Darth_Yuthura

if there's a lot of typos, then yes, it takes from the story. but i saw people commenting on the fact it was 'hutt' not 'hut.' but you only made that typo once, compared to about 5 other times. you did spell padawan wrong in the first bunch of chapters, but i knew what you meant, so i ignored it.

i don't like the new Yuthura story thats out lol i read the first chapter and thought... its not as good as the one im reading and i dont fancy reading the same story twice. i liked your idea because it was original ^^

about the Atris thing? i'm all for it haha. Atris wasn't killed if you were light side - instead she stayed with the holocrons. after the defeat of the sith, she could have realised 'maybe im on the wrong side.' cause she seems like that sort of person... and when the exile goes to 'question her' about the holocrons, she could ask to be taken back, and be denied.

because we hate her. ^^