Darth_Yuthura

Yeah I get what you mean.

Our teachers always told us 'when you're describing, use all 5 senses.' I usually always forget the sense of smell though.

Funny thing was, for everyone else, they used a very structural, logical approach to description, whereas I ignored everything the teacher said, and did my own thing. She probably thought I was an ignorant fool.

That aside, if I were describing the Katarr scene, I'd mention:

How she was meditating, like the sound of her breathing

the debris

the sky colour, kind of like if it reflected the ground.

The lack of movement in the area - just silent, stillness.

That's how I see it.