Jae Onasi Posted May 16, 2007 Author Share Posted May 16, 2007 Chapter 21 has been revised. I'm working on 22 and 23. I've revised the outline for AoJB 2 so I hope to get working on that sometime this summer. Revisions are taking me a lot longer than I ever anticipated. Hope you enjoy the changes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted May 16, 2007 Share Posted May 16, 2007 Mentions of a sequel to this. The suspense is killing me. Anyway, good luck with the remained revisions and I'm looking foward to the day you finally mention that the sequel is being written. Once again, good luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor Devon Posted May 16, 2007 Share Posted May 16, 2007 Mentions of a sequel to this. The suspense is killing me. Grovel a little, and maaaaaaaaybe I'll let you have a peak at the plot outline... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jae Onasi Posted May 16, 2007 Author Share Posted May 16, 2007 Grovel a little, and maaaaaaaaybe I'll let you have a peak at the plot outline... Hahahahaha....no. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor Devon Posted May 17, 2007 Share Posted May 17, 2007 Hahahahaha....no. Oh fine, but you know I can't resist teasing people over it. Hall's already been trying to bribe me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallucination Posted May 17, 2007 Share Posted May 17, 2007 <_< Meet me out back in 15 minutes, it'll be worth it.>_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anakin34 Posted June 15, 2007 Share Posted June 15, 2007 That story was bang'in I think your lying that could'nt have been your first fan fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jae Onasi Posted June 15, 2007 Author Share Posted June 15, 2007 It was my first indeed. Thank you very much. It also helps that chapters 14 thru 21 have been revised heavily, so you didn't see the initial mistakes that I made all over the place in that part of the story, though I had a very good time making those mistakes and writing the whole story in general. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spark91 Posted August 6, 2007 Share Posted August 6, 2007 WOW that was a great fan-fic, i just started reading about a couple days ago and i just finished it today and i gotta say i havn't read this much in a long time and this is the first time i ever read any fan-fic. i loved those bindo jokes u put in there, they are priceless, i will be looking forward to the sequeal with great anticipation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seamhainn Posted August 13, 2007 Share Posted August 13, 2007 Hello! I don't want to sound rude but is there a file of the whole story? Take care Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jae Onasi Posted August 13, 2007 Author Share Posted August 13, 2007 The FIN thread is here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcesious Posted August 13, 2007 Share Posted August 13, 2007 So amazing! This is the best story ever. Jolee is now my favorite starwars character of all time. I haven't had the time to read it all, i've only begun to read the first chapter. If you haven't published this yet, you should! If you already have, then that's awesome! I haven't been able to read every post int his thread yet, so i don't know. all i've done is simply archived this story into Microsoft word so i can read it. if this isn't published yet- i promise i will never take credit for it. I'm not some guy who goes and plagerises such a masterpiece. i could never write as good as you! reading this has inspired me to amke my own story, to be set 4,000 years after what starwars episode 9 is supposed to be. hopefully, reading this, i might pick up a few bits of advice for myself upon writing a good story. You are absolutely the best writer ever. Upon only reading half of the first chapter, i can tellt hat this sotry is going to be awesome to read! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jae Onasi Posted August 19, 2007 Author Share Posted August 19, 2007 Chapter 22 revision is up. Hope you all enjoy it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jesusfreaks_90 Posted September 20, 2007 Share Posted September 20, 2007 Hi I was wondering if you could host the file somewhere and give us a link to download it. Plz and Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jae Onasi Posted September 21, 2007 Author Share Posted September 21, 2007 I don't currently have it posted anywhere but here (and the Jedi Archives has the finished version with the story only--no comments) and at kotorfanmedia.com . It's complete on this site, and I'm up to chapter 23 on the kfm site. I don't have any plans to host it anywhere else at this time. Thanks for asking, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rev7 Posted October 12, 2007 Share Posted October 12, 2007 That was the best fic I have EVER read!!!! I just have to say that I am speechless. Simply amazing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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