Guest SadShadow Posted October 20, 2001 Share Posted October 20, 2001 well here is one of my work i hope i done a good job translating hope you like it ------------- Silence, Lonely, Tear and Sadness Silence The silence is around your room the silence is around your soul the silence dont allow you to speak because it flows in your heart. Lonely You feel your lonely by your side it tells you to be alone you feel the lonely in your soul because it flows in your heart Tears You feel tears in your face you feel the cooldness that they leave in your chest you feel tears in your soul because drowns in your heart Sadness "You feel sadness seeing that the lonely is your partner, you feel sadness when you want to express yourself and being in silence, you feel sadness seeing how the tears begins to flows trought your eyes... ¿Why dont you clean your tears, why you dont abandone your lonely, why you dont break the silence and say i love you...? ----- And here is the original -------- Silencio, Soledad, Lágrima y Tristeza. Silencio El silencio ronda tu habitación, el silencio ronda tu alma el silencio no te da palabras por que inunda tu corazon. Soledad Sientes la soledad a tu lado te aconseja que estes solo Sientes la soledad en tu alma por que inunda tu corazon Lágrimas Sientes las lágrimas en tu rostro sientes la frialdad que dejan al caer en tu pecho sientes lágrimas en tu alma por que inundan tu corazon Tristeza "Sientes tristeza al ver que la soledad es tu compañera, sientes tristeza al querer expresarte y quedarte en silencio, sientes tristeza al ver las lagrimas salir de tus ojos... ¿Por que no limpias tus lágrimas, por que no abandonas tu soledad, por que no rompes el silencio y dices te amo?" ------------------ ¿Can you see that Shadow in the Tower? Yes...im watching over you... [This message has been edited by SadShadow (edited October 20, 2001).] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SadShadow Posted October 20, 2001 Share Posted October 20, 2001 hellow? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jem Posted October 20, 2001 Share Posted October 20, 2001 Nice job. I like the spanish version better, things are always at their best when they are in their original form. By the way, there was a Poetry forum created by Nitro where you could have posted it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SadShadow Posted October 20, 2001 Share Posted October 20, 2001 Thanx .. but looks like nobody else llike it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Redwing Posted October 22, 2001 Share Posted October 22, 2001 There's a poetry forum here? ------------------ At last we will reveal ourselves to the Jedi. At last we will have revenge. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cmdr. Cracken Posted October 22, 2001 Share Posted October 22, 2001 just keep it in like one or two threads. anymore at it'll start looking like RS.NET. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Thrawn Posted October 22, 2001 Share Posted October 22, 2001 My God! I could actually understand it in Spanish! I must be learning something in Espanol 4! ------------------ "Here, people don't lock their doors, they deadbolt them, and then stick a chair under the knob." ThRaWn90,RAL_Thrawn,SOB_Thrawn Rogue 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jem Posted October 22, 2001 Share Posted October 22, 2001 Originally posted by Redwing: There's a poetry forum here? I meant to say "Poetry Thread". There are 3 of them now!! <font size=1> [This message has been edited by Jem (edited October 22, 2001).] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SadShadow Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 where is it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jem Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 Well there's the "well here is it one.." thread by you, then there's the "A Bit of Poetry" thread by Rogue Nine and finally the "Poetry" thread by Nitro That makes 3 poetry related threads. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flying Beastie Posted October 27, 2001 Share Posted October 27, 2001 Talk about poetry in motion. ------------------ "Don't f_ck with the Jedi Master, son." --Mark Hamill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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