Darth_Yuthura

Oh I know the 'overboard' problem all too well. I didn't think you had... but I know what it's like when you look over your work, and you say something like... 'what the hell was I thinking?'

Don't. I thought your description of emotion was fine. And you don't need many details for the story to sound enriched - you're saying I use a lot of it, but I don't need it all. If you're impatient with consistent detail, just add one extra word to a sentence, or paragraph. One extra description. You'll find it goes a long way.