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Guest Dark Sad Shadow

well here is one of my work i hope i done a good job translating hope you like it

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Silence, Lonely, Tear and Sadness

Silence

The silence is around your room

the silence is around your soul

the silence dont allow you to speak

because it flows in your heart.

 

Lonely

You feel your lonely by your side

it tells you to be alone

you feel the lonely in your soul

because it flows in your heart

 

Tears

You feel tears in your face

you feel the cooldness that they leave in your chest

you feel tears in your soul

because drowns in your heart

 

Sadness

"You feel sadness seeing that the lonely is your partner, you feel sadness when you want to express yourself and being in silence, you feel sadness seeing how the tears begins to flows trought your eyes...

 

¿Why dont you clean your tears, why you dont abandone your lonely, why you dont break the silence and say i love you...?

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And here is the original

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Silencio, Soledad, Lágrima y Tristeza.

 

Silencio

El silencio ronda tu habitación,

el silencio ronda tu alma

el silencio no te da palabras

por que inunda tu corazon.

 

Soledad

Sientes la soledad a tu lado

te aconseja que estes solo

Sientes la soledad en tu alma

por que inunda tu corazon

 

Lágrimas

Sientes las lágrimas en tu rostro

sientes la frialdad que dejan al caer en tu pecho

sientes lágrimas en tu alma

por que inundan tu corazon

 

Tristeza

"Sientes tristeza al ver que la soledad es tu compañera, sientes tristeza al querer expresarte y quedarte en silencio, sientes tristeza al ver las lagrimas salir de tus ojos...

 

¿Por que no limpias tus lágrimas, por que no abandonas tu soledad, por que no rompes el silencio y dices te amo?"

 

 

 

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Guest Rogue15

ok, redwing, give me that carbonite gun over there, please.

 

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Guest EvilleApplePie

Originally posted by Dark Sad Shadow:

mmmmmmm........ anyone else who want to share his opinion ?

 

I like it, you did a great job on translating it.

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