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The remaining two ships continued to the landing zone. The Imperial fire was becoming more concentrated and accurate. Kenny was shooting all that he could see. The other ship was taking heavy fire. It got hit on the wing and spiraled down. It hit the ground with a thud and was immediately surrounded by imperilal soldiers. Kenny fired at them. He took a few of them out. Suddenly a Dark Trooper jet pakced onto the open ramp. He kicked Kenny in the face. Kenny bounced backwards. The trooper threw another solider out. He slid down the ramp yelling. The dark trooper then shot at a few more soliders. Kenny grabbed his electro staff but the dark trooper kicked it out of his hand. Kenny was fling into a wall. Kenny pushed the trooper away. The trooper backed off. Kenny grabbed a knife and threw it at the wall. It bounced off and hit the troopers jet pack which sparked. Kenny looked down at the machine gun. It was chained to the ramp. Kenny grabbed his electro staff and hit the chain. One of the sides gave and the machine gun slid down the ramp taking the dark trooper with it, but the dark trooper grabbed the end of the ramp. Kenny quickly pushed the button to close it. The trooper hung on. The dark trooper grabbed a thermal grenade and threw it insude and then let go. Kenny quickly pushed the emergency release for the ramp. It fell and kenny gabbed the grenade and threw it out. But it went off just before it got out. The ship jerked violently and was then hit by an AA gun. The ship crashed into a mountain. Kenny hit the back wall and blacked out...

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Don woke up in the medical bay. He was dimly awear that someone was there

"That was a nasty crash" said the man

"I know I'm surprised i made it" Don said sitting up

His vision was blurry. He could see the outline of a man in a cloak.

"How do you feel?" said the voice


"why's that?"

"Because my friend dissapeared"

"Oh and what friend is this?"

"Jax Polara"

"Oh him"

"what do you mean? him?"

"some say he was a bit of a fool to leave"

"don't you dare call him a fool!" Don yelled

"I think I do dare to call myself a fool" said the voice slowly

It took a while for Don to realise what had just been said

"Jax?" he asked timidly

"The one and only" said the voice....

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THe Roar of the engines makes you feel like home. Our pilot, who can't keep the plane flying start becuase of all the missle flying twords us. " Damint we could use some support he, The pilot yelled over the com link to all the piolts.

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Gus gave another sigh and ran for the Med Bay. He found Don and Jax talking amongst themselves. "MY GOD JAX! WHERE WHERE YOU!?"

"I want to know why you left us, why did you leave!?"

He looked at Don. Don probrably thought he was crazy. Gus looked in to Jax's eyes.... and knew why he left.... He had trained, purified himself. No one had done this before without dying, no one. Purified. Impossible. It was rediculous. NO ONE had ever made it through such rough training, ever. "Jax... How? And... here?" Gus felt anger, but he took a deep breath and took control of his darkness, bringing it out too absorb the anger. He felt better and stronger every time he used his darkness to control his emotions. He had also done the impossible back in the days of the Phantom, he had managed to use his internal darkness as a tool, to control his emotions. He gave a weak smile.




(( K, gotta get to bed, bye! ))

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Jax fell silent as Gus entered. Jax did not look at him. When Gus had finished Jax looked up.

"nothing is impossible" Jax said after a moments silence. He sensed Gus's anger.

"and you know exactly why I left" He said in a horse voice.

"To rid myself of anger and hatred and to turn back....something I see even ebing a Jedi has stopped you doing"

He stood up

"I must speak to the captain, far more evil doings are going on on the planet than the creation of dark troopers" Jax said not letting anything slip

Don looked like he was about to speak but stopped

Jax left the room his cloak billowing out behind him.....

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Gus was good at this. Reading thoughts. Jax knew more.... more than ehat he had told them. He thought hard and then remembered a class he took when he was in the Sith Academy. The Force and You it was called. It tought many ''universal'' powers, such as masking your alignment to others. Gus followed Jax through the hall, using his stealth belt to keep him hidden.. He used Force Sight and looked Jax up and down. Blue. It showed a bright blue glow coming off of him. Maybe he had mastered the light side. Impossible. Gus walked back into his own room to fond a suprise, a BIG suprise. Kaitlyn was sitting on his bed, staring down at the floor. she looked up when she heard Gus's robes swish through the air. "GUS!"

"KAITLYN!" They ran up to each other and hugged tightly. "I missed you soooo much!"

"I missed you too, Kait. So.... Why'd you come back here, I thought you retired."

"When I heard about the Rebels fighting again, I remembered you were still here, so I came bakc to help out."

"Good, Wlecome back, Gold Two!" Kaitlyn giggled and smiled. She pushed Gus back, knocking him onto his bed. She lay down beside him and they started to kiss. They sat there for ever, kissing. Finally they stopped and Kaitlyn started to blush. Gus unleashed the darkness again and it quickly controlled his love, rought it down a bit. If it wasn't for the darkness, he would've.... well.... he didn't want to get into it right now. (Those of you whom don't have a clue wha's going on here, look at the recent Phantom Series.)


Elena looked around the space staion, Gus had to be here. She walked thrpugh the halls, her cloaking device active, until she found a room that she knew was it. A teen boy and girl, laying on the bed. Okay, that so didn't sound right... She stuck her blaster up and uncloaked herself."GET UP!" Her assassin droid walkjed in and fired his flame cannon.


Gus jumped up and activated his old Sith saber. It absorbed the heat and started to glow. Kaitlyn got up and activated her lightsaber. she threw the blade and a flash of yellow cut through the assassin droid. It exploded. The Twilek fired at kait, but Gus took the blow instead. He slid back a few feet and saw a boot over his face, she was going to kill him. The foot came down and then dissapeared. Kaitlyn force pushed her into a wall. "Bye." Said Kait, as she used Force Grip to crush here. Elena choked p blood and a lightsaber slashed acroos her face. More blood came up.


She choked until she couldn't breath, then stood up slowly. her face was turning blue now. Wait, it was already blue.... A red luightsaber cut into her stomach and was thrust through to the other side of her. Her eyes rolled into the back of her head and all went black.



(( That had to be the most grusome death in the SW saga! ))

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Jax smiled. He knew Gus had been tailing him he knew Gus was trying to see what he had been thinking. So Jax had played a trick he had thought of something colpletly the opposite of what was on the planet. Jax had also sensed the bounty hunter. Jax was not bothered Gus was more that a match for her. He also knew Kaitilyn was back. He had sensed her. Gus'slove for her had clouded his view. Jax walked to the birdge and entered. The captain turned

"Don I thought I told you - JESUS! JAX!?!?"

Everyone turned. Jax glanced around

"Nice to see you havn't forgotten me"

"we...we thought you were....dead"

Jax was silent

"I need to talk to you about the planet you are invading" he said quietly

"what about it?"

"there is more there than you realise. More than just an imperial pressence. There is more than imperial soldiers. There are bounty hunters there looking for Gus and once they learn of it...me too. That's not all. Bounty hunters are nothing for Jedi but there is something much much worse in the depths of a temple in the middle of the imperial base"

Jax turned

"Follow me"

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Jax smiled. He knew Gus had been tailing him he knew Gus was trying to see what he had been thinking. So Jax had played a trick he had thought of something colpletly the opposite of what was on the planet. Jax had also sensed the bounty hunter. Jax was not bothered Gus was more that a match for her. He also knew Kaitilyn was back. He had sensed her. Gus'slove for her had clouded his view. Jax walked to the birdge and entered. The captain turned

"Don I thought I told you - JESUS! JAX!?!?"

Everyone turned. Jax glanced around

"Nice to see you havn't forgotten me"

"we...we thought you were....dead"

Jax was silent

"I need to talk to you about the planet you are invading" he said quietly

"what about it?"

"there is more there than you realise. More than just an imperial pressence. There is more than imperial soldiers. There are bounty hunters there looking for Gus and once they learn of it...me too. That's not all. Bounty hunters are nothing for Jedi but there is something much much worse in the depths of a temple in the middle of the imperial base"

Jax turned

"Follow me" he said not giving a hint of emotion away. Jax left the room and headed towards the science lab followed closely by the captain....

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Gus sat back down. He finally knew what was down on that planet, what Jax was hiding. Bounty Hunters. After him. But why me? he thought. JAx doesn't trust me.... Otherwise he would've told me about them, and he probrably thinks I can't handle them... He lloked at Kaitlyn, whom was removing the dead body from the room. Gus slowly got up and wlaked over to her in pain. "Sit own! Your leg looks bad, go rest." His leg hurt so bad.... when he took that shot, the blast had hit him right in the shin. he sat back down, thinking about Jax, about his aprents, and about this war. gus sighed. He knew his parents were still alive, they were out there.... somewhere... "What's wrong?" Interrupted Kait. He forgot all about that. About how good she was at reading someone's emotions. "Nothing." He said quickly. He released his darkness and let it clear some emotion. Gus gave a deep bretah. Much better... He lay down on his back. Something else.... That temple.... but what about it? Gus thpught hard. He was using the force to listen to Jax's conversation, but Jax had just now used the force to block Gus's power out. Darnit...

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As Jax entered the science lab he released the block he had on Gus. He knew Gus had been listening in. But in the lab it was pointless to try. The lab walls were desighned to stop even Jedi mind tricks. Gus would not be able to penetrate these walls. Jax walked over to a young scientist named Ross. He handed him a peice of Gold that he extracted from his pocket. Ross took it and examined it.

"yes....time period uncertain....around the time of the wars....hmmmm very rare"

Jax turned to the captain

"Sir, on the planey below we have a lenegendary sith, he rests in a temple underneath the imperial base. He was imprisoned until a Pure Jedi could defeat him, that Jedi was supposed to be me...but i've walked too far down the dark path to have any chance of defeat him. But there is a problem he is waking up. He can sense my presance. Once awake it will be almost impossible to destroy him"

Jax stared at the gold

"...becasue how can you kill what is already dead"

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Gus flet hte block lift. Finally... He concentrated hard, but could hear nothing, the walls were too strong. He tried to use his darkness to break past, but no..... nothing came to him. He got up and tried to walk to the door, but Kaitlyn shoved him back onto the bed. "Stay here, you need your rest!"


He rolled over on his side and sneezed. Oh no, his fever was still there.(See the Phantom RPs ) Wait.... thi wasn't a noirmal fever, it couldn't have been.... Why else would he suddenly feel great then horrbile? Oh no... He knew what it was. Kaitlyn. Her medichlorions had.... well... ''mixed'' with his. (If ya know what I mean) The result in a female's medichlorions in a male body were too much for his body. It seemed worth it, all that kissing.


(( Hey guys, i just realized I've been spelling he rname wrong on accident! It's spelled K A I T L Y N, Pronounced Kate-Lin ))


((Gotta go, see ya))

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Jax stared out the viewing window for a bit. He eventually came to his senses.

"I will take a boarding party down there with me, those soliders have no idea with what they are dealing with"

Jax left. He walked to Gus's room. Ignoring the closed door he barged in to Gus and Kaitilyn kissing

"Gus your comming with me, you too" Jax said pointing at Kaitlyn

Jax left and then walked to the med bay. He saw Don putting on his helmet.

"Don, with me"

Jax called on some others and eventually they were ready. Jax and Don would escort the others as they were in a shuttle. Jax and Don would be in their fighters. Jax saw Don looking at his B wing X zero.

"Nice" Don muttered

"I Know, I had her specially made"

"what's she like to.....pilot?"

"It's the best fighter i have ever piloted....except the old Viper IV"

Jax sighed and got into his ship he took off and once outside put his ship into attack formation. the wings unfolded. Jax loved this ship it had the desighn of the B wing meets X wing and it handled like a beut. Jax circled the cruiser until the shuttle and Don came out.

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"We'll be ot in a minute, guys." Gus said over the comm, as the diagnostics finsished up.

"Hmm.... Wow, Your medichlorion count is high, but most are from a female body. I assume your body just needs to get used to the high count."

"No problem, Doc."

Gus put on his tunic and slipped his Master robes over it. He slid on his boots, grabbed his saber, and headed to Kait's room. She was waiting on her bed, fixing her lightsaber. A small spark flew out as she removed the yellow color crystal and replaced it with a silver one. Her robes were already on, and she was ready. She replaced the cover on the crystal slot and put the weapon around her belt, next to her blaster. She stood and followed Gus to the hangar. She looked tired, and she didn't say a word on the way there. They hopped into their seperate ships and flew out of the hangar bay.

"Jax, Don, we're ready."

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Jax escorted the shuttle towards the planet. Don was protecting it from the back. They came under heavy fire but Jax and Don managed to take the Tie Fighters. They entered the atmosphere as they go closer to the ground they started to come under heavy fire. Jax and Don bombed some of the command posts. Eventually they came to a clearing and landed. They were immediatly attacked by imperial forces. Jax jumped out and ignited his lightsaber. He cut down a few storm troopers. He force pushed one into a tree. The others fled in fear. Jax walked over to the solider slupmed against the tree. Jax took off the mans helmet. He looked Jax in the eye and then attempted to punch him. Jax caught the mans hand before it had moved an inch. Jax looked him in the eye and then threw him against the tree so hard that the man was knocked unconcious. Don came over holding a rifle. The others were also comming out of the shuttle and looked around. Jax heard a noise. He turned and behind him was a bounty hunter, he glanced at the group

"which of you is Gus Kenobi?"

Jax stepped forwards

"It's you ay? You don't look so tough"

Jax smiled

"I'm not Gus, but you'll find I'm a lot stronger"

Jax jumped up, ignited his lightsaber and cut the bounty hunters gun in half and kicked him to the floor. He put the tip of his blade to the bounty hunters throat and smiled

"who are you?"

Jax looked into bounty hunters eyes

"A Jedi"

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Gus cut in trough Jax.

"I am."

"Jax, stay out, it's my fight now, take Kait and Don and find the tomb, I can hold these pushovers."

Gus's saber ignited and slashed at the Hunter's face. The hunter stumbled back and smirked. He aimed a Blaster at Gus and fired. He just barely dodged the bolt as he quickly struck again. He switched to a Vibro Blade and continued to strike at Gus. He dodged all of Gus's moves.

"Fine, Be that way!" Gus yelled as he used Force Crush on the pitifull exscuse for a Hunter. To Gus's suprise he broke free and slahed Gus's arm. It started to bleed. "Damn!" Gus yelled, grabbing his arm in pain. He slashed and cut thre Hunter's armor.

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Jx spun around

"Gus you fool!" he yelled

"These are no oridnary bounty hunters! They work for-" He was cut short. More bounty hunters appeared around them.

"damn it"

Jax charged at one and clipped him on the back of the head with the hitl of his saber. The bounty hunter collapsed. Jax turned, they were surrounded.

"Guys RUN!" Jax yelled

Jax concentrated hard. He picked all of the bounty hunters off of the floor and threw them in a heap. Jax turned to Don

"Take them and go! I'll meet up with you later!"

Jax flipped a bounty hunter over his shoulder. But it was too late, him and Gus were surrounded. To the bounty hunters surprise Jax broke into a smile.

"so this is what bounty hunters pass for these days"

Jax looked around. He stamped on the floor and as if his foot had emitted an earth tremour the bounty hunters fell backwards. Jax brought out another lightsaber and ignited it. The blue and green light emittig from them playesd with the colour on the bounty hunters armour. Jax jumped up and struck one down. He spun around and stabbed one in the shoulder. He kicked one away. He stabbed one in the stomach and then hit him on the back with the hilt of his saber. Jax did not know what Gus was doing but all he knew was here and now, if Gus resorted to using dark powers. Gus would not survive....

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Gus thought about his hidden darkness. He coul duse it inside, but... what about outaide? He decided to use it as an emegency type thing and kicked an incoming hunter in the face, flinging him back ibto another. "Dominos are fun!" he yelled as he threw a fist in triumph. He smacked another over the head with his own blaster pistol. He crushed it and threw it's remains to the side. He slashed another's Jet pack and it ewxploded, killing 2 others.

"This is gonna be fun."

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Jax spun around. The hunter had stopped. They stood transfixed in fear and then fled. Jax had felt it too. Jax turned to Gus

"I think it's time I filled you in"

Jax sat down

"Long ago there was a Jedi named Zion Romantix, he fought alongside the Jedi for years. It is unclear but he was banished and was killed at the hands of a jedi."

Jax pasued giving Gus time to let this sink in

"Before he died he cursed the Jedi order. He was brought back to life by a sith lord long ago. He then fought my master who could not kill him so some old Jedi imprisoned him until someone arrived....Until I arrived. But thats not all. When we saw that prophecy...it wasn't about Rezillo at all....it was about Zion. But On my travels I have found out more than I would have liked. Long strory short, He thinks I'm dead so I am no longer a threat to him, but you arn't dead. The reason these bounty hunters want you is to kill you. Only a pure Jedi can kill this thing"

Jax paused again

"But thats were the problems come up. I have already gone down the path to darkness so I have no chance and sadly Gus so have you. You are not Pure enough. You have evil and hatred in your heart. There is however a solution. One person who us meeting was no coincidence. Someone who you have taken a liking to...Kaitlyn. She is pure. Meeting her was no coincidence. Infact she is the reason you have fallen so far down the path to evil. She is the only one who can defeat him. But there is a catch....she will die"

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(( I take it your either 1) Getting Jealous f her and my charatcer or 2) You're sick of her ))


First he reactted to the darkness. "You... You weren't purified.... you're evil..." Gus used Force Sight again and saw the truth. A bloody red light came from him. Darkness. Gus looked at his friend. He was a friend, not an enemy. Then came Kaitlyn. Tears the size of golfballs rolled down his cheeks. He looked over at Kait, she was over by a tree, waiting. "C'mon guys, hurry! You're gonna miss this!"

Gus looked to his feet in sadness. He stopped crying and looked at Jax. "But.... Is the death of a loved one like her worth the galaxy?" He was selfish and arrogant. What a jerk he had been. This all came to him and he knew he was still dark, but yet he was still a Jedi. A warrior.

He decided not to tell Kait. He lloked at Jax and then to the sky, it was slowly turning orange and red. He stood beside her and sat down, she sat too, their legs dangling off the ridge. She lay her head on his shoulder and sighed. Gus looked up and saw two.... no three suns setting at once. What a beautiful sight....

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(No i thought it would be a cool story twist and see how it goes we could find some miraculas discovery or maybe she just goes into a coma. Just ideas)


"Gus just think. If this thing kills us you wont be able to love kaitlyn anyway. Either way you and her can not be. I'm sorry but it must be done there is no one else. You were meant to kill him but now it is too late for you and me. It must be her"

Jax turned to look at kaitlyn

"I know it's hard but it must be done"

Jax stood up and brushed the grass off his robe

"She must be trained. I assume you wil train her. I will try and hold him off for as long as I can. Kaitlyn is the only one who can do this but first you must teach her. teach her how you use her power but not to fall to the dark side. I can not garantee you long so do what is necesary"

Jax walked towards kaitlyn and blessed her in a language she did not understand. he then muttered

"Gus needs to talk to you"

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Jax watched as Gus and Kaitlyn walked away to begin their training. He sighed.

"Don, find the others that have landed on the planet. I must deal with something"

"As you wish, Master Polara"

Jax looked at Don who smiled

Jax nodded and walked towards the sith temple. He could feel the darkness. It was like a thick mist. He felt his heart beat faster and faster. He came to a clearing and in the middle was a huge temple. Jax entered it and the door shut behind him immediatly.

"I did not expect you so soon- YOU!? You're suppose to be dead!"

Out of the darkness came a dark figure he was completly hidden by a black robe. Only his cold yellow eyes showed from under his hood

"Suppose to yes, but not. I know of your plan and I know I can't kill you"

He laughed, a cold high mirthless laugh.

Jax waited for him to stop

"Are you finished?"

"yes" he said in a cold voice

He withdrew two lightsaber and ignited them. Both as red as blood.

Jax took out his own and ignited it

"Lets see what the so called greatest Jedi in the galaxy fares against the undead sith lords" He smiled and from the shadows more dead sith lorsa appeared

Jax stared defiantly back and raised his blade...

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(so I did, my bad)


Jax blocked a vicious attack from a sith corpse. Jax staggered backwards. He could feel Gus and Kaitlyn, they were worried about him. Jax tried to send a message to Gus telapathically, "Don't try and help, Train her" he tried to say. He had no idea if it had worked. Jax kicked at a corpse and his foot sank throught it's ribs, jax used force push to get it off him. Jax then sliced a corpse in half.

"Whats the matter Zion? Scared?" Jax taunted

Zion smiled

"No I just want to see hoe you fight"

"You realise I wont give away my fighting style so easily?"

Jax roundhouse kicked a corpse and it's head fell off.

"This is basic combat"

Zion frowned slightly

"Are this sith lords too weak for you Master Polara?"

Jax spun around and sliced a corpse's leg off

"weak is an under statement"

Jax force pushed a corpse into another who fell into another and they were kababed on a steak on the wall.

Zion threw his cloak to the floor

"I see there is nothing for it then, I'll kill you myself"

"You may try but you will not suceed"

Hurry Gus teach her fast Jax thought desperately

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