Darth_Yuthura

Hmm, I imagined Bastila and Carth on a different planet/aboard a ship, and being told of the rebuilding of the enclave, and then in chapter two, arriving on Dantooine, with the Exile.

Who has Carth, by the way? lol or isn't he a main character in the story?

Have you read my suggestion about Mira? I mean, I don't want her to be left out during the first part of the fic, but she's hardly got a very Jedi background/lost anything in the past few months/done anything terrible or anything to write about.