Sabretooth Posted July 5, 2006 Author Share Posted July 5, 2006 *It took exactly 7 Months and 20 Days to complete the Fanfic. Names The primary theme for the beginning of the fic was "Crystals". *"Seliqa" was derived from "Silica". *"Camman" was taken from a company that manufactures compact binoculars. *"Crysm" is a mixture of "Crystal" and "Prism". *"On the Run" was chosen because of its similarity to "Onderon". *"Callader" was based loosely from "Blackadder" *"Xydan" was a combination of the random name "Xylophone Daniel". *"Jesqas" was taken loosely from "Jus' Kiddin'" *"Irtan" was based loosely on the Muslim name "Irfan" *"Torrdemnon Wassi" is the anagram of "Norman's Rowdiest", as a tribute to a friend. *"UR-14" originated when I was telling a friend of the chopper "Mi24". He replied, "You are 14", confused at the sudden change of topic. *"DY44" stands for "Do it Yourself For Four", in reference to Xydan controlling all four all the time. *Zivz 110011 is actually a codename. Zivz, when decoded through Atbash translates to "Area". 110011, is binary for "51". So Zivz 110011 can be translated to Area 51, the inspiration for the facility. Plot Changes *The original plot did not have the last ending, but was supposed to carry the two through adventures to Polis Massa. *Torrd was supposed to appear as a Deus Ex Machina on Crysm, but was postponed to Onderon, so as to make Wefive and Seliqa appear stronger. *DY44 was loosely modelled over a more grim version of Delta Squad from Republic Commando. *DY44 was supposed to fight the party at a refuelling station near Polis Massa. The plan was to kill off one member of DY44 there. *The Kwayci Massacre at the end was supposed to be a major brawl between DY44 and Seliqa, Torrd and Wefive. *Wefive kills Torrd in the facility. Torrd was originally going to die last, but ended up dying first, to give a hint on Wefive's intentions. *The scientists at Zivz are killed in a clone operation, prior to the incident. *The last two chapters, were actually one - The Ruins of Kwayci. They were broken up due to size. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 awesome work, Sabre. i betcha nobody saw that coming. i bet mach will give you a good report. now a little thought on mine? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sabretooth Posted July 6, 2006 Author Share Posted July 6, 2006 LOL, thanks RC! Now that I'm done with my own, I'll take a look around the centre and see how the more inferior writers fare. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted July 6, 2006 Share Posted July 6, 2006 dont make us feel bad check out mine on your way out, if you please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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