slapshot16 Posted April 12, 2004 Share Posted April 12, 2004 Okay I'm gonna try this if this story sucks just tell me and i'll be totally happy Anyways.. the story is about (duh) the battle for hoth. after the main fight and the rebel evacuation there is still another rebel base and the imps are looking for it. choose side rebel or imp but don't do both. and make a hero guy man dude. okay here's mine Name: Gves Vandar Age: 22 Bio: Gves was born and raised in the lower levels of coursant, where only the tough survived. He was tough. His first fight was a gang rumble he saw from outside his house. he got up to a high window and picked up his DL-XX Disruptior Rifle. The fight ended fast. He killed five. After that he traveled around selling himself as a mercenary. That's how he ran into the imperials. Now an Imperial merc for 3 years, his assignment is to find the rebel base on hoth and assassinate Admiral Orca. Strengths: Can kill ANYTHING from afar. Weakness: Close Combat. Equipment: DL-XX Disruptor rifle, Modified Tie Interceptor, Blaster Pistol, Vibro-Knife ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Gves threw down his water canteen in disgust. This was his third day out looking for the base, with no luck. His food was ruined from the cold, and his water was now ice. He mounted his Taun-Taun and rode on some more. Gves decided to take a break. He would just sit down for a little bit. He sat down and noticed something. A light. I was flashing. He could tell. He had found his objective. Gves snuck up to the side of the base. Only one gaurd. Simple enough for him. He crept stealthily up to the gaurd by the door. He raised his knife for the kill... untill he heard the sound of the door opening behind him. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ By the way..... NO SWEARING AT ALL! IT RUINS IT FOR JUST ABOUT EVERYONE. And one more thing... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE give us a way to defeat your character!!! (Thank you T10 for doing that! And I don't mean put a dislike like "My character dislikes wookiees" That doesn't give us a single clue on how to beat him. Thxs in advance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T10 Posted April 12, 2004 Share Posted April 12, 2004 Name: Trikon'eri Race: Twi'lek Sex: Male Age: 19 Affiliation: Rebel Alliance Bio: Brought up by a rich family on New Taris, Trikon'eri lived in luxury almost all of his life. However, 4 years ago, he was arrested in an Imperial counter-terrorist raid. With little evidence against him, and over-whelming Tarisian pressure, the local government was forced to release him. Embiitteed by the injustices suffered during his time spent in an Imperial cell, he decided to join against the Empire. New Taris, representing the state that it was in almost 4000 years ago, was in economic decline, giving the Rebels a good footing in the undercity. It didn't take long for Trikon'eri to find a cell, and he instantly became hooked up, using his credits to his advantage. Nowadays, he helps run supplies to the rebels, including firearms, rations and even new fighters. However, given his position, he deems himself highly likely to attack, and sorrounds himself with bodyguards at all times, making it hard to others to attack him. However, his own combat skills are non-existant, and so killing him when he's on his own is an easy prospect. Equipment: Holdout blaster 4 MN-40 Battledroids An almost limitless supply of credits (I'll post my bit of the story later, I need to go now.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
F-Bomb Posted April 13, 2004 Share Posted April 13, 2004 OOC: Name: Galvii Tonez Race: Corellian Homeworld: Corellia Weaponry: Vibro-Double-Blade, modified dueling shield. Allegiance: Imperial Bio: Galvii Tonez didn't lead the typical Corellian childhood. He didn't grow up fighting for his life and joining in gang warfare from an early age. He grew up in an elitist enclave, buried deep in the polar regions of the planet. He enjoyed a superior education and advanced combat training program put in place by the Empire, similar to that the Republic used to train the Grand Army. At age eighteen he was committed to the Imperial Army Special Operation Corps and placed in an elite melee unit. He was issued with his vibro-staff and a special model of dueling shield made to absorb barrages of blaster fire, leaving skilled melee combat or massive explosion the only thing that can effectively stop him. Currently assigned to Hoth, his unit is to assist and provide support in the destruction of the targeted Rebel holdout position. IC: Galvii Tonez signalled for his unit to move forward, closer to the Rebel position they had been ordered to remove. They were trailing a crack Imperial assassin and were to provide heavy support if it turned out that he needed it. Seeing him move into place near the base, the unit settled into position and prepared to charge at a moment's notice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doomie Posted April 13, 2004 Share Posted April 13, 2004 Name: Gander Kan. Race: Mandalorian. OOC: Homeworld:Coruscant. Weaponry: Standard imperial E-11 Blastech rifle, thermal detonators. Allegiance:Imperial Vehicle: None, always moveds towards the battlefield in a troop transport. Bio: Born during the clone wars, he was quickly discovered as a jedi talent by the jedi council. But he was only three years in training before the Empire rose. All jedi were being traced and killed, so Gander fled coruscant. He swore off the force (Like Kyle Katarn did) And thought it would be best to join the Imperial academy. After five years of being an Imperial TIE pilot, he was promoted to officer, but he thought he would be of more use in the field and didn't take it. Now, he is a normal stormtrooper, but thanks to his jedi training, he benefits from fast reflexes an a sharp eye, and thanks to his time as a pilot, he can fly most vehicles. Strengths: Good with vehicles, former jedi. Weaknesses:Thinks first, shoots later. (yes, that's a weakness.) IC: Gander, AKA TK- 423, was a member of commander Galvii's unit. He was waiting for the commander to give the sign for the attack. He saw the other unit's doing the same. Those rebels were in for quite a surprise... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot16 Posted April 13, 2004 Author Share Posted April 13, 2004 IC: Gves turned around fast and slew the unlucky rebel soldier with his vibro-knife. He turned to face the other rebel soldier and was looking into the barrel of his blaster rifle. "Don't move" The soldier pulled out his holocom. "We've got an intruder Admiral. Should I bring him in?" Admiral Orca appeared on the holocom. "Yes bring him in. But send out some soldiers. Make sure he's alone." " Yes sir" The soldier did as he was told. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
F-Bomb Posted April 15, 2004 Share Posted April 15, 2004 IC: Galvii saw the Rebel soldier surprise the assassin and was only moments too late to stop him from communicating with the officers in the base. However, he wasn't too late to keep him from apprehending the ranking assassin as he slew the soldier with a deep slash to the back of his torso. His unit followed up his actions, moving the body and pressing against the walls of the base, preparing to ambush any backup that was inbound. Galvii Tonez signalled to his favorite trooper and second-in-command, TK-423, that he should take a few troopers and find another entrance to the base. Gader Kan nodded and broke off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doomie Posted April 15, 2004 Share Posted April 15, 2004 OOC: That WAS controlling my character. But i forgive ya, cause i would have done so anyway. IC: Gander walked around for sometime, but then he spotted something. Two rebels, guarding something. Not wanting to take any risk, Gander requested Galvii to send some help to take them out. He pulled out his vibroblade and waited for an answer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot16 Posted April 16, 2004 Author Share Posted April 16, 2004 Vandar walked up to Galvii, and furiously blew up in his face. "What the heck are you here for?!?!? This was my mission! MY mission. I could have handled myslef just fine, but I have to say thanks. But don't follow me on my next mission. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
F-Bomb Posted April 16, 2004 Share Posted April 16, 2004 OOC: I know what it was Doomgiver. Also, we're a melee unit, and I didn't know that vibroblades had safeties. Also, we're a very leet unit, so keep that in mind. Slapshot, posted at the same time, I editted. IC: Receiving Gander's request over his radio, Galvii signalled to two more troopers to detach and follow TK-423; they nodded and silently ducked off. The rest of the unit stacked around the door and prepared for entry. He ignored the assassin's complaints, acknowledging them only with a signal to be quiet and fall in. Then he shrugged his classic "orders are orders" shrug. Galvii looked at the assassin and waited for him to fall in line with his troopers as a specialist wired a breaching charge to the door. He signalled to the troopers to activate their shields, and he powered his up, too. They were ready to enter the base. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doomie Posted April 16, 2004 Share Posted April 16, 2004 OOC: You never said anywhere this was a melee unit, so it seemed logical that stormtroopers had blasters. But you're the commander so i'll edit it... IC:The troopers arrived at Gander's location. Now it was three against two. Shouldn't be a problem. They crept as close as they could and then killed them both with some quick strokes. Gander informed his commander that the other entrance should be clear now. Then he went in. [edit] OOC: woops, you did mention it. sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot16 Posted April 16, 2004 Author Share Posted April 16, 2004 Vander fell into line with the other troops. He didn't like this Gavlii. He thought to himself " Maybe I should try to slip a knife into his back in the heat of battle. Yeah, that might work. But for now I'll just hang back and let these troopers get killed." He got a virbo-blade and slung his disruptior rifle over his back. The doors blew up with a loud BANG and Vandar, the troopers and Gavlii ran though the smoke into the base. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
F-Bomb Posted April 17, 2004 Share Posted April 17, 2004 OOC: It's ok Doomgiver, don't sweat it. IC: Galvii Tonez brandished his vibro-staff and charged in through the wrecked door. His unit barreled down the hallway, the front-runners making short work of the surprised Rebels they encountered. He ordered small detachments into the various chambers that broke off from the main corridor. The area secured, he turned to the assassin. "I'm taking three of my troopers to the power center of this base and planting the explosive charges as per my orders. Now that we've secured this holding, my troopers are finished with all ordered aggressive actions. As soon as we've planted the explosives, we're to withdraw to the forward command center. You're free to go about your mission, but you're on your own. Make sure you get out before the charges blow." Not waiting for a reply he turned his back on the assassin and activated his commlink. "TK-423, proceed as ordered. Make your way through your breach to the central power unit. The specialists and I will meet up with you there. We've secured the west corridor as our footpoint. Over and out." He turned to three waiting troopers. "Let's do this!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot16 Posted April 17, 2004 Author Share Posted April 17, 2004 Vandar nodded to Galvii, but he didn't notice. As him and the three troopers departed, he turned down the other hallway to search for the Admiral. He peered around the corner and saw a pair of rebel soldiers running to discover what the loud bang was. Vandar smiled. He was going to enjoy this. He took the disruptior rifle off his back and looked through the scope. He pulled the trigger. The force of the blow sent the unsuspecting trooper flying back down the corridor. The other trooper pulled his rifle and let a few rounds go at Vandar. Another quick, hard, trigger-pull silenced him. Vandar looked at his bleeding leg. The trooper had better aim than he had thought, and he had been shot in the leg. He didn't bother to hide the bodies as there was an attack and most people would figure the Imperials had done this. He put the disruptior rifle back on his back and hobbled down the hallway to find the Admiral. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doomie Posted April 17, 2004 Share Posted April 17, 2004 The three troopers did what Galvii told them to do. They snook trough the corridors, trying to find a way to the central power unit. He just hoped it wasn't too well guarded. His vibroblade was pretty useless at a distance. Luckily, they could mostly kill the rebels by standing around corners and attacking when they passed. Then his group encountered a locked door, with the letters 'power room' on it. He grabbed his comlink and said: 'We've found it but it's locked. What to do?' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
F-Bomb Posted April 18, 2004 Share Posted April 18, 2004 IC: Pulling his vibrostaff from a Rebel soldier's chest, Galvii Tonez replied to his commlink. "TK-423, hold position and establish a foothold is possible. Unit and specialist en route, we'll breach the door. Maintain defensive posture, don't get pulled from that position into other conflict. You have your orders, O and O." He directed his unit to press onward. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot16 Posted April 18, 2004 Author Share Posted April 18, 2004 Vandar leaned to look around the corner. He saw an entire battilion of rebel troops marching. There was at least a score of troops. Too many for him to handle alone. He looked down at his holocom. Galvii said he was on his own, but he had to try... Vandar punched in TK-423's signal. "TK-423 this is elite assassin Gves Vandar. There is a squad of rebel troops closing on my position. Need backup. Please respond..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doomie Posted April 18, 2004 Share Posted April 18, 2004 Gander heard vandar's call. He ordered the other troops to defend their position, while he would help the assassin. He wasn't a part of the Imperial navy, but he was good, and Gander had the feeling they could use all the help they could get. He picked up a dead guards blaster (just in case) and started looking for Vandar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
F-Bomb Posted April 19, 2004 Share Posted April 19, 2004 IC: Galvii Tonez kicked a Rebel's dismembered head down the hallway. It stopped bouncing and rolling with a wet thud against a very heavy looking door. He signalled to his men that this was the objective. Two other members of his command emerged from the other end of the hall. They updated him on the current situation. "Sir, TK-423 ordered us to maintain position. He headed to join the High Assassin and provide backup." Galvii rolled his eyes skyward. "Alright, you five, proceed as ordered. Specialist TK-521, prepare the breach of that door. If I'm not back in fifteen minutes, blow it and neutralize any resistance inside that room. Wire the charges and proceed with objectives. Set the mechanisms and issue the evac code as planned. The foothold position won't withdraw until you join them. I'm going to bring back TK-423. As of this point, he's insubordinating and should be considered a deserter of this mission; apprehend him if you see him and radio me if you've got him. Hold this position and proceed with objectives if you don't think that you can maintain the hold. I'll meet you at the rendezvous if I'm not back by the time you blow this." He activated his commlink. "TK-423, where are you?" Nothing except static responed. He swore and headed off down the hall, stopping only to slash off a wounded Rebel's arm as he reached for his blaster with his dying breaths. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doomie Posted April 19, 2004 Share Posted April 19, 2004 IC:Gander had just found Vandar and got ready for battle. The rebels fired at him, but he hid around a corner while he advised Vandar to do the same. Then he would simply wait until they came looking for him and slice them in half. At least, that's what he hoped to do, but these guys were smarter than the average soldier: They snook around him and fired from behind. Gander's helmet protected him from an otherwise fatal blow, but his comlink was down. 'great.' he thought. 'now i can't signal for help.' He quickly killed the rebels standing around the other corner and hid there. 'I hope Vandar survives, or i will die for nothing.' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot16 Posted April 19, 2004 Author Share Posted April 19, 2004 Vandar once again unslung the rifle from his back. "Another fun day," he thought as he took aim at one soldiers head. The impact force sent the head rolling. The rebel soldiers were confused. They were getting hit from behind. And Gves Vandar was enjoying it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T10 Posted April 20, 2004 Share Posted April 20, 2004 Trikon was out on his Taun-Taun, checking for Imperial activity in the distance, when his comlink went off. After digging through about 5 layers of clothing, he finally found the small, metallic device. Putting it close to his almost frozen ears, he flipped a switch at the side. After a small amount of crackling, he linked it up to his datapad, and tried to get a written translation of what was going on. Nothing. Then, the sound of blaster fire came through on the comlink, followed by screams as what sounded like soldiers being ripped to shreds by blades commenced. Trikon'eri wasn't sure what was going on, but he definately wanted to know. That was the side that always led him into danger, but he didn't mind. He just wanted the thrill of combat again. Signalling to his three bodyguards, Trikon'eri whipped the reins of his Taun-Taun and rode towards the base. Blaster in hand. And ready to make a quick retreat from the combat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T10 Posted April 20, 2004 Share Posted April 20, 2004 Trikon was out on his Taun-Taun, checking for Imperial activity in the distance, when his comlink went off. After digging through about 5 layers of clothing, he finally found the small, metallic device. Putting it close to his almost frozen ears, he flipped a switch at the side. After a small amount of crackling, he linked it up to his datapad, and tried to get a written translation of what was going on. Nothing. Then, the sound of blaster fire came through on the comlink, followed by screams as what sounded like soldiers being ripped to shreds by blades commenced. Trikon'eri wasn't sure what was going on, but he definately wanted to know. That was the side that always led him into danger, but he didn't mind. He just wanted the thrill of combat again. Signalling to his three bodyguards, Trikon'eri whipped the reins of his Taun-Taun and rode towards the base. Blaster in hand. And ready to make a quick retreat from the combat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T10 Posted April 20, 2004 Share Posted April 20, 2004 Trikon was out on his Taun-Taun, checking for Imperial activity in the distance, when his comlink went off. After digging through about 5 layers of clothing, he finally found the small, metallic device. Putting it close to his almost frozen ears, he flipped a switch at the side. After a small amount of crackling, he linked it up to his datapad, and tried to get a written translation of what was going on. Nothing. Then, the sound of blaster fire came through on the comlink, followed by screams as what sounded like soldiers being ripped to shreds by blades commenced. Trikon'eri wasn't sure what was going on, but he definately wanted to know. That was the side that always led him into danger, but he didn't mind. He just wanted the thrill of combat again. Signalling to his three bodyguards, Trikon'eri whipped the reins of his Taun-Taun and rode towards the base. Blaster in hand. And ready to make a quick retreat from the combat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T10 Posted April 20, 2004 Share Posted April 20, 2004 Trikon was out on his Taun-Taun, checking for Imperial activity in the distance, when his comlink went off. After digging through about 5 layers of clothing, he finally found the small, metallic device. Putting it close to his almost frozen ears, he flipped a switch at the side. After a small amount of crackling, he linked it up to his datapad, and tried to get a written translation of what was going on. Nothing. Then, the sound of blaster fire came through on the comlink, followed by screams as what sounded like soldiers being ripped to shreds by blades commenced. Trikon'eri wasn't sure what was going on, but he definately wanted to know. That was the side that always led him into danger, but he didn't mind. He just wanted the thrill of combat again. Signalling to his three bodyguards, Trikon'eri whipped the reins of his Taun-Taun and rode towards the base. Blaster in hand. And ready to make a quick retreat from the combat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
F-Bomb Posted April 20, 2004 Share Posted April 20, 2004 OOC: Hardcore, T10 IC: Blaster fire? Wonderful... Galvii ran in the direction that he heard the shots coming from and nearly barrelled into a Rebel soldier as he turned a corner. Reacting quickly, he leaned back on his heal and swung with his doubleblade, opening an enormous wound in the soldier's chest. He quickly dispatched another Rebel with a hard thrust through his neck when he turned to fire. As the body dropped, a disruptor shot bored its way towards Tonez. Nearly being cored by the shot, Galvii luckily dropped to the ground quickly enough, only suffering a burn on his shoulder from the stray shot. He looked up to see the assassin clutching his disruptor rifle right ahead of him. That treacherous little... Recovering quickly, Galvii dropped his blade and leapt for the assassin, tackling him and knocking the rifle from his hands. Getting him in a tight pin and a stranglehold, he exploded in anger. "What do you think you're doing?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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