MsFicwriter

I've read the past couple of chapters, and there are quite a few behaviors that I find to be strange. I find it odd that Master Karos is so bent on destruction. Possibly the trait of a Padawan, but definitely not a Master. I would think that some of the other Jedi would take note of this behavior, and confront her about it. I also think that an exceptionally well trained person such as a Jedi would not rush into a conflict as quickly as was depicted in the last chapter. It seemed very, very abrupt to me. I would imagine that a Jedi Master would recognize the dangers of such a mission, and accept the fact that there would be little that they could do about it. It seems illogical that a wounded Trandoshan, two Padawans, and one Master could do what the delegation of Jedi Masters and Republic officers could not. However, I do understand your desire to move on from this fic, but I think that it could have been done a little more smoothly.