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Niaj Qad Keep

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In a time before the clone wars, there was a planet that does not still exist in the star wars galaxy. This legend planet Niaj Qad, was fairly dirtlike, but was hard as rock. Within it, one of the first jedi councils, one where young jedi would learn the art of the force, was rumored to exist.


Rumors are not always a good thing, for the Civic Empire got wind of this, and decided that if an army of "jedi" with as much power as told was created, they would overthrow their rule on the galaxy. The best way to solve this was to prevent it from happening.


So the Empire sent down a large army of their most brutal troops to destroy the Jedi Keep. As the council realized that enemies had surrounded the entire keep (nearly a mile of enemy lines), they had instructed all young jedi in training to report to the main back upper hideout. This was the most secure area in the keep, and the Civic troops would not be able to find it without first killing all the senior jedi. If the hideout fell, all hope of a full future jedi council was lost.


Commander Eptima, a General in the Civic Empire was transporting a large cargo (approx. 800, including weapons and vehicles) to one of the Civic Bases on Naboo, when he was given new orders to deploy the troops on Niaj Qad and join up with the other posted army to attack the Keep. Eptima was secretly astonished by the Civic Empire's treachery, and came to agreement with the onboard soldiers that they would instead become traitors and attack the Civic's already posted army (actually, one disagreed, bet he's dead now:)) Commander Eptima plotted the flight vehicles to attack head on, and the ground units to be deployed along a canyon to the east of the plain where the battle would be taking place. Now, you can play.




-Civic Army-

NA-AT: kind of like a tank only it fires large, devestating electrical balls and slot launch, rather than a cannon.

AO-OT: long hovering vehicle with large outer skull, much like a battering ram, two small cannons on either side

Speeder Bike: (less modernized)

RIG fighters: flat disk-like starfighters

Grand Starfighters: outmatches the RIG fighters by speed and firepower, long and curved

Piercers: (see #8)


-Eptima's Army-

TIT-AT: much like an IT-TE, main cannons shoot combustion missles

Civic Hovercraft: transportation only, holds up to 15 troops

Civic Starfighter: the trusters come in front on both sides, like pinchers, and the blasters are in between, much faster than the RIG fighters

Orbital Destroyer: big, floating boxes that fire Orbital Blasts on transmission, kept at a safe distance


-Jedi Council-

Defence Cannon: take the appearance of a Geonosian cannon but shoot small bombs that explode on contact

Router Bombs: giant vehicle bombs that the jedi drive out to the enemy vehicles and eject 3 seconds before detonation

Window Launchers: standard anti-aircraft missle launchers that are positioned under the overhangs of the keep, designed to lock onto enemy aircraft with a salvo that splits up to attack the enemy at all angles, unfortunately, the Jedi found that they were low on missles and began to shoot only one at a time

Jedi Starfighter: (less modernized)

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Name: Gus Kenobi

Age: 28

Faction: Jedi Council

Class: Jedi Master

Equipment: One Green saber, Black Jedi Master Robes

Strengths: Acroabtic Lightsaber Combat, Force Powers, Will, Stealth

Weakness: Blaster Skills, Piloting Airborne crafts, Explosives

Bio: After the battle for sector 64, and the epic saga of the evil Phantom, Gus and Kaitlyn, his girlfreind, decided to leave the Rebels and go to the place where they were needed: The Jedi Council. After many years of harsh training, Gus officialy became a Jedi Master.... But alas, he left in search of his parents. He wondered the galaxy for many years. He finally found them, on the most unexpected place... The destroyed ruins of Exar Kun's tomb. They were dead. It looked like they had died just recently. He was angry, but his darkness deep within him controlled his emotions.(See the Phantom RPGs) He left in search of Kailtny, but he could not find her. Finally, he gave up and went back to the jedi.

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(Hey Rennegade this is set before the Clone wars so our whole phantom stuff hasn't happened yet, heck our guys havnt even been born)


Zion looked through his binoculars. He could see the aproaching army coming at them with great pace. He looked down at the Jedi soldiers.

"Ready the cannons" He heard a voice yell

Zion watched as some Jedi manned router bombs. That job was suicide. Even if you managed to eject you had to fight of a hoard of enemies. Even if you were a jedi you would have little chance of surviving. Zion saw a young boy refusing to get into one. He was being threatened with execution on the grounds of being a traitor when Zion said

"I will go in his place"

They looked up and him


"yes, me"

They shurgged and threw the boy to the side. The boy looked terrified. Zion picked him up and patted him on the soldier. Zion got in. He was not good at driving these things but he could fight his way back. Zion drove out. He could see the first hoard of enemys. He drove off. He dodged fire and and men. He got to the heart of the formation and ejected....he flew through the air and the bomb went off. The explosion killed quite a few of the soldiers. Zion backed away, he was in anger of being surrounded. He dodged fire and ran. He cut at people along the way. He did not aim to kill but aimed to disarm or scare. One man he stabbed in the shoulder. The man had not realied it, but his armour slipped off. someone struck at him but he cut their hand. Zion skidded. He had heard a voice. He saw a young jedi about to be taken out by a large man with an electro staff. Zion ran and jumped. He blocked the man's attack and threw him backwards. Zion and the boy were surrounded. Zion pulled him to his feet and handed him a lightsaber. The boy ignited it and stared around. Zion shouted out

"If the best fighter can beat me, he can kill us both. If not you will let us reaturn to our base"

A murmour errupted and then a man stepped forwards. He was huge. He had a club in one hand and looked vicous.

"I will fight you....and kill you"

he moved fowards bringing the club up as he did he struck at Zion who dodged. Zion sliced at the club. The club broke into two. The man stumbled and zion seized his chance. He jumped and stabbed the man in the shoulder.The man stood for a few seconds then fell. Zion looked around. He grabbed the boys soldier and led him out of the circle. An angry muttering followed them then someone yelled


Zion broke into a run back to the base....

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Zion saw a young boy refusing to get into one. He was being threatened with execution on the grounds of being a traitor


Probably not, all young adepts (or as many as they could find) were in the MUH. Unless he was a whiny 16 year old (against jedi custom), I doubt they would force him to commit suicide. It's your role though, and it does make it more interresting when you swap out for the dangerous job.


Name: Dyce Fondoa

Faction: Civic Rebels

Rank: tactition, seize control

Equipment: spread blaster, heat dagger, radio-output switch, Civic garb symbolizing high rank

Specialties: sieges, holding areas, sneaking, hacking

Weaknesses: 1 on 1 combat

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Dyce watched through the framescreen in his TIT-AT. He couldn't believe what he was about to do, yet he knew he had to do it. What had come over the emperor? Why would he do this? Usually the emperor wanted to maintain peace in the galaxy, and he was positive that the Empire knew that the jedi council would help acomlish this. The emperor himself said he was looking forward to this new army of good. Had the Jedi Council betrayed the Empire? Were they about to sacrifice themselves when actually the jedi were the evil ones?


After a long time they saw nothing but the dull Niaj Qav canyon walls, until eventually the walls got shorter and more fertile. They were approaching the base of the canyon, where the real deal was about to begin. Dyce made a quick systems check and pulled out in front of a few TIT-ATs. He heard Eptima's voice through lots of static.

"Dyce report." "Systems online." and the same old routine. Dyce gave the ground troops orders to move out, and the vehicles to get into position. As they neared the base of the canyon, Dyce saw two large shapes appear on the targeting screen, and Dyce zoomed in.

He told his radio phone "It looks like they left a few vehicles to guard the canyon's mouth. They don't want anybody escaping. This is too weird..."

VT-459: "Target report, NA-ATs. Modified, their transmission system is on.'

Dyce: "'k, TITs out first. Remember your positions on the field. Move out!"


The third co came out of the side turret, and brought along a couple of time bombs. He slowly snuck behind the giant tank and set the bombs one at a time. He ran back to the TIT-AT and got back in. The TIs advanced and one of the NA-ATs turned in their direction.

"Exellent, the reinforcements. I'll inform General Rasco on your arrival."

"No, let us set into our directed positions first." Dyce quickly interjected. The voice hesitated, then the three NA-ATs moved out of the way.


As Dyce moved into position, he saw a huge explosion, and about fifty feet of space had been wiped out everything in it's perimises. It had destroyed 2 AO-OTs and a speeder bike rack. Soon more explosions, Dyce recognized them as router bombs.

As soon as Dyce got out of the way, the time bombs went off, causing both NA-ATs to go up in flames. However, one of the NA-ATs was still functional despite it's massive damage.

"The reinforcements are traitors! We're being attacked!"

Dyce shot a missle at the already near-destroyed vehice.

"Damn. That wasn't supposed to happen."


Then something he dreaded happened. A huge cargo ship sent down several large vehicles. They had machine guns on either side, and were incredibly fast. 'Piercers' as the Empire called them. The enemies would be dead before they would have a chance to strike back.

"Watch out guys," said Dyce. "This is gonna be a hell of a fight."

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Name: Matt Kenobi

Faction: Jedi Council

Rank: Jedi Master

Equipment: Duel Purple Lightsabers, Grey Jedi Master Robes

Specialties: Lightsaber Combat, Stealth, Vitality (Health)

Weaknesses: Piloting Airborne Vehicles, Force Powers, Healing


Matt arose from the cold, hard floor and looked around. The room was dark, but he had heard something move arounbd while he was meditating. He felt the prescense of Sith. He activated his Force Camoflauge and ignited his lightsaber. He deactivated the saber's blade and crept around, looking for whatever he had heard. He turned to see a bright red light filling the room. An Assassin. It jumped around, confusing Gus. It finally landed behind him and Gus dodged the blow to his head. he jumped up and landed behind the assassin, hitting it hard with his purple blades. The assassin fell over and coughed up some blood. He moved the body outside the chamber and he walked down the landing of his room. He opened a metal door and walked into the Council Chambers, looking around, he saw Jedi of all species congragating.

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Dyce knew that they would not last long like this.

"New orders. Target and destroy the piercers!" The group of TIs split up to make themselves less of a target. The piercers were also on the move, some swerving around to the back of the TIs, some closing in gaps on the battlefield where other tanks had fallen. Dyce remembered that these enemies were no mare different than themselves. Why had they chosen to do this? He looked out at the cold battlefield. Their ex-allies looked the same, yet they were so different. He also noticed that more than the original Civic Empire was out there. He saw several soldiers from all kinds of different places, many looked to be barbarians. Had the Empire lost all honor?


Dyce's transfiction was interrupted by the sound of machine guns hitting the armor of his tank. He tried to lock onto the piercer but it kept circling him, attacking his back if given the chance. Dyce did a complex menouver and swerved onto his side, the piercer smashing into the think armor at the bottom of the TI. There were more Piercers than he thought.


The firmiliar drum insignia could be heard on Dyce's speaker. The ground infantry troops were getting closer, they had to make it safe for them. Dyce shot down two piercers tailing a TI.

"Incoming TA-ATs," Reported VI-687. A small bomb smashed into a TI right in front on Dyce.

"Take down the TAs, ignore the remaining piercers if possible." A piercer destroyed two TIs next to Dyce, and hit him several times. "Wait, reverse that order." More TA-AT bombs. "Just shoot anything that's shooting at you!"


"Ground infantry is nearing the canyon base," reported a troop.

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Name:Bac Rueben

Faction:Civic Army

Rank:16th Battion Commander

Equipment:16th Battalion Specialty Blaster Rifle(16th Battolion Specialty was modified to penetrate certain metal and lazers, such as lightsabers), concussion grenades, thermal detonators, Blaster pistol, and holographic display key(to open doors we don't have a key to. Only works on some doors).

Strengths:stragetic positioning, hand-hand combat, squadron combat, and assassination.

Weaknesses:piloting, mechanics, and mercy for victims.

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Bac Rueben was amazed at the way the exallies at reacted. Why would anyone betray the Empire? Bac Rueben snuck out of the fighting to fight the real enemies, the Jedi. They were still firing down on us and me and my squad decided to end it. We all threw thermal detonators and concussion grenades to destroy the defense cannons. The explosions destroyed a lot of them and scattered most of the jedi. The jedi that remained to fight soon felt the sting of our specialty blasters. We then headed toward the keep.

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Name: Scur Jal' Daan

Faction: Jedi Council

Rank: Jedi Consular II

Equipment: Blue Jedi Consular robes

Weapon: Dual Lightsabers; Silver/Orange

Specialties: Force Precognition, Force Heal, Piloting, 1-on-1 Fighting

Weaknesses: Close together fighting


"We need to evacuate the younger jedis if we plan on having a jedi council left!" Scur exclaimed to the Jedi Chancellor. "If we do they will shoot the escape pods leaving the Area. So we need to destroy all artillery and starfighters blockading us." the Chancellor replied.

"What about the underground passage to the secret hangar miles awa..."

"The path was crushed when the Civic Fleet landed all their ships." the Chancellor said interrupting Scur. Scur thought for a second. "Well then, I'll take a group of Jedi out the back exit and find the artillery." Scur commanded as he walked out the room, before the Chancellor could add something.


(((Hey Fate, I was wondering if you could add some anti-aircraft weapon placements for the list on your beginning post maybe some around the top of the Jedi Temple? Or can there be some anti-aircraft placements without adding anything to the top of your list of vehicles?)))

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Bac Rueben finally made it to the keep with his battalion. He made one final look back at the battle ensuing behind them. He shook his head. The battle shouldn't of happened this way. They should've destroyed the jedi easily. He then joined his troops in planting charges on the keep's walls.

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Name: zaran

Age: unknown

Faction: jedi

Class: jedi master

Equipment: lightsaber

Strengths: agility, ability to calm down instantly and focus.

Weakness: has an injured leg (wich slows him down from time to time)


zaran charged at a near by soldier cutting him down. he dodged some fire. a near by jedi fell dead before he hit the ground. his old wound started acting up agian, slowing his movements. his enemies saw their chance and opened fire thinking a wounded jedi is not a threat. big mistake. he easily blocked their shots. the pain in his lag has subsided. he jumped and cut down the 2 soldiers.


he and his jedi were about to go and help some stuggling jedi when he noticed, a commander planting charges. he ordered his friend to take half the jedi and help those out him and his 6 jedi were going to go and stop the new threat.

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Scur gathered some willing jedi, and headed to the back exit. When the door opened droids were pointing their blaster rifles at the jedi. The jedi look at each other then jump and ignite their lightsaberswiping some of the droids out. The remaining droids started firing and were cut in half or through the neck.


The Jedi group continued around a hill of rocks and soon noticed the artillery in the rear of the army, guarded by half of the droid army. Scur decided to wait to see if they would eventually move.

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Suddenly droids noticed them in hiding and started firing on them. Scur Stood up and started reflecting the blasts back at the droids. As he sarted toward the droids his companions followed. Soon, Scur got close enough to a droid and sliced it in two. He walked slowly destroying every droid close enough to him.


One jedi fell once they made it to their dstination, but they were to get there unnoticed. Now Scur decided to run along the artillery cutting the engines. "Run along the artillery and cut them to pieces!" Scur yelled as he started cutting the power to the artillery. Another Jedi fell but plenty were left, so the remaining went back the way they came from, slicing through the droids that were in the way.


Once out of harms way, the jedi settled down before going across the battlefield again.

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