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Burnseyy

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thank you everyone!

updates will be up soon hopefully. [:

and be nice, this is my first attempt at a comic lol

 

Looks great none the less, oh do you got a script allready ?

My tries at comics always end at page 15 or something :lol:, cause I get bogged down in having no real plot points what so ever :p

 

But the art is real nice, show us some more :drool:

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Looks great none the less, oh do you got a script allready ?

 

yer, but it only oes up to page 3, so far. i'm gonna be working on it [:

 

 

My only real suggestion is try to keep the text in the text bubble, and maybe more centered. Then it'll be great!

 

i tried to centre it, but that's the best i could do, since there was no centre option on Comic Life lol

thanks though. [:

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thank you everyone!

updates will be up soon hopefully. [:

and be nice, this is my first attempt at a comic lol

 

 

And a great one it is. Don´t know how I´m just seeing this now :confused:, but whatever. I like your comic. Not only did you draw it well, but it has that real comic feel to it, you know. Not just two people in a box with speech bubbles...like the perspectives - Revan in the third box and how in the last one, Revan is speaking but we see Malak...:^: I do love your art Burnseyy!

 

-HOP

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