yrean Posted May 1, 2002 Share Posted May 1, 2002 screw it...ill post my map here.... http://www.geocities.com/heffron777/duel_waterfall.zip dl'it check it out and let me know what you guys think.... hope you enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yrean Posted May 1, 2002 Author Share Posted May 1, 2002 what no one checked out my map....i know theres one or 2 things i need to fix i found after it was on my server....anyone else got some critique?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordNausea Posted May 1, 2002 Share Posted May 1, 2002 I wanted to take a look at it, but the download link is down. Have you moved it to another location or can you mail the map to me? (lordnausea@web.de) Thx in advance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Nip Posted May 1, 2002 Share Posted May 1, 2002 Hey, relax. Where I am, you posted at about 10 at night and checked again at 9:30 in the morning. A lot of people are asleep or heading in to work during that time. Be patient! I'll check out your map when I get home (as long as I remember to read the thread again) and post some comments if you like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yrean Posted May 1, 2002 Author Share Posted May 1, 2002 that is true....i forgot i just got switched to night shift and im working wierd hours...the map is pretty tight besides some minor fixes...its not my first map but the first one ive done using radient....so let me know. LordNasea im email it to you now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adillon Posted May 1, 2002 Share Posted May 1, 2002 hey, would you mind posting some screenshots (or links to them) so those of us at work who can't download and play your map can have a peek now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yrean Posted May 1, 2002 Author Share Posted May 1, 2002 im trying to take some snapshots now...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[LoRD]RaoulHooD Posted May 1, 2002 Share Posted May 1, 2002 I downloaded your zip, and when I unzip it I get an unexpected end of file error... I don't know if maybe you're in the process of uploading a new version right now so I'm getting only a partial file, but I just thought I'd give you a heads up.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordNausea Posted May 1, 2002 Share Posted May 1, 2002 Ok. Two friends of mine and me tested your map some minutes ago. I think the general layout is interesting, but here are is what we would like to see ... improved - the light is way to bright - on the top of the waterfall the water flows backwards - a part of the ramp on the right side of the waterfall (not the one with the X-Wings) is not textured and you can look right through it - we think that the grass is annoyingly green - on the left side of the waterfall is a hole in the stone wall and you can see the water from the side - the white texture below the X-Wings makes no sense to us - the textures on the walls, surrounding the arena, are too often used - there are no shadows casted by the environment cos there is no light (except the ambient) I hope this helps you to improve this map. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UniKorn Posted May 1, 2002 Share Posted May 1, 2002 I suggest you add some screenshots, otherwise there won't be a lot of people checking out your map. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Devil Posted May 1, 2002 Share Posted May 1, 2002 i want it cuse i like warter maps but the link is not working ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yrean Posted May 1, 2002 Author Share Posted May 1, 2002 theres a post a little ways down where i uploaded the map too....i will be fixing a few things...lighting especially...and a few other things ive noticed and have had people point them oiut......i appreciate any other comments... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RichDiesal Posted May 1, 2002 Share Posted May 1, 2002 My suggestion would be to fix the texturing problems that LordNausea pointed out... but then, I'd like to see the "exterior" part of the level removed. I know it might have taken you a while to put together, but for a duel map, it just seems to big. I would suggest reducing all the "grassy" areas to just a ring around the pool of a water... that would limit most combat to the bridge above the water and on top of the waterfall itself. But that's just a suggestion, you can build the map however you like... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yrean Posted May 1, 2002 Author Share Posted May 1, 2002 ive done alot of that...now i just need to add different lighing... i messed that up... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Devil Posted May 1, 2002 Share Posted May 1, 2002 the link does not work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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