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l hope everyone will like my maded story l was prepearing all weak here it is

 

Star Wars Knights of the old republic

 

Chapter one

Return of the jedi

 

In the galaxy's darkest hour the mighty jedi exile and

his compennions went to the malachor system to

find darth traya.The great jedi knight exile went in

to the deadly confrantation with traya to ditermen the

fate of the galaxy the great sith lord darth traya was

prepering to create a wound in the force much greater than

the great jedi knight exile

coused by going to the mandalorian wars but the great exile

defeated kreia but before killing her kreia spoked

That the treat was not just malachor 5

but also the war in the unnoun regions that revan went to fight then

he disaited to go to the unnoun regions to find revan.

Visas staid at malachor to wait for ather jedi knights

to come

but there weren't any jedi comming after then the great

jedi master Bastila was prepearing to train her child Shatyl Shan

to restore the jedi order but after then the republic has founded

out that

there is a new threat to the galaxy the ruttles sith emperor has risin

from the unnoun regions with a sith armada to begin a conquast of

the republic the great jedi exile returned from the unnaun regions he

arrived at the planet telos to bring good news to admural carth abaut

Revan.Exile told carth that Revan survived the war but he was no

were to be found then carth desited to begin finding clues were

Revan

is gone to.Mean wyle the great Sith Emperor has began an attack on

the planet Naboo the Great queen of Naboo has demanted a short

nagociation but the Emperor did't agread to the queen's negociations

The Emperor has sended a big army to the planet they quckly seased

the city of Naboo then the Queen has sended a distress call to Republic.

Now the Republic is prepearing a plan to free Naboo..........

 

The next part of my maded story will come next time this is only part one.

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