Darth_Yuthura

It sounds pretty good. It would be pretty convincing - that quote reminds me of Sion lol.

Though, don't try to concentrate completely on this OC. And if so, there should be something besides an old friendship, as a motivator to try and turn him to the light side.

you could say she was trying to 'pay back her debts to Revan' because he did this for her? A way of relieving herself from feeling guilty and 'imprisoned' by feeling the need to repay him.