MsFicwriter

Haha, not quite literally. It was very interesting that the holocron was made out of flesh, I've never heard that before, it seems super dark. I though that the use of the earbuds was a little strange, it seemed like that part didn't fit in that well. Makes me think of an iHolocron. I think that maybe a better avenue to pursue would be using the Force to listen. I kind of wish that you had not tied Revan into it somehow, but I suppose that you have good reason for this, we'll just have to see. Not that I think you are doing poorly at all, I just think that this story is good enough to stand by itself and not have to hang in the shadow of Revan.

Overall, very good and very intriguing.