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Is it a bird, is it a plane???? Screenshot


Lovett

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good start. here are my suggestions.

 

-darken the face shadows so the eyes dont look so hollowed out

-brighten the eyes a bit

-add some texture/depth to the outfit and maybe darken those colours a bit. you know how crayons have regular colours and then another box is 'bold' colours? use the ones from the bold box.

-sharpen the muscle definition a bit.

 

i looks forward to the next shots.

 

-Tems

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^^^ Most of temps suggestions,

 

make sure it doesn't look that bright, make it darker.

Make sure there is more difference in the outfit color (dark-light effect)

Try to remove the "cutnpaste" look of the face. Read more tutorials about clothing, creating realistic hair etcetera. And don't give up on it until it rocks :-)

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