MsFicwriter

Well, the dark side definitely seemed evident in Tamara from the start. I had a guess that her ferocity had to do with her lightsaber, she seemed quite extreme for a Padawan disciplined since birth. Overall, it seemed short, but sufficient. If you wanted to edit it, maybe you could have them initially spar with the training weapons, and then have Tamara pick up the actual saber. Looks pretty good, answers a few questions, and leaves some still hanging.