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"How do I know your name? Please... you've been screaming it in your head." He said, slicing up Mako's sleeve. "Damn it." He cursed and aimed for the flesh. "Besides... you told me your name, just before you watched the slavers take off with me." He said, hatred filling his eyes. "You are a foolish Jedi." He muttered and drove the other man back.

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"Whatever you are talking about, I don't know, do you expect me to remember everyone I meet?" Mako said, the Miraluka sliced Mako's glove, revealing his cybernetic hand. This was getting worse, he could use what little knowledge he possesed of Force Camouflage, but he knew it would be useless against the Miraluka as long as he could see through the Force, but it would confuse the droid. He then used camouflage to at least confuse the droid, but it didn't affect the Sith Lord.

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Lucas shook his head. "HK isn't fooled by Camouflage... Revan made sure of that." He said, smirking as the droid continued to blast at Mako. Lucas growled viciously and brought the tip of his lightsaber down onto Mako's cybertronic hand. He continued to force the lightsaber into the other man's hand. He laughed slightly and stopped. "Run Jedi... death isn't your destiny... not today anyway. You still have a much more needed role in this war we are waging... leave puppet and come seek me out when your time is done in this galaxy."

 

 

 

(( oh and on my other post... i meant hatred filling his eye sockets >< ))

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This statment had angered Mako greatly, it was even worse that that the lightsaber was beiing forced into his hand. In a desparate bid to survive he used Force Repulse to knock everyone back and started slashing the Sith Lord with all his anger put into each strike. "Apparently I'm just another guy in the backround to you!!! Well you Sith should die!!! Every last one of you!!!" Mako screamed as he slashed his opponent.

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The techs worked at a marvelous speed with detatching ships and delaying the destruct process as much as they could. One of them had failed in hindering the destruct process in one of the wings, so that it blew up, and with it two Interdictors and four Hammerheads. The Sith had entered with just one Interdictor, but they would return with seven Hammerheads, three Interdictors, ten Foray's and, most interestingly, a Centurion-class Battlecruiser. Carsew reckoned it was probably one of the last ones in Republic control, most of them had been lost in the battle of Malachor V. And all of these had small starfighters in them.

 

"My Lord, the destruct-system will blow the station in two minutes," one of the techs said to Carsew, which pulled him out of his thinkings. He nodded and turned to the crew.

 

"Everybody to the ships!" he called over the troopers. They had already worked out crews, and now everybody ran to their respective ships. Carsew had decided to take the Centurion for his own use, if Revan did not mind, and so he walked over to it.

 

The fleet flew in formation towards Revan's fleet, the Centurion in the lead. A tech said how much time it was left to Carsew.

 

"Three, two, one..." he stopped talking as an ear-breaking noise was heard from the shipyards explosion. The ships in the back were rocked violently, a Foray and an Hammerhead was destroyed in the explosion, but none of that mattered. They returned to Revan's fleet.

 

"Prepare a shuttle to Revan's flagship," Carsew said and swept down towards the hangar...

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Kiilik woke up from a restless sleep. he had been on a bounty the previous day. he went to the 'fresher and put his armor on, and went to his employer's palace.

 

when he entered the faleen's quarters he said

"excuse me Xenn, but i would like to speak to you in private"

"does the presence of my gaurds bother you?"

"just take me to your di'kutla office will you?"

 

when he entered the office he sat down and pulled out a credit chit.

 

"here's your money back chacaaryc"

money BACK?"

"yes... i no longer want to work for scum"

"that's hardly the word i would call it"

"calll it what you want but i still hate you and want you dead"

"was that a threat Ven?'

"oh no! i would never kill you!" i'll leave my BOMB to do that

"very well..."

 

the faleen took the money and escorted kiilik out the door.

as Kiilik walked he ginned as he heared a large explosian behind him...

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Rax Sadow had been given a command. He never disobeyed one, and he's not gonna start now. He took his 20 men aboard a shuttle, where they landed near the Military Base on Foerost. He crouched on the ground, then motioned for the commandos to form a circle around him, and they did.

 

"Okay. First of all, defense systems. Line of perimeter is covered by anti-personnel turrets, nothing automatic, all of them operated by men. Go prone and you won't be detected. 5 of you will go as near as you can to the turrets without getting obliterated. You are to be known as Squad A from here on out. Dismissed."

 

Rax pointed to some 5 men then motioned for them to go away. They lied prone then crawled near to the turrets.

 

"Squad B, composed of another 5 men will wear standard Republic Army Uniforms, and I will wear a Republic Officer Uniform. I am to distract then assassinate the Commanding Officer. When you hear blaster fire, start firing on the personnel operating the turrets. The base will then go on alert, and Squad A will immediately engage."

 

Rax held a deep breath.

 

"Now the last 10 men would remain here and assault once Squad A does. Understood?"

 

An echo of "YES SIR" was heard all over, and Rax smiled.

 

"Let's make Revan proud boys. Move out!"

 

Rax put on a Republic Officer Uniform, then set out along with 5 of his commandos.

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"Statement: You can't defeat both of us."

HK would've smiled if he could. Mako's Force Crush damaged his left arm and leg but he didn't have time to worry about that. While Mako was using Force Lightning on Lucas, HK aimed with his sniper rifle(he was close but he used the sniper rifle because it causes more damage) and shot through Mako's cybernatic hand. As soon as he pulled the trigger he felt the damage in his arm.

"Analysis: My left arm and leg has taken serious damage. I cannot use them."

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Kiilik entered his ship and took course for Dxun. He picked up his comlink

"Confirm kill: Xenn Kayne"

"that was a quick on Ven. are you sure he is dead?"

"unmistakabley"

"good. when will you start the hunt for this HK droid that's been causing all that trouble with with my men?"

"right now. he was last seen on Dxun right?"

"correct. just remember-he won't be TOO easy for you. you might actualy break a sweat"

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Yusu's men took over all the south sector of Hajibar, it was said that Malak did took over of the north section of Hajibar as well and that all the other siths managed to take the other cities without a problem. Taking Foerost was an easy task for veteran soldiers of the new Sith empire. Most of the planet was now under the control of the Sith, Revan placed a Sith governor and soldiers on the planet. Revan send a message to all the Sith lords, to gather on the Sith academy of Korriban as soon as their duties where finished, to make plans for a new attack. Revan left a big fleet over the planet and headed with his flagship and many other ships to the Horuset System, where Korriban was located.

 

 

Yusu's task was accomplished, he left a high ranking soldier on charge of the battalion and took his starfighter back to a Interdictor-class Cruiser that was heading to Korriban along with Revan's flagship.

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Lucas laughed, hard. He watched as the man slashed at him with his lightsaber, only to bounce off of his robes. He had his robes bathed in a cortosis weave... the only possible way to kill him would be to cut off his head. Lucas shook his head as the Jedi continued to pound his robes/armor with his lightsaber, only to have it bounce off. He looked majorly confused but Lucas just laughed again.

 

"Kill me will you, Jedi? Ahhh... yes, give into the hate, your baser emotions... fill yourself with the Darkside and perhaps I shall spare you... only break you. I will not fall in combat until I see you either A.) dead or B.) my own personal apprentice." He laughed hard and backflipped out of the way of the lightning, landing behind him and grabbing struck him hard in the neck, forcing him to see black spots... eventually he would be knocked out, but for now he somehow managed to stay conscious. He slowly crept into the Jedi's mind. ::You want it don't you? The power of the Darkside could be yours... I know you do... it is a powerful thing to have... power, glory, riches... all belong to those whom bask in the darkness.:: He whispered into Mako's mind.

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"Ugh, this is getting annoying." Mako said as he was shot in the hand, all he really felt was a small jolt of electricity in his arm letting him know his hand was damaged.

 

::You want it don't you? The power of the Darkside could be yours... I know you do... it is a powerful thing to have... power, glory, riches... all belong to those whom bask in the darkness.::

 

Mako smiled, You really think this affects me don't you. He thought, not wanting to waste breath, knowing the Miraluka could read his mind. Well it doesn't you fool, I'm not a jedi, nor am I sith, I ventured away from the light side, but why am I telling you this when you already know it? For a distraction, that's why. Mako then began Force Crushing Lucas.

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Lucas laughed darkly and used the Force to push Mako back, so that he wouldn't crush him. Lightning arched out of his fingertips and he smirked as it hit him square in the chest. He quickly bound him against the wall, using the Force to hold him there, not letting him reach out with his mind. Lightning arched out of his fingertips again, hitting Mako in the chest. "Are you sure you don't want it? I think you do..." The Miralukan boy breathed. "I see you, human Jedi. I see your core... I see the dark seed that is waiting to be planted and nurtured. Allow me to be the one to nurture such and you will see the Force for what it was meant to be... a tool for the Sith... rather than a god to you gray Jedi and the regular Jedi." He whispered quietly.

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Kiilik landed down on Dxun. it was all jungle and no town. he wlked to where the HK droid was last seen. it was a small cave. he quikly looked around for any sign of a droid. oil. whatever droid was here left oil. this was his first sign. he took out his comlink

 

"Hey sir," he said

"yeah?"

"He's not here"

"are you sure"

"Posative"

that was one of the good fetures Ven had. He could look around for a few seconds and take in the smallest detail..

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Lucas threw the debris away from himself, before it landed on him. "Foolish human... next time we meet it won't be under a ceiling. Next time... you will fall... or you will die." He whispered, quietly, knowing Mako could hear him.

 

Lucas looked at HK-47. "You are such a stupid droid... come on... let's get you fixed up, assassin." If he could have, he would have rolled his eyes at calling the droid an assassin.

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Squad A did as they planned, staying very close to the anti-personnel turrets. They were not detected by its operators, something Rax is thankful for. Squad B, under the command of Rax got into their Republic Officer and Soldier uniforms. The five soldiers accompanying Rax made a formation behind him, where they marched with their leader.

 

One Republic officer and three other soldiers went out and greeted Rax, thinking he was not on the side of Revan. The Republic Officer saw that the rank on Rax's clothing was that of a captain, and he saluted. Rax saluted back.

 

"Officer, we have been ambushed by renegade Republic soldiers. Is your base safe?"

 

The Officer pointed to the base, then said,

 

"We are aware of the situation, sir. We are very safe indeed."

 

Rax brought out his blaster pistol and at the same time, said,

"Well you're not anymore."

With four shots in rapid succession the officer and the three guards were knocked down. The five commandos with Rax ran along the defensive perimeter, shooting all of the operators of the turrets. At this, the members of Squad A stood up then met the reinforcements coming from all sides.

 

When they got the signal to do so, the remaining Commandos occupied the base, wiping out remnant of resistance. Rax pushed a button on the holo on his right hand.

 

"General, we have secured the base. Awaiting further orders."

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"I'll ask you ONE more time... WHERE IS THE HK DROID?!"

"I... I think he went to Foerost... i did what you said... please don't kill me!"

 

indeed he had... he gave the man his life for information on the droid. but he was paid by someone else NOT to give it to him

 

"I'll believe you if you do me ONE favor"

"what?"

"put in a good word for me in hell"

 

Kiilik pulled the trigger of his carbine. the lifeless body of the rodian scum fell tio the ground...

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Lucas smirked slightly. "Oh yeah... because that worked out so well last time.. you poisoned him, but it had very little affect on him... let him alone. He is not a Jedi and that is not your fight droid, it is mine. I have been waiting on him for well over 13 years since he let me be enslaved. Touch him and I will dismantle you and make sure you /never/ return to Revan. Is that understood, droid?"

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"You are not listening!" He said, angrily. "That man is no Jedi... do you not think that Revan would like to turn him to the Darkside? For now he is but a Gray Jedi... touch him... and your life will no longer be existent." He had flipped on this comlink to Revan's while he was talking about Mako. "You must be a foolish droid to think that Revan would be pleased to hear that you killed a potential ally... especially one who is strong in the Force." He brought the comlink from behind his back. "Wouldn't you agree, Lord Revan?"

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