom escaped using Stu’s firespray ship. Jax vowed to find him….

 

In the period between the phantom mission and this story the lancer, neither side discovered frigate. It crashed on a planet and most of the crew were killed. Jax has fought more battles for the Rebels and now he thinks he has tracked down the phantom on a planet near where they did battle. Little does Jax know that the planet is where the lancer crashed and small imperial base has been set up. With only a small band of rebel soldiers with him he lands on the planet not knowing what to expect. He soon discovers the base and has come under attack by imperial soldiers. The rebels are out numbered.

 

Rules: You can either be a rebel solider or imperial soldier. Not the phantom.

No controlling other people's players. Make is somewhat realistic, yes we all know star wars is far from realistic but even star wars has its limits. Each faction has these available players;

 

Rebels: Pilot (ground craft only ie speeders) Sniper, Foot Solider, Heavy weapons specialist

 

Imperials: Storm trooper, scout trooper, pilots (AT-AT and AT-ST) imperial officer, dark trooper

 

 

Rebels: One shuttle

Two Combat speeders

Five Speeder Bikes

 

Imperials: One AT-AT

Three AT-ST (two of which are lightly damaged)

Ten Speeder Bikes

 

Also fill out this info:

(Example)

Name: Bob

Age: 23

Faction: Rebels

Class: Sniper

Weapons: Custom sniper rifle, 4 grenades

Strengths: good eye sight

Weakness: bad pilot

Bio: Bob learnt how to use a gun when he was 5. Ever since then he has dreamed to join the alliance….

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Name: Jax Polara

Age: 25

Faction: Rebels

Class: Foot Soldier

Weapons: Blaster Rifle, Blaster Pistol, Bowcaster, 6 grenades

Strengths: Good Pilot, Good aim

Weakness: Friends, past

Bio: Jax had been a pilot for the rebels for years. He was once part of the legendary viper squadron. When it was destroyed he became Blue Leader. He led a small group of rebels against the imperials during the phantom mission. He is leading a small group of rebels on a forested planet. He is there to find his friend Stu and the phantom.

 

 

 

please feel free to join the story....

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i will start the story off....

 

Jax crouched behind a large boulder. The imperials had spotted them and had been relenlessly bombarding them with fire power. Jax had no idea that the imperials had a base here, when he had run the scan it indicated life but no imperial presence. Jax gripped his blaster rifle tightly. he signalled to a sniper to take out the person on the cannon on the hill above. The sniper nodded and proceeded to a vantage point

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Name: Mira

Age: 23

Faction: Rebels

Class: Special Ops Sniper

Weapons: Modified S2-AM Sniper Rifle with Night Vision Scope, A med kit

Strengths: Almost Perfect Accuracy, Can See in the dark

Weakness: Cant pilot any ground vehicles or use explosives

 

Mira crounched ontop of the hill, her reticule over the head of a troop.

She keyed a comm. channel and whispered.

"Jax, This is Mira, Im above your position and ready to kill. Tell me when to start...

What the... AHH! *Loud Bang"

 

Mira woke up. Her eyes slowly adjusted

to the darkness. The only lights were the light from the guard's helmet lights and the occasional blinking of a red light in the corner of the room. The guards had their backs to Mira. She tried to get up, but an energy grip had here feet and hands tied.

A man in a robe and had a Red Lightsaber ignited. It was almost touching her throat.

She looked around the room and noticed a face... a familiar face.. it was... No.. It... it... it was Gus!

He wasn't dead! He must've been captured. Besides, if the Imperials knew his secret, they wouldn't have killed him. Mira knew where she was. an underground holding facility. the one right underneath the base. Oh no... Jax and his team are going to destroy the base! But Jax didn't know of Mira or Gus being here. she had to tell Jax!

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Jax heard nothing but the storm trooper behind the cannon had fallen. He looked towards the sniper and the sniper nodded. Jax ran forwards to take the cannon. He jumped in and slowly he began to turn it around to face the imperials. He was being shot at but he had a feeling the imperials didn't want to dammage the gun in the case they could re-capture it. Jax opened fire on the hill.

 

He had lost contact with Mira a few minutes ago. He had no idea what had happened to her. He knew she was attempting to take the base from the east. He had lost contact with her and the others. Don was attacking from the west. It appeared that Don was having the most luck. Don had decided to take a few speeder bikes and make a quick assualt. It had worked the imperials had no time to react and Don had taken the west bunker.

 

Jax did not want to continue firing on the hill just in case Mira had been captured and taken there. He stopped firing

 

"why did you stop?" asked his younger Cousin Nekx

"I don't know where Mira is" jax replied simply

"oh..."

a few moments pause

"well you shouldn't just assume she has been....you know"

"yes well i don't want..."

another pause

Jax's tracker beeped. It had picked up something

"wait here, carlson come with me"

Jax wandered off through the undergrwoth until he came to a clearing the clearing and there in the middle was

"Stu's Ship" Jax mumbled

"I knew he was down here, but the question is where is he?"

Jax boarded the ship. He searched it quickly. It had been abondened for a while, possibly months. Jax took ammo and suplies. He got back out and told carlson to take the supplies back to Nekx and then return. Jax stoon alone for a brief moment. then a noise behind him made his turn around. He had sworn he had heard....something...like the swish of a cloak. he raised his rifle...

"what is it?" asked carlson as he returned

"nothing...i just thought i heard something"

Jax lowered his rifle.

"come on we have to keep moving"

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Name: Renae Uleravannasipanatsea-Jihih

Age: 29

Faction: Galactic Empire

Class: Scoutrooper

Weapons: Sniper rifle, hold out blaster, three grenades

Strengths: Fair eye sight, steady hands, good precision, cunning, fast run

Weaknesses: poor pilot skills (except scout-vehicles), heavy armor and weapons

Bio: Sergeant Renae is a great sniper that always knows his enemies well. He has found himself to be a sniper and a sergeant for the Empire, and a very good one. Now a straggler on a forest-type planet, he must do what he must to survive. He's also well aware of the presence of all the Rebels and the so-called 'Phantom.'

 

 

 

 

Sergeant Renae Uleravannasipanatsea-Jihih stood outside of what was being the holding blocks beneath the base for a few captured Rebels. His white armor was barely even seen, little light flowed through the room outside of the holding area as it was underneath a large structure.

 

Two stormtroopers walked in as requested and took up guard at the door. "Thank you, CF 390." He said, nodded, and then left the room through the hallway which the only source of light was flowing through. He held his holdout blaster pistol to his side, you never know when a weird creature may jump out and attack you. Afterall, this was a quickly-placed base. Nothing like one of those pre-fabricated garrison bases that a star destroyer carries.

 

"Corporal Fejia, how's everything been going up here?" Renae asked a young scoutrooper, maybe not even out of his teens.

 

"Not too well, sir. We've held them off, but the only stormtroopers we have seem to be dead or inside the base itself." Fejia answered.

 

"Indeed. Okay, well, since we have no command over the soldiers, then we must do our part to protect both our personnel and the base. C'mon, come with me," he said.

 

Fejia followed Renae as they came over to the west (bunker) of the base. This was the weapons armory and vehicles repair shop. Three 74-Z speeder bikes lay outside of the bunker. The others were probably with their controlling scout, which should be on sniping duty. Precisely what Renae and Fejia would be doing.

 

"Hop on Corporal, it's time for some fun," he said, Fejia and Renae both getting on their speeders.

 

The engines started up and the speeders flew away from the base and into part of the forest.

 

(Sorry I had to end it, I've got to go to school. I'll be back around 4:00 PM Central timing.)

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Jax and carlson continued to look for mira. Jax knew where the group of rebel soliders were heading and he knew where they would be now if anthing had gone wrong. Jax stumbled over a tree root and he heard a muffled voice say

"get ready"

Jax stopped he raised his rifle

"This Is Jax polara who's there?"

Some rebel soliders stepped out

"sorry Jax but we didn't know-"

"Have you seen Mira Kenobi?" Jax said cutting in

"No we lost trace of her about and hour ago. She said she was going to take out the sniper on the ridge over there. But he is still there so we don't know what happened to her, there is no body"

"Right...well-"

Jax's Comm-link buzzed

"Jax we need you back here ASAP"

"Copy that Nekx, Well keep an eye out if you find anything, anything at all contact me, ok?"

"ok, will do Jax and good luck"

"you too"

Jax turned around but stopped and listened

"what is it?"

Jax held up a finger to silence the soldier

There was a loud crashing

Jax turned and sprinted to a mound. He flund him self on top of it and with drew some binoculars. What he saw made his heart skip a beat. AT-ST was carving it's way towards them. It didn't look like it had seen them.

Jax ran back to the soliders

"Chicken Walker" Jax wispered

A young solider turned pale, the others followed suit.

"w-what are we gunna do?"

"stay down and stay away, stick to the treches and ditches if you can and keep low"

Jax turned to leave but again he stopped. He looked at the young soldier, he looked absolutly terrified. Jax out his hand on the boy's shoulder.

"you'll do fine"

He turned and made his way back towards Nekx position which took a surprisingly short time. Jax slumped next to his counsin and said

"what's the situation"

Nekx lay silent

"Nekx?"

Jax shook him, Nekx seemed to come back to reality

"d-d-d-doggy walkers"

Jax froze, the speeder he did have would be no match for an AT-AT.

"ok...well-"

The AT-AT stopped. And all hell broke loose...

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Trees broke under the furious fire power of the AT-AT. Jax was thrown from behind the rock and landed heavily in a ditch. The AT-AT destroyed the cannon they had captured which thankfully no one had manned. Jax yelled...

"Hit the deck!"

He did not know if any one heard him becase the AT-AT fired towards Jax's location. Jax put his hands over his head as a tree quaked and fell on top of him. Thank fully the ditch stopped the tree killing him but Jax was trapped. He heard Nekx jump into the ditch.

"Jax?"

"Im under the tree" Jax yelled

The AT-AT fired another deadly shot towards them.Jax heard a scream.

"Nekx? Gte me out of here!"

"im trying!"

Nekx managed to make a small hole and Jax clambered through. Jax crouched and saw the monster raining death down on their position. It had seen them. Jax calmbered out of the ditch Nekx did too but....

*EXPLOSION*

Jax fell to the floor and looked back Nekx had not been hit thankfully but he almost been cut in two by a tree. Jax ran for his life nekx close behind him. The AT-AT fired again and Jax managed to fling himself behind a large boulder. Nekx hit the deck. Jax staggered towards Nekx he looked terrified but shook his head. Jax stared at Nekx then Nekx jolted backwards. A small trickle of blood came out of his mouth, he managed to whipser "sniper" then his head hit the floor. He was dead....

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Mira saw Gus open his mouth out of the corner of her eye, she knew what he was about to do.

She concentrating on her eyesite so she wouldn't be able to hear anything.

Gus screamed. the Screech was so loud that the base shook, the guards fell to the floor and Mira and Gus's binds exploded into crystal shards. Gus got up, grabbed some equipment and ran. Mira followed. Gus trickled off of Gus's cheek. he had been hurt badly. They stopped, and Gus opened fire on a Trooper, His aim was amazing! At least 20x better than her's! And she almost NEVER missed a target's head. They ran on and came to a latter. Gus whent up first. he stopped and signalled to Mira to stay put. She heard Blaster Fire, and a body hit the floor. she climbed up the ladder and followed Gus to an observation tower. An AT-At caused hell in the distance, Mira thought she could see the faint outlnie of two Rebels in the distance, One seemed dead, and the other seemed angry. The AT-AT fired at the tower, Gus and Mira dropped down the ladder just in time, rubble fell intio the base and the roof caved started to break. Mira and Gus ran athrough a hallway and took a left, there, to Mira's horror, was a Dark Jedi.... Gus opened fire and yelled to Mira.

"GO!"

Mira ran. she ran out a hole in the wall and saw Jax and his cousin in the distance. She ran towards them, but the AT-AT fired at her twice, She managed to make it to Jax's position, but she was badly injured.

"Jax are you o-"

Nekx was dead.

She turned around in time to see the base fall apart. Gus had to be dead.... It'd take some kind of miracle to- But no, Gus walked out through the hole, and behind him, where two Dark Jedis, they weren't dead, they were paralyzed, Gus dragged the two to where Mira stood.

"Gus, how did you....?"

Mira looked towards the AT-At and saw her life flashing before her eyes.

She fell to the ground, unconciouss.

 

Mira stood up, she looked around, but no one was around. the AT-AT, Jax, Gus, They were gone. She turned around. She could've sworn she heard the swish of a cloak. The, she saw him, It was Stu, wearing a black cloak. But wait.... Stu.... Mira thouht...

 

"Mira?"

"Are you okay?''

Mira awoke.

Gus hovered over her, he looked frightened.

"Mira, are you...."

*Explosion*

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Jax sat by a tree, staring at his knees. He did not want to look up he did not want to see his cousin. he did not want to feel anything. He kept his head down. Jax had killed the sniper that had taken his cousin. He had jumped up anger flooding through his veins. He had dodged fire from the AT-AT and the sniper. when he reached the sniper he punched him so hard he had broken his hand. Jax had continued to pumel the snipe's head into the ground. He finally kicked the sniper in the gut and then shot his body to peices.

 

When he saw Mira he did not no if it was real and when he had seen Gus he was sure he was dreaming. But it was no dream. Jax had grabbed something in his pocket he had fogoton about but he still caried it where ever he went. If Gus was...evil like he had suspected he would have to kill him and he only knew one way to kill a jedi or sith. A blaster wouldn't do it that was for sure.

 

Jax heard the explosion but did not move.

"He's really gone isn't he?" he asked Carlson

"Im afraid so Jax" Carlson sat next to Jax

"Look...i know you hurt...but we need you"

"Ok...just give me a moment"

*Explosion*

Jax ran towards Mira and Gus without even glancing at Gus he passed them and ran towards the explosion

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(Oh, sorry about timing. My mother and I had some problems with other people's driving skills. So we're late getting back. Here I go. :p )

 

Renae and Fejia watched the Rebels run helplessly from the AT-AT. At last, they finally made it away. Hysterical if you asked them. But now they were in position high above in the forest where they could see everyone and everything. Armed with high-powered and precision sniper rifles, the two scoutroopers fired automatically at random targets. Or, say, random and helpless Rebellious scum. Their macro-binocular viewplate really came in handy when observing Rebels. It was funny. No one knew of their presence on the forest peek, which gave them an immense advantage.

 

Watching the sniper way below and infront of them get beat to death was certainly entertaining. It was too bad he didn't have his rifle with him at the time of the beating of that sniper. A bummer. Oh well, next time the Rebel would die.

 

(Okay, I know... horrible and short, but oh well.)

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Gus stopped Mira from running after JAx.

"Let him go, he wants to avenege his cousin's death.

"But wh-"

Gus interupted.

"Shh, Look up there."

Gus pointed to a cliff where two Imperial Marksman stood.

Gus didn't want to kill them. he wanted to interigate them.

He shot a bullet right past one's head and he and Mira ran towards the cliff.

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Jax stared ahead of him, awear that mira was following. Jax had enough, He was tired of loosing friends to the empire, he was tired of seeing people blown out of existance and he was tired of risking his life for nothing. He grabbed the thing in his pocket. He'd show them, he'd show them all what he was capable of. But he heard Mira draw closer and put it back in his pocket. His grabbed his rifle and slid into a seat of a combat speeder. He started it up and sped away. he was going to meet Don then they could end this...

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(Don)

 

Don zoomed twards the target. The socut had seen them and was running back. Although a lot fater on the speeder bike Don did not have as mutch freedom as the scout. Ih he wanted to he could easily hide and then run in a different direction, whihc is what he kept doing. Don how ever using his piloting skills had him in his sights most of the time. Don fired and the scout hit the deck. Don jumped off and ran towards him. He rasied his pistol but he didn't need to. he was already dead.

 

Don wiped his forehead and sat down. He had lost contact with Jax and Mira. An EMP had been let off near their position. They did not know if it was an accident or on purpose. They had encountered a AT-ST which had been damaged and easily destroyed. They had alos managed to capture one and it was now roaming around somewhere. Dave aporached Don

"Don we should really start moving that explosion a few moments ago came from the south, where Jax is"

"I know"

"right well....when your ready"

"yeah Im ready"

Don got up, he heard a noise behind him but when he turned he was knocked unconcious but someone....or something....

 

 

(Jax)

Jax was lying on the floor a few feet away from the wrecked speeder. Something had shot him. He had seen a glint of something and then was thrown through the air.

The phantom was standing a few feet away staring down at Jax.

"So you decided to come find me"

Jax was bleeding from a gash above his eye and hand was broken and it felt like his leg was too but he stood up.

"I vowed to capture you"

"ah...but it I who have captured you" He raised his wrist and a length of wire spun aorund Jax's arms and legs, he over balanaced and fell hard to the ground.

"Oh your tough arn't you killing me when Im down" Jax yelled as the Phantom raised his gun

"remember Im a bounty Hunter my job is to kill people one way or another"

Jax grabed his pocket and ignited it.

He sliced through the wire and knocked the bounty hunter off his feet. He sliced the gun in half and stared down at the phantom

"wait...scans didn't say you were a jedi" he said shocked

"well scans don't tell you everything" Jax spat at the phantom

He moved the blue tip of the blade towards the phantoms's throat

"Now tell me, where is my friend Stu?"

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(Dude, Metal Gear rocks! Mother Russia will rise again... :) (isn't russian, but they're cool. They've got AKs, and stuff. The RPK...))

 

"Sir, there's one coming on from the left. He's seen us!" Corporal Fejia stated.

 

Sgt. Renae quickly put his rifle down and unleashed his pistol, 'Little Emperor.' The Rebel coming up the cliff was more stupid than any. Trying to run straight up. What an idiot..., he thought. Before anyone could shoot, about everyone fell down by the sudden appearance of an AT-AT. It was straight infront of the Rebel group, which were all on their knees.

 

"Fejia, now, take the speeder. I'll be right behind you." Renae said.

 

"As you wish, sir."

 

The brown military speeder bike sped away, doing zig-zags and all (OH YEAH, AC/DC!). With Fejia gone, and the Rebels on their knees, Sgt. Renae had the perfect chance to attack. He walked towards the edge, but the Rebel wasn't there.

 

"Blast!" he yells as the idiotic Rebel charges him.

 

Renae gets knocked down, but still has a good grip of his blaster. He stands up with some pain from his legs, and then fires two shots at the Rebel. They hit him, yes, but apparently did just about nothing. "Alright, it's time to run. Arrrrraaaggghhh!!"

 

Charging towards the Rebel, which just now turns around, he quickly falls to the ground as he trip-kicks the Rebel. Then, he stands back up, gets his sniper rifle, and mans the speeder bike. Then zooooooom and he's gone. Now they have to deal with the AT-AT.

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Jax stared down at the bounty hunter with pure hatred

"where is Stu" He repeated

"I don't know"

Jax moved the blad closer

"I don't know, he stowed away on my ship, when I landed here he ambushed me i fought him off but I managed to loose him in the forrest, I havn't seen him since"

Jax did not move the blade

"I have a hunch how ever"

"And why should i believe you?" Jax asked

The Phantom looked up at Jax and then took his helmet off.

Jax saw his own bruised and bloody face

"what you see is a progection"

He pushed a button on his chest armour

"It's a tactical plan to shock the enemy"

His face flickered and Jax's face was replaced by a young face that looked like it had aged in a short time. Jax stared

"...you"

"Me"

Jax knew this man. He had been part of the rebel alliance. He desighned ships, his name was bruce, he had desighned Jax's B wing fighter.

"you...youre the phantom?"

"yes"

"But....why?"

"well you know the rebels classed me as a traitor when that cruiser blew up carrying the ship i had jst desighned. They said it was too mutch of a coincadence so they tried to get me, so i did the only sensible thing, I ran"

"But you....destroyed one of the star destroyers"

"Oh don't get me wrong I still hate the empire but the rebel alliance turned their backs on me and I will never forgive them. So I became a bounty Hunter named "The Phantom". Now tell Me Jax how did you become a jedi"

"Im not" Jax said simply

"you're not? then why the lightsaber?"

"a friend gave it to me"

"a friend?"

"Yes, i knew Jedi he gave me this. AND THE YOU KILLED HIM!" Jax added

"Hmmmmm was he on the rebel cruiser, The Avias?"

"yes"

"well he was about to tell you who I was, I couodn't have that"

"but...how did you know?"

"i have my sources, I intercepted the rebel and imperial comm. link chanels and listened in to everything"

"i see, so where is Stu?"

"I assume the imperials caught him"

"oh yes and how come there is an imperial base here?"

"The Lancer that you drove into the asteroid field crashed here a few weeks ago. they have built several look out post and one main base somewhere to the west"

Jax lowered the lightsaber

"Where is this base?"

"I will show you if you promise to let me go after wards" He said

"I promise nothing"

Jax raised the saber again

"You are in no situation to try and bargain with me bounty hunter"

"fine kill me here then you will never find your friend"

Jax laughed

"Bad luck, Bruce, but you have just told me where he is"

The bounty hunter did not laugh

"I did not, i merly said there was a main base to the west, under neath that base there are tunnels that go on for miles"

"how-"

"I was captured you see and i escaped"

"oh"

Jax considered him for a moment and pulled him up

"Thank you Jax, and i will remind you not to call me Bruce"

"that is your name, is it not?"

"It was" He said simply

Jax turned his lightsaber off but kept a firm grip on it.

"Follow me" said the bounty hunter

and jax followed him, to where he did not know...

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They walked for miles. They walked in silence until they could see a huge wreck ahead.

Jax and Bruce stopped. They had a quick look around beofre going into the wreck and scavaging anything they would find useful. There wasn't mutch there. Jax had suspected anything of value would have been taken.

They left empty handed.

"The base is not far now" Bruce mumbled

Jax kept a hand on his saber and his eyes on bruce. In the distance they sould hear fighting. It seemed that Don had managed to infiltrate the base becuase the cries were coming from inside the wall of a huge ruined city. In looked anciant. They slipped in un-detected.The city was enourmous. It was like moss eisley space port on Tatooine.They soon found out the cries were not being made by rebels attacking imperials or the other way around. The city looked like it had been attacked by some huge monster like a rancor but bigger....mutch bigger. Bruce stopped and so did Jax. The ginat monster was being shot at by storm troopers. It was slightly larger than a AT-ST but it had increable power. It threw aside men, guns, speeder bikes and even a AT-ST. It thre the AT-ST towards where Jax and Bruce stood hidden.

Bruce turned and loaded his two pistols

"this will be fun"

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(come on guys post....please)

 

Bruce took a step forward nad then turned quickly and punched Jax in the head. Jax fell, shocked, to the floor. Bruce then kicked him in the hand. His already broken hand cracked and Jax yelled out. The stormtroopers looked over at them and pointed. The rancor saw them, made up it's tiny mind and walked towards them. Bruce turned and switched on his jet pack. he f;ew around the beasts head and shot at it. He was like a fly to the rancor. It simply struck at him and he went flying into a wall. Bruce bounced off the wall and landed heavily on the floor near Jax. Jax ran, withdrew his lightsaber, ignited it and was about to stab bruce when the rancor knocked him aside. It must have thought he was a rival for his meal. But jax had managed to clip the Bruce's jet pack. Bruce turned to see the rancor roar at Jax and then turn it's head to bruce. who hadn;t realised what jax had done. He pushed a button in his glove which was suppose to activate the jet pack. It fizzled and bruce rose about 2 feet then fell to the ground. He looked at his jet pack. he tried again this time nothing.

"Oh shi-"

The rancor granned him. Bruce Screamed the rancor tore him in half and then ate him

Jax thought he would throw up but he didn't. He ran around a corner and dived into a small house. He sat there shaking. and listened as the rancor walked away. Jax sat up and gripped his lightsaber. His comm sudenly buzzed.

"Jax this is....admiral....Gri... there has.....be...star....-stoyer head...and.....wea...pon....Get out!"

Jax barly heard what was said. He had no way of getting off this planet. The shuttle was miles away. He had to radio Don

"Don you hear that?"

"yeah...what do we do?"

"gather the survivors and take them back to the shuttle ASAP...then re-group with the alliance. Make sure you land on a ship with fighters...preferably our fighters"

"got that...and what about you?"

"i'll figure something out....and Don.....take...Nekx body back...please"

"Sure...good luck boss"

Jax was about to say what he always said when someone called him boss. But stopped

"thanks Don"

Don wondered why this had struck so much fear into Jax's heart. He didn't know if he should take it seriously or not. Don turned and told his men to retreat.

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(Favoring Wedge now, JediOfDoom? I was waiting for Renegade Angel. I thought he would've posted. Man, this really bums. When I was his age I had all the time I wanted and I still do. Crazy crap. Anyways, let's kick butt. I mean, shall I kick butt? :) )

 

 

Renae came to a sudden stop on his speeder as he met up with corporal Fejia. They had just escaped some crazy Rebel, more insane that any he's seen before. No, this Rebel was a monster. He'll have to let his leading officer know of the situation. Or, actually, he's probably already dead thanks to the AT-AT.

"Fejia, report," he demanded.

"Sir, the Rebels three hundred meters north of here are gathering together. They appear to be retreating away from the base." Fejia reported.

"Strange. They almost never go into a retreation method."

"Yes, but they are now. Should we get on the move again, sergeant?"

"Absolutely, we should find a transport. We'll need something that's small and will be fast."

"Where exactly will we be going?"

"To the Emperor's Servant."

"What!?"

"You heard. Alright, let's go."

 

 

(I'll tell you right now, this thread's topic says Phantom: The Revenge. I originally took it as the Empire's revenge, so far that's all that has been happening, and that's all that's going to happen. It's my revenge. I'm tired of your pitiful last milisecond and quick escapes. You will not survive throughout this one, my dear friend. Mira will betray you, Stu will die, and you will be put under life-long heavy survailance aboard the Emperor's Servant.)

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(Indeed?!?!)

 

Jax started to run. where he did not know. He had a plan lodged in his brain. He had to get back to Gus. He had to get out of here. what was this weapon? why did he feel sudenly cold? why was that snake yellow? wait a yellow snake? jax turned. A strip of yellow jump suit was on the ground. was it stu's? Jax did not know. He kept running and running. He eventually found him self at the AT-AT. It was motion-less. Jax heard something...the shuttle had taken off. Jax knew he was help-less....unless....he ran back to the clearing. The Firespray ship. He ran aboard. He had no idea how stu could ever faver this peice of junk. He started it. and when he did he heard something...something...strange...a scream. He had no idea where it was coming from...it seemed to be in his head. It screamed louder and louder. The ramp closed and the ship set off. His head ringed with the sound. He stumbled. He managed to plot a coarse...then he fell. his lightsaber glowed and then flickered. Jax eyes opened his eys and he saw the hatred and fear that he had felt for years. Jax could not think straight he stumbled and blacked out

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Gus was angry. He knew where Jax was, he knew he'd left them on this wasteland they called a planet. He and Mira were stranded. Alone. There was no one else. Suddenly, A loud scream came from nowhere.

"Whos there!?" yelled Gus

The screams came closer and closer. Gus saw Mira trembling. Gus held up his rifle with one hand and pushed Mira onto the ground with the other/

"Stay Low."

Gus swept his gun but found no one. Gus kneeled down next to Mira.

"Gus, What was that."

"I dont know, but I think it st-"

There it was again. Gus felt a chill in the air. He could smell blood in the air. Gus heard another scream, louder this time, he turned as he heard a body hit the ground. Mira was still alive. He looked around some more and saw a bloody corpse in the distance. It was a Rebel Soldier. The corpse stood up, barely and mover towards them. It stopped and fell to the ground. Gus got up and ran towards the man.

"Gus!"

"Stay Here Mira!"

Gus kneelded down beside the amn and rolled him over.

The mans- or the things- eyes were glowing dark red, a few bullet holes were in his chest, and bloody fangs hung down from his mouth.

Gus was face-to-face with a Force Ghost.

Gus heard another scream and then he fell to the ground as he saw the force ghost smile and laugh evilly.

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The ship carrying Jax floated in space. The engines had cut out and oxygen was low. Jax lay unconcious on the floor but was starting to stir. He sat up a ringing in his ears. He rubbed his eyes. His lightsaber was ignited. The blue blade had gone. it had been replaced by a red one. Jax reached for it to turn it off. As soon as he touched the hilt he got a shock. where the saber had been in his hand an angry red mark was left. It burned. Jax winced and kicked the saber off. He then say on the piltos seat and looked at the controls. Red lights were flashing. The engines were dead and Oxygen was low. He surveyed the control panel and then kicked it in frustration. Something told him that Gus and Mira were still on the planet he had left. Don had not got them. He was angry. He focused as hard as he could. He knew Jedi's could use telekinesis. He thought at one point he heard Don's voice but he doubted it. His comm link had died and hwas on his own. The radar beeped. Jax glanced at it. A small fighter was coming. maybe he could somehow board it? he looked in the comparments. Yes there was a space suit he could use. He put it on and put a cord attatching hims self to the ship. He grabbed his lightsaber. With gloves on he did not get shocked but he felt a tingling sensation in his fingers. He opened the air lock and jumped out. He looked around. He could clearly see a Tie fighter of some sought coming his way. It kept coming. It stopped. He managed to propel himself. towards it. It was empty. Strange. Jax got in and the hatch closed. He took control and turned the ship around. sudenly a shcok ran through his body and he blacked out again.The Tie turned and headed back towards the Emperor's Servant

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(i kinda need seb to post here cus he's the emperors servant person here so im gunna use Don)

 

The shuttle docked with the rebel cruiser "Ghost Town" ironically named as it was one of the biggest cruisers the alliance had and could carry more people than most cruisers. Don had waited on the planet for Gus and Mira but he could not contact them. When an AT-ST turned up Don had got them out. Dave would return with a bigger force. Don was gearing up. He knew Jax was in trouble he just knew it. He was going to send Carlson and Dave down to help Gus and Mira but he himself was going after Jax. true to his word he has returned Nekx's body. He knew something was wrong with Jax. Jax had freaked out when he heard the name "emperors servant"...why? Don didn't know. Befpre he left the hanger he went to the bridge and asked the captain if "emperors servant" meant anything to him. He turned pale but said a little too firmly "no, never". So Don set of to the hanger and met Dave and Carlson gearing up the shuttle. They looked worried but wished him luck. Don got into his A wing fighter. He normally flew a B wing but he needed speed. Also his B wing did not have 2 seats. His A wing he had made himself with some help from Jax. It was longer than the average A wing and was more protected. It's armour was stronger and it was also faster. It also had a gun like a standar Y wing on the top which could swivel 360* which could be used by the co-pilot. He jumped in and started it up. He hadn't flown her for a while put he patted the controls lovingly and flew out of the hanger. Don had a lock on Stu's ship. The rebels had stored tracking devices on some of their ship such as Stu's firespray and the shuttles. Don put on a burst of speed and disapeared from the view of the rebel cruiser....

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