Darth_Yuthura

Guilt is definitely a powerful motivator. I think that's what the basis of your fiction is about - guilt. This is from my own perspective, but even from leaving her friends behind in slavery, even in Revan helping her, Alfred helping her, and maybe even in leading Ross down the wrong path. You know what would be interesting for your story? If Ross turned to the dark side.

At the start of my fiction, I intended to present Mira as someone who thinks 'it was unfair' and 'it shouldnt have happened' - basically frustration about everything, but once she's realised thinking about these things wasn't going to help, she decides she has to accept it, and change it.

Ever been told you have to accept something you greatly dislike? It's difficult.