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  1. Hey guys long, long, long time no speak! I havn't been on here for ages. As I think you've all mentioned personal life, college and what not just gets in the way but It's good to see your all still alive! I've just read through your ideas for starting a new thread and I love the idea. I have all our other RPGs on my computer and we have all really evolved and it would great to be able to write with you guys again. As for a new thread count me the hell in! Let's create the best thread this site has ever seen! We have all know what we're are capable of so lets do it! Much Respect. J.O.D
  2. (oooh more people) Jax stared half amused half awestruck at the small figure. "I wasn't aware we hired dwarfs" Rezillo chuckled Jax gave him a piercing look. Jax turned back to the new comer and beckoned the small figure over "don't be afraid" Jax said gently.The door behind him slid slowly open with a loud creak. It was the door the dark figure came from just moments ago. It was still pitch black. Jax looked at rezillo. Rezillo smiled and threw a flair down into the depths. Nothing. Rezillo looked puzzled and went for another flair. "That wont work" Jax muttered. Jax stood on the edge of the darkness. He felt cold. He felt the traces of anger and hatred. He ignored them and stepped into the dark. The world turned black and white. He turned back. He could see Rezillo's shocked face. "BOSS?" he yelled. Rezillo's voice echoed strangly. Everything on the other side of the dark seemed strangly blurry. Rezillo squared his shoulder and walked into the dark. He appeared with a look of horror. "It's like stepping through ice" he said shivvering. Jax ignited his lightsaber and Rezillo followed suit. "There is something here Rezillo..." Jax murmered. A red light glowed ahead. Jax knew what this meant. Treth's aprentice. Jax stood still. The sound of laughter echod around them but it suddenly stopped. "Welcome to the depths...Jax Polara....Emperor of Darkness"
  3. (wow another person!) Jax shivered and slowly stood up. Blood was seeping from his shoulder. He tore his robes and wraped them around his shoulder and winced. He stood and felt light headed but managed not to fall. He walked over the shattered remnants of his lightsaber and threw them up to Rezillo, who glanced at them. "Repairable, boss" he said He tweaked it a bit and looked around. He jumped down and grabbed a fusion cutter from a dead imperial pilot. He fiddled with it a bit more and passed it back to Jax. "Just be careful with it, I don't know how durable that is" "Yeah sure thing" Jax iginited the blade and swung it around a bit. It felt like it would break but Jax took it. He pocketed it and turned to Gus and Rezillo. "Who's up for an adventure?" he aksed
  4. (these forums are slowly dying) Jax sensed something behind a door and used the force to open it. On the other side of the door it was pitch black. A red light glowed brightly. Jax gripped his lightsaber. The dark figure stepped forward. Jax gritted his teeth. "Who are you?" he demanded the figures scared face turned to Jax. He showed no emotion, no recognition that he heard Jax at all. Jax was frustrated. Several sparks amitted from around him. His anger was starting to take control. Jax sighed and gripped his blade. The figure showed a burst of speed and appaeared inches infront of Jax. Jax did not move he did not flinch. Even when the blade entered his shoulder. Jas fell to one knee and yelled. He jumped up and delivered a roundhouse kick to his enemy. He fell to the floor gasping for air and glutching his wound. The figure did not move. He just glared down at Jax. Jax stood up with great affort and attacked the figure with his lightsaber. He was limited to one arm. The figure dodged all the attack and did a spinning kick in the air which hit Jax on the head. Jax hit the deck and lay on the floor. His lightsaber was a few feet away. He reached for it but the figure crushed it with his foot. "That was my masters" Jax growled Jax stood again. The figure elbowed Jax in the upper back and Jax flinched. Jax fell back to the floor. A crash made Jax raise his head. Rezillo had gone through the shield and his B wing hit the figure full on and crushed him against a wall. Jax smiled and passed out.
  5. Aton dodged a blaster shot and backed into the library. There a group of confused and scared looking Jedi gathered whispering they stopped when Aton and the others entered. "What's going on?" asked a young Jedi "Clone Troopers have entered the temple with Skywalker" Aton muttered He turned as a clone trooper flung himself round a corner Aton Force ushed him away and closed the doors quickly. He used the force to block the door but he knew once skywalker was near it wouldn't do much. He turned to a a few Jedi "Well? Lightsabers out!" he said Aton realised he was one of the most experienced Jedi there. He ignited his blades and waited. The door moved slightly and then burst open. Anakin walked in with a horrible look on his face Clone troopers followed firing their blasters. The Jedi blocked the shots but some were unlcuky. The Jedi were in a big clump and Clone were raining fire down from above "SPREAD!" Yelled Aton and the Jedi all moved away to fight their own battles Aton charged at skywalker but a clone commander stopped him Aton force pushed him onto the balcony above but the clone was well equiped. He used a grapling hook to drag Aton up to him. The clone withdrew two small electro staffs and stood ready. Aton smirked but the clone lunged forward. Aton blocked him and jumped and spun around. The landed a few feet away. The clone stood for a moment and then fell. His head rolled away. Aton looked over the balcony and saw in horror Skywalker was killing Jedi at a fast rate. Aton gulped and dropped down infront of a Jedi who was about to killed and blocked Anakin's attack. "GO!" He yelled at the Jedi as he blocked another attack. "You are no match for me!" Anakin screamed. Aton just grimaced and force pushed Anakin away but Anakin was too strong. Anakin slid a few feet back but managed not the be flung away. Aton twirled his blades and waited for Skywalker to make the next move.
  6. (sorry I havn't posted in ages) Jax sighed heavily and dodged Tie fire and swerved by the star destroyer and saw the sheilds. He fired an EMP missile and followed quickly behind it. The shield would not go down but it would be weak, very weak and Jax would crash right through it. The EMP hit the side and the shield fuzzed slightly and Jax crashed through the shield. For a moment everything went purple. Jax slid across the floor and saw Gus and a dark figure. Jax jumped out from the cockpit and used the force to stop his B wing from crashing into the wall. He turned to Gus and the figure who was injured. "Having fun?" Jax asked coldly not waiting for an answer he turned around "There is a presence of evil here Gus....we must find it preferably before it finds us"
  7. Jax realised what was going on and ordered the ships to stop bombing the star destroyer. "He's put the star destroyer on a collisions course with that Sith Cruiser" Jax pulled up. "Let's see what this ships shields are like" Jax fired a wave of bombs at the ship. Before the bombs could even touch the ship they disolved. Jax raised his eyebrows. "Viper group hold off for a moment" Jax dodged infront of a Tie Intercepter. The Tie fighter followed him as he had hoped. Jax led it towards the Sith Cruiser. He pulled up and the Tie Interceprtor went staright forward. Instead of pulling up and narowly missing the hull it disolved before it got close. Jax was shocked. He glanced around. The nose of the star destroyer was almsot touching the ship... As the star destroyer got closer it started to disolve "That....Power?" Jax stammered "Gus can you sense that power? It's so....evil" Jax whispered. Then it hit him. Gus was inside! "GUS GET THE HELL OUT!" "Leave that Sith Cruiser we will not be able to penetrate it's shields!" said Viper Leader More and more star destroyers were arriving. "Come on Gus" Jax muttered "We're being outnumbered! Command we can't hold out much longer!" Viper leader yelled "Gus get a move on" Jax said as more of the star destroyer started to disolve infront of their very eyes...
  8. Jax fired and took down a tie fighter. He started his attack but an X wing cut him off and he had to dodge. "What the?" The X wing landed in the hanger "What does he think he's doing? we're bombing the damn thing!" Jax yelled "Viper group continue as planned. His life is in his hands" Viper leader said sharply "Copy that Viper Leader" Jax turned around and started his atack. He released the pay load and the hull of the ship rippled with explosions. A few auto turrets were taken out but no major damage was done. Jax started his second attack run when he felt something in the force. He looked around. He had felt a dark pressence gathering. A Imperial cruiser exited hyper space. It was massive. It was nothing like a star destroyer. Jax closed his eyes and felt a dark power being admitted from the ship. "Darth Treth" he muttered "Viper squad! Imperial cruisers are jumping out of hyper space all around the planet! They have it surrounded. They are starting the invasion!" "Boys there's not much we can do here" said Viper Leader "We're admitting defeat?" "No. Better to live for now and fight for later" Jax nodded. "We are out numbered" he muttered A message blared out over the comm. "You are not to return to base! Do what you can!" said a voice filled with static "What? we'll be slaughtered!" no answer. "You heard him boys. Let's do what we can!" Viper squad started their bombing...
  9. Jax shot into the darkness. "Jax what are you doing?" Jax waited. Sure enouhg his laser bolt hit the star destroyer as it exited hyper space. "Good call!" said Viper Leader "Ok Viper Squadron let's go!" Viper squad started their attack. The other fighters were left to do whatever they had to do. "Ok boys we've got a new guy now, Don. I want to him to errr...be around the see the next mission understand?" "Yes" some of them muttered. "Ok" Jax said "Rezillo and New be follow me on this next pass" "Copy that Viper 4" said Don "Right-O Boss!" "Don, it's Jax" "oh sorry V...Jax" Jax lead the the other two to attack. Sure enough Tie fighters were released from the hangers. Jax heard over the inter comm. "White group cover my guy's assualt other wise we'll be slaughtered" "Copy that Viper Leader" Jax gritted his teeth and opened fire....
  10. Viper ducked as a shot was about to hit right where his head was a few seconds ago. He rolled over and saw a figure behind him. He was trapped. He didn't know who the person behind him was so he took out his pistol and shot at Alpha squadron. He Pulled out his other one and kept it by his side just incase the person behind him was a enemy...
  11. Jax sat in the bitter cold outside the new base. His yellow jump suit barely protected him against the harsh weather. He sighed and walked back into the warmth of the base. He knew the empire were planning a mass invasion. He knew he would be thrown into the deep end of things. He knew that Viper Squadron would be forced to try and stop the empire from Invading the planet. He also knew of they failed they would have to return to the surface and help the effort. He shook his head. Sometimes he wondered why he bothered with Viper Squadron. Truth be told he was bored of it. He had said nothing to his friends but it was probably obvious. He walked over to his friend Rezillo and sat down next to him. "You might as well not bother" he said "Huh?" "We're going" "What already? The Empire hasn't even pulled out of hyper space!" "They want us to be ready and go straight into it" "great" Jax muttered. He stood up and walked over to his ship and stood by it until the alarm sounded. This was the signal for the fighters to prepare and get out. Jax climbed the ladder half heartedly. He sat in the cockpit staring into space until he heard "JAX GET GOING!" He jerked out of a daydream and looked around. To his horror the ships were leaving and many had taken off. He jammed his helmet on and closed the cockpit. He took off and sped away to catch up Viper Squadron. When he finally re-joined the group they were in space. Jax circled the empty space around the planet and waited for the empire to show....
  12. Name: Jax Polara Age: 24 Gender: Male Side: Rebels Rank: Pilot (viper 4), Jedi Knight Weapons: Purple Lightsaber, Blaster pistol, force powers Ships: Custom B wing or whatever is around
  13. Tiscalli aimed and took out another Trandoshan. He moved to rolled over and looked through his scope to see... "Droid snipers!" Tiscalli took a quick shot but missed by an a few inches. He swore and aimed again. He paid for not moving. The sniper now knew where he was and shot at him. The bullet him the floor infront of him and shot sand into his face. He rolled over this time and shot the droid in the chest. The droid fell over and lay motionles. "Strange" Tiscalli muttered "A lone droid sniper..." Tiscalli realised how odd this sounded and imeiatly looked back. Sure enough more droids started showing up. "err...Niner..." he said tapping him on the shoulder
  14. Tiscalli heard the shots and hit the deck. He turned around. In the distance he could see something shooting at them. He pulled out his rifle and looked down the scope. "Trandoshans" he muttered He targeted a sniper and rolled the barrel at the end of his rifle. He fired. Through the scope he saw the Trandoshan hit the floor. He rolled over and shot at the spotter. He fell to the floor too. "Niner enemys at mark..." a shot ricoshade past Tiscalli's head and he hit the floor....
  15. (I'm going to end Phinius's part in this story) Phinius ran blindly through the fog. He had no idea where he was going. It was hopeless. Phinius stopped and concentrated. He could see daylight. he opened his eyes and sure enough the sun was on his face. He turned around to see the wall of fog. Phinius walked away from it thinking to himself. What was the point? What did this prove? Phinius glanced back. He ran all the way back to the ship. He knew it would be obvious but he didn't care. he was going to sleep. He was going to sleep until he was needed again. Phinius had gained a special ability. He could hybernate without aging. Well he would age slightly but if he slept for say 100 years, he would only age 10 or so. He walked into his room and locked the door using the force. He was not to be disturbed. He lay down and put his hands on his chest. He closed his eyes and concentrated. His body went as stiff as a staute and he lay still his lightsaber bu his side. He would wake again only when Jax Polara was born.....
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