MY First Model (no skin)

[[supa] jedi]

Hey guys i made 2 models 1 a lightsaber and 1 a glock . PLease look at it and tell me some things i can do to make it better. Im prepaired 4 u guys to make fun of it (because u all r pros). But remeber its my first time. But please take a look and thanx.

 

 

My light saber & glock url :

http://www.imagestation.com/album/id=4291553593&congratulation_page=Y

[[supa] jedi]

Lol oops sorry wrong url

hehe

P.S. I know my saber is plain lookin

 

 

Light saber and glock picks:

http://www.imagestation.com/album/?id=4291553593

[[supa] jedi]

ok some1 tell me how it is or somethin please!!!!

[Twisted Vertex]

Um, Too fat, Short, and very simple. Try move more verts around and playing with the overall scale...good start...

[cROsIs**]

Well said Mus. Hey, ITS MY 100th post

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Again.

[[supa] jedi]

Hey thanx both of u ill make a new 1 right now also can u give me a good skin programer and a link 2 it thanx

[bomberman_xc]

better than i could do but mus is right...

[[supa] jedi]

lol thanx

[[supa] jedi]

New Saber(no skin)

http://www.imagestation.com/album/?id=4291548497

Tell me how it is, please!!! hehe

[bomberman_xc]

it's coming along nicely but the bottom of it looks kinda screwy. if you narrowed the top of it so it doesn't have taht edge sticking out where the shaft stops and the angled bottom begins, taht would look better. and maby if you added some kind of shield that goes up around where the blade comes out, if you need more info on what i'm talking about tell me.

[bomberman_xc]

i'm talking about shrinking the top of the bottom tube that is angled, incase you were confused

[bomberman_xc]

actually what i just said probably made it more confusing

[Pyro638]

Like the saber - LOVE the gun...

[[supa] jedi]

so u want me to mae the bottom stright or less screwy and make the top stop bulgin out??? O yeah what is that sheild part u were talkin about ????

[[supa] jedi]

Im makin 2 new 1s ill post them up 2morrow

[-[MotU]-Lyger|=-]

I made a better saber my first try:P not dissin or anything. ummm my guess is to try again, if there was a way i could show you guys my saber...

[KBell]

Lyger, if you have a pic of your saber i would be happy to host it. Just send her here at Bakers8er@Yahoo.com and ill post it right away

[[supa] jedi]

Hey -=|Lyger|=- when u get the model on a site or whatever put the link on this post 2 ok!!!