MsFicwriter

I tried to go to chapter 7 and the system tells me there are only six. So I went and read the reviews.

The one thing I noticed is she is nitpicking, but not flaming you. She's picking specific points in the story, and saying 'why didn't you do this?'. I flipped back further and will have to read each chapter and comment to see if there is justification for her comments, but if I had written that review of your work, I doubt you would have been as upset. Give me a few days, and I'll do just that