HK-42 Posted March 21, 2007 Share Posted March 21, 2007 please post on this thread here. PROLOGUE The attempt to exterminate the Jedi led by Emperor Palpatine and Anakin Skywalker was at hand. It was abnormal that such an attempt would be made, but it happened. One Jedi Sniper, Von Made, was the first one to see Anakin Skywalker march up the stairs of the jedi temple. With the legendary 501st following him. Von made ran to the Jed Council room to warn Jedi Master Windu and the other members of the Jedi Council. Meanwhile Anakin Skywalker continues to fulfill his mission. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted March 21, 2007 Author Share Posted March 21, 2007 Chapter 1: The Shock Von Made ran into the High Council Room. He was disappointed to see only Jedi Master Coleman Kcaj there. “Master Kcaj,” Von said. “Anakin Skywalker and a legion of clones are invading the Temple.” “This is unexpected but I sense it is true,” Coleman said surprised. “We must try to repel the attack force.” Von nodded and wondered why Master Kcaj’s species were normally adept. Then he shook the thought out of his head and followed Coleman out the door. As they reached the entrance to the temple they were shocked at what they saw. Pillars were blown down with clones everywhere. Coleman looked at Von, “Von you need to secure the library help the jedi there. I will secure the Training room to protect the young ones.” “Yes master,” Von said. Then he ran off to the library. As he entered the library he annoyed the dead bodies of fellow jedi around him and started to clear out clones. He then saw Jocasta Nu, the temple’s librarian. He ran over to her. “Von, why are you here.” She asked. “Master Coleman told me to secure the library.” Von saw Jocasta start to respond when an explosion shook the bookcases behind them. Von turned his long dark hair swinging as he did. He saw Anakin Skywalker walking up behind them. Jocasta and Von activated their lightsabers. Anakin laughed at there attempt to worry him. “You jedi are weak,” he said finally. “Believe what you wish, Skywalker,” Von sneered. “I am no longer Skywalker,” Anakin told them. “But Darth Vader.” “So you have turned to the dark side, for what reason?” Jocasta asked him. “To bring real peace to the galaxy, through the galactic empire,” Vader told her. “Then you really have fallen,” Von said. “No, I have risen not fallen.” “W-What do you mean?” Von asked. “The jedi are evil, not the sith, they have all ready fallen, but I have risen,” Vader told him. “Join me and you will rise also.” “Never” Von shouted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted March 21, 2007 Author Share Posted March 21, 2007 Chapter 2: The Duel Von hit Anakin’s saber then quickly flipped back onto a ledge. “You’re a coward,” Anakin sneered. “No, I have a special rank one that you’ve probably never heard of.” Von said. “What?” Anakin asked. “A jedi sniper,” Jocasta Nu interfered. “What do they do?” Anakin asked. “This,” Von told him as he threw his lightsaber. Sadly it missed only cutting a small part of Vader’s torso. Vader grimaced but jumped after Von as though nothing happened. Von parried to the side, then threw his saber to Jocasta. She took it then ignited hers a second later. As Jocasta fought Vader, Von grabbed his comlink. As quickly as he could he contacted the Jedi Brutes. “Yes?” A jedi brute, Wom Farn, answered. “This is Von Made, a jedi sniper; an invasion is taking place,” “By who, the Separatists?” Won asked. “No, a jedi council member, named Anakin Skywalker. And a lot of clones he brought along.” “Where is he?” “The library, get down here,” “Right away,” The brute switched off his comlink. Von turned back to the fight and signaled to Jocasta. She nodded and tossed him his lightsaber. Von took it but nearly dropped it. It was covered in sweat. Von grimaced but jumped over Vader swinging his lightsaber in a long arc, slashing his shoulder. Vader let out a small yelp but quickly recovered. Then the brute came in, the door shattered as though it was a toothpick in the way. Vader stared at him. Von smiled at the brute’s dramatic entrance. With Wom on there side this should be easy. Sadly Von’s good mood ended a few seconds later. An explosion went off from a hidden detpack beside Wom killing him. Von and Jocasta would have to do this themselves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted March 21, 2007 Author Share Posted March 21, 2007 Chapter 3: The 3 Losers Vader turned back to Von and Jocasta; his eyes were now bloodshot red. Von Made stood ready to block any attack thrown at him by Vader. But it turned out Vader was not going to attack him. Vader then summand the power of the force to pushed Jocasta across the room, slamming her body against the wall. Von stared at Jocasta’s crippled body in fury. He used the force to summon her lightsaber to his hand. Then he turned to Vader. Von pulled his arms back- preparing for his attack – and the sabers fly out of his hands. Vader grinned as he used the force to pull Jocasta’s unconscious body to him. The sabers then stabbed into her body killing her. As unlucky as Von already was, by the time Vader let go of Jocasta’s body, Coleman Kcaj came into the library. “Von, what have you done?” He said in horror. “I-” Von started in protest. Coleman moved his attention to Vader. “You have lost, Skywalker,” Coleman told him. “All of your troops have been dealt with. You are the last invader.” Vader nodded. “But we will return, Coleman Kcaj, we will return,” With that there was a blur and Vader was gone. “Now, Von the Remaining Council Members shall see you soon.” Then Coleman turned to a jedi knight behind him. “You, please send a message to all jedi and tell them to return to the temple. Without using there Jedi Starfighter, it’s too dangerous.” “Yes Master Kcaj.” Then the knight ran off. 2 days later: “What happened in that Library, Von?” The jedi council member, Plo Koon asked. “I cleared the clones out of the room, and then I started talking to Jocasta.” Von told them. “Then Vader came in…” The story continued till Stass Allie interrupted. “Vader pushed her against the wall?” Stass asked him. “Yes.” “Then what did you do?” “I got angry and pulled Jocasta’s lightsaber to me, and then I threw them. Vader simply slowed them and pulled Jocasta’s body to him letting the saber go through her. Next, Coleman came in.” “Attacked through anger you say.” Yoda repeated calmly. Von sighed. “Yes,” “Then exiled you should be,” Yoda pointed out. Obi-Wan looked at Master Yoda in shock. “In my respect Master, Did he not save the temple?” “That he did.” Yoda said nodding. “Then why exile him?” Obi-Wan asked. “Need him no longer do we,” “Then,” Obi-Wan hesitated. “I will take him as my new padawan learner.” Von stared at him in surprise. He had never had a master due to his great skill in throwing a lightsaber he had immediately become a sniper though he did not have much knowledge in the force. Yoda seemed surprised to. “Agree I do not in this; make it a vote we shall.” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted March 21, 2007 Author Share Posted March 21, 2007 Chapter 4: The Results Plo Koon finished tallying the votes then looked up at the rest of the council. “The Results of the vote are…” Plo told them. “That Von is to be assigned to Master Kenobi as a padawan learner. Von stared at Master Koon in amazement. Obi-Wan who was standing beside him, bowed. “I respect the vote and still stand by my devotion. Von is my new padawan learner.” Yoda nodded. “Dismissed you may now be, Master Kenobi.” Obi-Wan nodded and left with Von following him. “Why did you do that?” Von asked him in wonder. “Many reasons, one is that I like you and believe you should be better trained. Two, Vader will come after both of us, its best to be together. And three because I knew your father.” “You knew my…?” Von started to ask. Then Obi-Wan’s comlink link beeped, he pulled it off his belt. “Jedi Master Kenobi, this is Captain Typho, I need you in Padme’s office right away.” “I’ll be there as soon as I can,” Obi-Wan replied. Then he turned to Von. “Come with me, we need to find out what this is about.” 1 day later “What did you learn form your visit to Senator Amidala’s apartment? Who was her Child’s father?” Plo Koon asked Obi-Wan. “It turns out I figured out why Anakin turned to the dark side.” Obi-Wan stated. Yoda and the rest of the council all looked surprised. “Shortly after the battle of Geonosis it turns out she married Anakin, but kept it secret,” “This is shocking, but it seems likely,” Master Ki-Adi-Mundi stated. “The children trained they should be.” Yoda volunteered “I’m not sure if Amidala would agree,” Master Koon replied. “Has she learned of Anakin’s fate?” Stass Allie asked. “No, she hasn’t we will tell her soon though once her children get a little order,” Obi-Wan told Master Allie. “Think I do that-,” Suddenly a snap-hiss was heard outside the door. The door fell and two figures walked in. They were completely covered in dark robes red sabers in hands. One of the figures reached up and pulled off his hood. Von saw the face of Anakin Skywalker, or “Darth Vader.” “Anakin,” Obi-Wan said in surprise. “You’ve returned so early?” Vader ignored him. “Where is Padme? He asked in a threatening voice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted March 21, 2007 Author Share Posted March 21, 2007 Chapter 5: The Council Duel “Where is Padme?” Vader asked again. Still there was no answer. “Very well,” Vader said. He twisted his lightsaber up at Von Made only for it to be blocked by Obi-Wan. There was a pause. Then Yoda looked at the other figure and asked, “Sidious are you?” The figure pulled back his hood showing a strange version of Supreme Chancellor Palpatine. Yoda stared at him in surprise. Palpatine nodded. “Yes, I am Sidious under your nose the whole time. Other Jedi Members activated there sabers, though Stass Allie still hadn’t ignited hers. Then Vader twisted back and punched Obi-Wan in the stomach, making him fall. Ki-Adi-Mundi pushed Vader with the force making him stumble, distracting him as Obi-Wan leapt back up. Sidious entered the fight as he threw up his lightsaber. He jumped up and grabbed it landing behind all the jedi. Sidious jerked back his lightsaber stabbing it into Shaak Ti’s back. Sidious laughed. “One down,” he said out loud. Von felt anger grip his mind as he saw Master Ti’s body. Then he shoved it off, jedi do not get angry he thought. Then he saw Sidious nod to Vader. Von felt Vader summon the force and turn to Master Allie. “Watch out,” Von yelled at Allie. But it was too late, the force was unleashed from Vader pushing Allie out of one of the windows and sending her to her death. Von heard Sidious mutter “That’s two.” Now Coleman had his saber ignited and was fighting Darth Sidious. Obi-Wan was fighting Vader along with Yoda, Ki-Adi-Mundi, and Plo Koon. Von ran over to Sidious and started to help Mater Kcaj. Vader reached out to the force again and pulled Von to the ground, still fighting the other jedi. Von watched the fight between Kcaj and Sidious hopelessly as Kcaj was slowly losing. Then Sidious beheaded Master Kcaj as he was moving in for attack. Von stared in horror as Coleman Kcaj was beheaded. Von leapt up and started fighting Sidious, anger running through his mind. Obi-Wan nudged him with the force and Von let the anger go away. It had almost triumphed. But he had to do it, his saber moved slowly to him as it stabbed Sidious in the heart. Von pulled it out letting the body fall to the ground. All of that seemed slow, then it speed up. Vader kicked Obi-Wan in the shin making him fall. He slashed Master Mundi’s leg making him join Obi-Wan on the ground. Seconds later Master Koon joined them both. Then Vader pushed Von out of the council. Von flew through the window and started to fall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted March 21, 2007 Author Share Posted March 21, 2007 Chapter 6: The Dealings Von fell through the air before he managed to grab on to a small ledge attached to the temple spire. He looked up to see Vader standing far above him, watching. Von summoned the force, as much as he could that was around him. Then he jumped. He jumped higher than Master Yoda ever had. He flew past Vader and threw his lightsaber at him. Vader caught the saber with the force and pulled it in to him. Von gulped, it didn’t look like he had much of a chance of living this battle. But suddenly Vader twitched dropping his saber. Von pulled it back to him and jumped again in the air landing back in the council room. He sighed in relief. Then he turned back facing Vader. “Padme…” Vader moaned. Then he collapsed. Yoda met Obi-Wan’s eye. “Wonder I do, what happened.” “It seems, Vader felt his children’s force presence.” Obi-Wan told the old master. “Strange this is, hidden they are. Have to be close they would be.” Von interrupted. “Maybe they…left the hiding spot,” “I agree with Von, they must have disobeyed us.” Ki-Adi-Mundi agreed. “Enough of this for now, we have the council to deal with, many have died.” Plo Koon told them. “Yes,” Master Yoda agreed. “Only 4 members left there are.” “I have some Ideas,” Obi-Wan said. 2 hours later Obi-Wan entered the room with jedi he had gathered for the candidates of the council. Yoda inspected them carefully. They were Kai Hudorra, Cin Drallig, Quinlan Vos, Voolvif Monn, Tholme, Roan Shryne, Fy-Tor-Ana, and Garen Muln. All Jedi Masters who had been important to the Clone Wars. “Interesting Candidates brought us you have, Master Kenobi.” Yoda commented. “Very interesting indeed,” Master Koon said eying Vos. “Master Kenobi, dismiss them you may for us to decide.” Obi-Wan bowed and turned to them. “I know, I know, I heard them,” Quinlan Vos said turning before Obi-Wan could say anything. The others followed him out. “Well?” Obi-Wan asked the council. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted March 21, 2007 Author Share Posted March 21, 2007 Chapter 7: Council “The members you picked are acceptable except one,” Plo Koon told Obi-Wan. “One,” Obi-Wan asked. “Quinlan Vos, picked him why did you?” Yoda asked him. “He has been fighting the dark side too much, putting him on the council might sift him to our side for good,” Obi-Wan explained. “Hmm,” Yoda said hesitating. “Summon him you may.” Obi-Wan nodded and turned to Von. Von nodded, “As you wish master,” he said before Obi-Wan could say anything. Then he turned and left the room. Von entered Master Vos’s room and looked around. Vos wasn’t there. Von looked around again suspiciously. Vos was known to take a certain datapad with him when he went offworld; if Von found it he could Master Vos. It wasn’t. He gulped and ran back to the council room. “Master Vos isn’t there?” Obi-Wan repeated. “Nope, and he took his offworld datapad with him,” Von confirmed. “Unusual this is,” Yoda told them. Quinlan Vos stood on board the bridge of the Assault Ship with the same question still stuck in his head, why had he turned? Darth Vader stood in the old building across from the senate and the jedi temple. The area was known as “The Works.” It had played a major part in the Second Battle of Coruscant when Sidious’s secret was almost revealed. The area of the Works Vader was in was the only part not searched by Mace’s team of searchers. “Vader, What are you doing destroy the jedi find a way to bring me back,” The Voice was around Vader. It was a voice Vader didn’t recognize. “What who are you? How could you be talking to me?” Vader said out loud. “I am Darth Plagueis, master of Darth Sidious. I have learned to talk through the Neither World of the Force.” “What do you want with me?” Vader asked. “I want you to hurry up and slaughter the jedi,” Plagueis sneered. “First my new apprentice needs to be ready, and then I need my son and daughter to become old enough.” “Do you think your wife will allow Luke and Leia join the sith? I mean think, she’s running from you.” “That our there name? Interesting, and yes the will become Sith I will make sure of it.” Vader told him. “Will you train them or Vos?” Plagueis asked. “I have told you enough of my plan, be gone do not talk to me again.” Plagueis felt Vader uncertainly of his last question. “I will go but I will return,” Plagueis said leaving. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted March 21, 2007 Author Share Posted March 21, 2007 Epilogue Obi-Wan was still confused about the disappearance Quinlan Vos. He sighed, Quinlan always had strange ideas, and it was probably nothing. Obi-Wan walked into his quarters and sat down on his small cot. Then he noticed his message receiver was blinking. Obi-Wan reached up and pushed a button that allowed the message to be replayed. He stared in surprise at the person who appeared. It was Owen. The ship was flying toward the jedi temple just as Obi-Wan arrived. He had visited his brother Owen before but that had been back when they were both around 17, a lot had changed since then. On the hologram Owen had looked just like Obi-Wan, which was not a surprise considering they were twins. What surprised Obi-Wan was that Owen had gotten married, not only that had a child. Had Owen had not have been with there Grandfather at the time Obi-Wan was taken to the temple both of them would have become jedi. Obi-Wan was still lost in thought when the ship landed. Yoda had been in the jedi library seeking information to see if the horrible battle of Order 66 had ever been foreseen for hours. Now shockingly he found it had. On the mission to Haruun Kal, Mace Windu had seen a vision of a place which at first he thought has the temple, but denied it because of the smell of fire. Mace had never mentioned it to him. His datapad also stated that another part of the vision he had seen Coruscant being attacked and bombarded by ships of impossible design. Yoda shut down his console in Confusion. What did this mean? He would have to find out. The End Note: A sequel is up. find it here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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