Darth_Yuthura

It feels strange telling someone older than me about grammar lol sorry if it sounds a bit patronising.

and you should go through and look specifically for errors. I rarely get told that I've made an error, and if I have it's usually a typo, or people just disagreeing for the hell of it!

Should Alayna discover that Kreia was telling the truth, yet? Doesn't sound like a very good idea, to get the main inner conflicts out of the way before even the end of chapter one. If anything I think you should leave it at a point where the exile is unsure whether Kreia is lying or telling the truth, because she doesn't know whether it applies to everyone else.