Darth_Yuthura

You could say I know how guys think... actually, I think I understand a lot of them more than most girls. But I never really considered how it affected my writing.

Honestly, I saw no typically male wording in SiD. I mean, not many guys are as emotional as Yuthura, for one! And also, she sounds pretty female, just one that's been through a rough past. Exactly what you're aiming for, right?

Maybe your writing is based on how you think/speak. I'd like to think I'm more like a girl >_> but I probably don't lol. Not that I act like a guy, but... eh. I don't know.

I liked your story, there's nothing wrong with the gender!