Rogue Nine Posted October 22, 2001 Share Posted October 22, 2001 I composed this a little while back. I don't have a title for it, so suggestions are welcome. Tis for someone very special to me. On that day, I was lost, Drowning in my sea of sadness. I’m so glad our paths were crossed, Because you took away my madness. Caught up in my own dealings, I failed to see, failed to mind, Your true feelings, Why you were so good, so kind. Whenever I shed a tear, You were always there for me. Yet your love did not become clear, Because I could not see. So many clues, so many hints I missed, Because I was not free. But from the moment we first kissed, I knew we were meant to be. Now love began anew, It was given a fresh start. I know this to be true, Because I gave you my heart. Whenever I see your face, That vision of beauty and loveliness, My heart quickens its pace, And all my troubles regress. When you’re not here I am lonely and unsure. But when you are near, I feel safe and secure. Love left its indelible seal, So true was Cupid’s dart. I know this to be real, For you have my heart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flying Beastie Posted October 22, 2001 Share Posted October 22, 2001 Meant to Be Second Chance Life Preserver (okay, I'm stretching it, but it's your metaphor) <small>And dude, what is with the metre?</small> ------------------ "Don't f_ck with the Jedi Master, son." --Mark Hamill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Nine Posted October 23, 2001 Author Share Posted October 23, 2001 Whaaat? I had a very affected writing style. Hmmm...I likes the second one, makes me think of a song I heard before... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andromeda Posted October 24, 2001 Share Posted October 24, 2001 hey i like it good job Niner too bad i've lost all of my poems, huh? now i can't post any of them in one of our poem threads... yes i'm sure you're all SOOO saddened by that ------------------ If you live to be a hundred, i hope i live to be a hundred minus one so i never have to live without you! SkirtPower@hotmail.com Official Forum Chick Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flying Beastie Posted October 27, 2001 Share Posted October 27, 2001 Rommie, why not just do some new ones? ------------------ "Don't f_ck with the Jedi Master, son." --Mark Hamill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Nine Posted October 27, 2001 Author Share Posted October 27, 2001 I'd really like to see those. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nute Gunray Posted October 27, 2001 Share Posted October 27, 2001 poems are for sissies and communists. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Rogue15 Posted October 27, 2001 Share Posted October 27, 2001 I don't think david (psalms) was a sissy or a commy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Nine Posted October 27, 2001 Author Share Posted October 27, 2001 Well, then paint me red and call me a Commie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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