Renegade Angel Posted September 27, 2005 Author Share Posted September 27, 2005 (( We should fall in love? Did you type something wrong or do you like Kait? )) "The Weapon....." Gus rememberd his years as an Imperial. They mentioned a weapon so powerful, it could destroy an entire Galaxy. "RETREAT!!!" Gus yelled over the intercom "A bomb!" It was too late, Rebel fighters started attacking.... The Imperials would defeat them once and for all.... He ignored these thoughts and jumped into Kaitlyn's ship. She looked... dead... Her face was scratched and bloody... Someone tried to hi-jack her ship... the contriol panel was demolished. He graabed her around the waist and pulled her into his ship. He need to stop the Imperials, and fast. "Retreat! The Imperials have an ''ultimate weapon"... A bomb... a huge, warp bomb." (( if this isn't what you were planning on, just make the other thing come intot he story too. )) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jediofdoom Posted September 27, 2005 Share Posted September 27, 2005 (sorry about that was a typo, and Jax assumes you have fallen for her. Yeah it's a good idea i was also put something else in but it's a secret...) Jax stared, a weapon? then he remembered "get....out.....a....weapon!" the message he received on planet x. "This is Viper Squadron, all ships fall back do not attack the star destroyers" "Copy that V-4" said the other group leaders in unison. They all fell back. "wait....whats that?" said Orange Leader "Oh god...Gus! what is he doing?" jax said stunned Jax raced after him but suddenly a star destroyer emerged from a riff in space. Jax froze. the ship...it was....it made the emeperprs servant look tiny. It was massive. "the emperors slave" said Rezillo stunned "I heard about it....aparently thats the ship that the dark lord....well is on" Jax felt a pouding in his throat. This was it.... (on the planet x the imperials have retreated and taken to space the rebels are in hot persuit and come to rest inside the shield, i would write about it, but i cant be bothered) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renegade Angel Posted September 27, 2005 Author Share Posted September 27, 2005 (( K, Cool )) Gus raced towards the Emporer's Slave, he knew that bomb on board would kill them all. He ran up alongside it, dodging turret shots and rockets. He had to be careful, he didn't want Kaitlyn to be killed because he was stuid enought to take on a Mile long Star Destroyer. He dropped a rocket on it. It left a small amunt of damage on the shields. Thsi would take too long, he had to retreat. He sped towards Jax, dodging shots. He stopped alongside Viper Squad. "Listen Jax, We have to do something quick, that bomb will ex-" He stopped. He just realized Kaitlyn was awake, in the Co-Pilot's seat. "Hi" She said "HI!? What happened to you back there!?" She resorted to one thing. She kissed him on th elips and he stopped talking. It was like her weapon, she kissed him and he shut up. His heart raced and his cheeks blushed. "Jax, What's the plan?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jediofdoom Posted September 27, 2005 Share Posted September 27, 2005 Jax, thought. "To be honest Gus i have no idea, This is beyonf anything i've ever handled" "jax we have to get onbaord and deactivate the bomb" said Rezillo Jax thought again "Ok Gus, Stu, Viper squadron, follow me, Orange and Red Leader cover our approach we are going in" Jax raced off towards the emperors slave. It had so many hangers... "That one" said rezillo "that will get us closest to the bridge and the emperors chambers" They dodge turret fire. The ray shiled over the hanger was on but Jax knew how to deal with that he shot at the generator it exploded. The shield went down and the metal shield was coming out Jax and the other managed to get in. "Jay hack into the controls and make sure that ray shield goes back up, i dont want to have to run around while we look for a way out" Jax jumped out of his B wing and got out is lightsabers he threw one to rezillo who ignited it and they defelcted shots back at the strom troopers. "Got it!" jay yelled The metal shield slid back and the ray shield replaced it "ok guys lets split up, me, Rezillo, Gus and Kaitilyn will look for the emperor" "and the officer in charge of weapons, without him there will be not more bombs like this" said Rezillo "right, Ok so me and rezillo will go after the emperors and Gus and Kaitalyn will go after the officer and the others go to the bridge and find where the bomb is, we will meet you there, Stu you still got that inter comm i gave you?" Jax said as he turned to leave Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renegade Angel Posted September 27, 2005 Author Share Posted September 27, 2005 Gus ignited his saber while Kaitlyn took out an old blade with strange markings. He recognized it immediatly. The blade of a jedi in training. "You're a-" Kaitlyn nodded. "Lets go" We heade towards the door but more troops arrived. Kaitlyn and I chucked grenades until the last soldier was killed. They advanced down the hallway. The lights were flickering and the ship was creaking. Kaitlyn immediatky was frightened and grabbed Gus's hand. He turned his head and smiled at her. "Its okay, We'll make it." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiStO-KiT Posted September 28, 2005 Share Posted September 28, 2005 "Guys, Follow Rachels orders, im goin to help out Viper Squadron." Stu Flew down into the hangar with gus and Jax... "Stu you still got that inter comm i gave you?" Asked Jax "Yeah i do." Stu replied. A stormtrooper raced around a corner a stu fired at it. "Lets do what we gotta do." Stu said to them... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jediofdoom Posted September 28, 2005 Share Posted September 28, 2005 "right...let's go" Jax gritted his teeth and him and rezillo left. They walked in silence for a while until they came across a guard. He was dressed in a red robe, Jax recognised his as one of the emperors guards. He gripped an electro-stick that was buzzing softly. Jax and rezillo ignited their sabers. They stood there for a moment the guard seemed to be considering them. and then he attacked, jax blocked his attack and rezillo went for the kill. The guard hit the floor lifeless. Jax looked at Rezillo. "did we have to kill him?" "Yes...sorry i have to get used to not being....lets get moving" Rezillo lead the way. They came to a stop outside a chamber. "This is it, i expected more guards than this" They entered The room was large and dark. "I've been expecting you" i horse voice said The sith lord swivled in his chair "Rezillo, you will die for your treason...and jax you will become my servant" "never" Jax said softly The dark lord smiled. Rezillo face was passive, he showed no emotion. "lets go!" They ignited their sabers and moved forwards. The sith lord got up and ignited his lightsaber and laughed madly... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renegade Angel Posted September 28, 2005 Author Share Posted September 28, 2005 Gus and Kaitlyn ran into the room. The emporor was cackling and jax and rezillo got into battle position. I picked up a red saber off the ground and handed it to Kailtyn. we got into Jedi Ofeense stance and stood beside Jax and Rezillo. Kaitlyn was tense. she wouldn't do too well if she was this tense. The emporor withdrew a red saber and ignited it. He jumped into the air and immediatly dashed at Kaitlyn. He grabbed he arm and kicked her stomach. She felw backwards and hit the wall, grimacing in pain. "Kaitlyn!" Gus had to do it. he had to Force ascream. But he'd kill Jax, Rezillo, and Kaitlyn if he didn't grab them. He continiued to attack, still thinking up a plan. The emperor force pushed him ontot he floor, and Gus finally realized what he had to do. "Guys, Run!"If he succeded, he'd drain himself of nearly all energy, but if he didn't, they'd all die. another lose-lose situation. Or was it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jediofdoom Posted September 28, 2005 Share Posted September 28, 2005 Rezillo looked at Gus. and smiled. He force pushed him out throught the door way. He then turned to Kaitilyn. he force pushed her into Gus and he closed the door and sealed it. "No more distractions" Jax stared at Rezillo. Rezillo turned on him. "you..." "sorry my friend" Rezillo force pushed Jax into a wall. He was knocked out. "This is my fight, and mine alone" Rezillo stepped up to face the emperor.... (meanwhile) Kenny walked into the hanger on the "lawrence arm" He looked around. The pilots were milling around waiting. "what are you doing?" he asked one "waiting for the all clear" "oh..." Kenny walked over to his A wing "Permission to go out and scout sir "certainly not" Kenny looked down at the floor. how long would they have to wait? (im gunna do some posts using Rezillo later) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renegade Angel Posted September 28, 2005 Author Share Posted September 28, 2005 "UH!" Gus banged on the door until he cpuld n longer move. He sat down. it was getting cold and there wasn't much air left in the room. He was worried about Kaitlyn and Jax and Stu.... and Mira... she was at home. They sent her home after her battle and she retired from the Rebels. He missed her so much. When he got out of this place, he was going to kill Rezillo, whether Jax like it or not. No.... H eknew what was happening. Anger. Hate. Fear. His blood boiled and little jets of hate worked up in his mind. He had to escape and kill Rezillo. He had t- Gus fainted to the floor, barely able to breath. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jediofdoom Posted September 28, 2005 Share Posted September 28, 2005 Rezillo stared at the emperor. "well well, my old student has come to challenge me" "yes...I have!" "hmmmm i always knew you had too many links to the rebels to be a worthy aprentice so i brought you here to get me a new one" "what?" "Gus kenobi" "Him? But I have years of training!" "And? Gus has anger and hatred you do not and that will be his fall to the dark side" "Not if i can help it" "thats just it...YOU CAN'T!" The emperors ran at Rezillo. Rezillo was ready. He dodged. And rolled backwards. He picked up Jax's lightsaber and ignited it. Rezillo jumped up. "You will not win Rezillo, right now Gus Kenobi is plotting your downfall" "Gus? He is another matter. This is about you stealing my life!" Rezillo ran at the emperor who laughed. He used force lightning but Rezillo blocked it. "very good..." "You'll find im full of surprises" "I do know...i did teach you" "you taught me nothing but to hate...Jax has tought me about friendship and trust and that will be my weapon" The emperor yawned "that is very cliche" "maybe...but it's true" Rezillo could sense Gus's anger, He just hoped Gus wouldn't interfeir before he could finish the emperor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renegade Angel Posted September 28, 2005 Author Share Posted September 28, 2005 The door blew. Gus walked through the smoke, lightsaber ignited. His face was red and anger was flowing through his vains. He immediatly jumped intot he air and slashed at Rezillo. He missed. he slowly backed up and... Screamed. as loud as he could. Rezillo made his plan work. He moved the others out of harm's way. Perfect. he screamed louder and louder until metal and plaster fell from the ceiling. His destiny was about to be fullfilled, and he didn't even know it. (If you recall, his destiny was to become a Sith Lord, but Im going to change it to becoming a sith apprentice, then A lord) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jediofdoom Posted September 28, 2005 Share Posted September 28, 2005 Rezillo dodged. "Gus, you will not stand in my way. If i have to kill you I will" Rezillo rolled. "Gus, what Is your problem? Im trying to end this war!" Rezillo walked towards him "But if you decide to stand in my way, I will cut you down" Rezillo looked Gus in the eye "Gus...please don't stand in my way" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renegade Angel Posted September 28, 2005 Author Share Posted September 28, 2005 It was then Gus realized Rezillo wasn't the target. it was the emperor. Rezillo's death could wait. he looked at the emperor and weakenewd him with Force Grip. wait... I know Force grip? He thought. He backed up. "Good Luck" He turned around and ran, in search of Jax and Kaitlyn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jediofdoom Posted September 29, 2005 Share Posted September 29, 2005 Rezillo turned back to the emperor. "maybe your faith in his is misplaced" "maybe your doubt of the boy is misplaced" "your over confidence will be your downfall" "your faith in your friends is yours" Rezillo Lightsabers were ignited and pointed directly at the emperor. The emperor looked at him and smiled "goodbye.....Jedi" He jumped up and slahsed. Rezillo dodged it and struck at the emperor. He emperor blocked it. Rezillo used his other saber to attack but the emeror kicked his hand and his blue saber went flying. Jax was hit the fave with it. He stired. the saber was lying there. Jax picked it up. waiting.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiStO-KiT Posted September 29, 2005 Share Posted September 29, 2005 Stu seen his friends run off into a battle, he would have followed them but he did not have a lightsaber yet ,so Stu ran off down the other way, blasting any Stormtroopers that were near him, He picked up 4 Remote Mines.. "Hmm where is the ships main control room?" Stu said to himself. Stu looked at his comm-link.. "Gus,Jax,Rezillo,Kaitlyn, if you hear me finish what you gotta do quickly because im making my way to the main control room, Im going to Blow the ship up!" Stu ran past the Main Hangar.. he planted A Det-Pack on the rooms generator, He ran down to the engine bay and killed all the troopers, Picking up 2 more Det-Packs and planting them on the engine's control panel. Stu began the walk to the main control room.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jediofdoom Posted September 29, 2005 Share Posted September 29, 2005 Rezillo's comm buzzed. "Gus,Jax,Rezillo,Kaitlyn, if you hear me finish what you gotta do quickly because im making my way to the main control room, Im going to Blow the ship up!" The emperors smiled "so...that's yuor plan" "Stu? don't be idiotic if you blow the ship the warp bomb will blow with it!" "ahhh...so you know about the bomb too. Very good" "yeah and our guys are working to defuse it" "do what you like the bomb is just here as an excuse to get Gus on here. I made it so he sensed the bomb" "you...? But Gus..." "at this moment he is ploting mine and your downfall, he will be no match for me but he can kill you easily. and even if he does kill me, his journy to the dark side wil be complete!" The emperor laughed again and then used the force to take Rezillos remaining lightsaber. He force pushed Rezillo tot he floor near Jax. He walked closer. Rezillo could not move. The emperor raised his lightsaber "goodbye my old aprentice..." Jax threw the lightsaber to rezillo who caught it, ignited it and plunged it into the emperors chest. An ear splitting scream emitted from the emperor. He collapsed...dead. Rezillo was shaking. "Are you ok?" asked Jax "I've been better" Rezillo answered. Rezillo walked over to the emperor's coarpse and withdrew his lightsaber. and used the force to summon Jax's and threw it to him. "Sorry about knockin you out...but i had to" "I know" They looked at each other "Jax...i will be dead soon" "what? why?" "Gus will kill me" "no...he...can't...I dont believe it" But this was a lie. Jax had known that Gus was strange from the day he had met him. Gus had gone missing for months, almost a year and then just returned...but so had Rezillo. Rezillo had been gone for over 3 years but his absence had been explained....Gus's had not. Jax looked at Rezillo. "I will not let him kill you" he said simply Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renegade Angel Posted September 29, 2005 Author Share Posted September 29, 2005 It was then Gus realized he had been tricked. the meperor had wanted him here... but why? No... It couldn't.... H eknew why... But it didn't matter, Gus no longer senesed the darkness that he felt when he boarded the ship. The emperor was dead. He was still angry at Rezillo and he knew Jax wouldn't allow Gus to kill him. But he had to... No... He couldn't! He... he... He couldn't stop his destiny, the future couldn't be changed.... but no, maybe he was wrong... or maybe he was right. whatever he was, he knew he was sick and tired. his stomach ached and his forehead was burning... a fever perhaps. Kaitlyn. He realized she was sick, and when they kissed... Gus sighed and turned around, Rezillo knew where Kaitlyn was, maybe he and Jax could help him. He walked on down the hall, not noticing that he was being watched. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiStO-KiT Posted September 30, 2005 Share Posted September 30, 2005 Stu's Comm-Link buzzed.... Jax:"Stu? don't be idiotic if you blow the ship the warp bomb will blow with it!" "Fine then." Stu disabled the Det-Packs.. "im going to the bridge anyway." Stu ran down to the bridge, and killed the officers." Stu launched all but one of the escape pods.. "Jax,How long are your guys going to be defusing that bomb? because we need to destroy this thing once its defused." Stu ran down to his ship.. "R7, Fly it back to the 'Ghost Town'. i'm taking the escape pod,i have some un-finished business." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jediofdoom Posted September 30, 2005 Share Posted September 30, 2005 *over comm link* "Jax,How long are your guys going to be defusing that bomb? because we need to destroy this thing once its defused." "Stu we've finished our business with the emperor, im just waiting for a signal from don saying him and Jay have defused it" at that moment Don radiod through "Jax this bomb...it's tech is beyond anything i've ever seen before not even Jay can crack it...wait...somethings happening....it's coutning down....the-" The comm went dead. "we have to find them" Jax said to Rezillo who nodded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiStO-KiT Posted September 30, 2005 Share Posted September 30, 2005 Stu heard a message on the radio... Don:"Jax this bomb...it's tech is beyond anything i've ever seen before not even Jay can crack it...wait...somethings happening....it's coutning down....the-" "oh crap. i've gotta get to them before its to late." Stu called on the comm-link... "Jax,Rezillo, its Stu, We've got to find Don and Jay, the bombs gonna blow." Stu then decided to radio back to his ship and R7... "R7, i need you to bring the ship back i need your help." R7 returned and drove over to Stu... "R7, i need you to hack into the ships mainframe and find the bomb and Don and Jay." R7:"WooooOOat." R7 plugged into the ship and found Don,Jay and the bomb down in the bowels of the ship." "Jax, I've found their position,im sending you their position." "Lets go R7." (If the bowels of the ship were not where you wanted the bomb to be you can say and i'll change it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jediofdoom Posted September 30, 2005 Share Posted September 30, 2005 (no it's cool i think it makes it more interesting) "copy that Stu we're heading down there now" something stired... "kaitilyn?" It was not Kaitilyn, it was the emperor "you....Jax....you will become...his....and...he will...finish you both! his...hatred....she will not....survive....he will kill you..." his head hit the floor "who will not survive?" "I assumed he means Kaitilyn..." "Come on we've got to go and fins Don!" Rezillo said impatiently "o..k...lets go!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renegade Angel Posted September 30, 2005 Author Share Posted September 30, 2005 He geard footsteps. rezillo and Jax. He walked toward the soun donly to find the body of a woman. with red hair... and... and... Kailtyn! "NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" The footsteps. Rezillo. That son of a bitch killed her. Gus fell to his knees, crying. He picked up the saber and ignited it, still bawling. he but the tip of the blade against his chest, he was about to shove it in when he heard more ffotsteps and Rezillo an dJax appeared in front of him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jediofdoom Posted September 30, 2005 Share Posted September 30, 2005 Jax stopped and stared down at Gus. Rezillo looked away... "Gus, I'm sorry...the emperor...he..." Jax looked at Rezillo for some sought of support but found none "we're both....Gus, we have to find the bomb" Gus's saber was ignited, out of the corner of his eye Jax could see Rezillo gripping his...ready for a fight that Jax knew would come... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renegade Angel Posted September 30, 2005 Author Share Posted September 30, 2005 "You... You killed her." Gus thrashed at Rezillo and missed. he slashed at him agian and hit his face. a small drop of blood trickled down his face. "Damnit! DIE!" Gus used his Force Grip, but Rezillo escaped and backed away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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