Darth_Yuthura

It's good you weren't online all that time lol my screen went blank, and it took ages to figure out what to do. Fixed it though.

Past? Well, give me a few examples in your story that you couldn't keep in past tense, and I'll show you how to overcome it. It's simple really, but I get what you mean. If you don't like it, then you don't want to do it.... subconsciously, anyway.

Thank you very much - I tried to get a lot of description in the first few paragraphs, to save myself from having to write so much during the dialogue. But... I still wrote a lot during the dialogue... It's a habit. '