Fender Posted November 15, 2001 Share Posted November 15, 2001 Hurray! I finnally completed one of my songs..... Tell me how crap it is. Scale of 1-10, 10=Very Crap, 1=Very Crap. ------------------------------- When the world is your back Garden, When your life is just a game, And you hear the words inside of you, Telling you to take the strain, Play the Stage, Yeah! Gotta play the stage..... Time is just a format, Just an essence, just a claim, Feel the Strain inside of you, Don't let it make you go insane, You know the way to rid of it, And you can't let it take it's toll, But if you close the opening, Then you can take control, Gotta play the Stage, Yeah! Play through it all again, Gotta make your way, Yeah! Through the hurt and the pain, Gotta play the Stage, Gotta play the Stage, Is religion what it used to be, Full of wars and **** like that, Holiness is forgetten for now, But there may be a time, When all these things come to light again. Is it right that the world should fight? Why indeed is the world the way it is? Gotta play the Stage, Yeah! Play through it all again, Gotta make your way, Yeah! Cos it's never to late, Gotta play the Stage, Gotta play the Stage, When the world is your back Garden, When your life is just a game, And you hear the words inside of you, Saying life has gone to shame........ Copyright: Paul Andrews, 2001. -------------------------- ------------------ <IMG SRC="http://members.hostedscripts.com/randomimage.cgi?user=fender" border=0> <A HREF="http://www.bszone.f2s.com" TARGET=_blank> <IMG SRC="http://www.bszone.f2s.com/bilder/logo.jpg" border=0> </A> <SCRIPT LANGUAGE="JavaScript" SRC="http://members.hostedscripts.com/randomtext.cgi?user=fender"></SCRIPT> <A HREF="http://members.hostedscripts.com/guestbook.cgi?user=fender">Take my Survey!</A> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MtBlanc Posted November 16, 2001 Share Posted November 16, 2001 Originally posted by fender: Scale of 1-10, 10=Very Crap, 1=Very Crap. Ummm...yeah...maybe you should revise your scale there... ------------------ <IMG SRC="http://www.seanet.com/~osborn/sig.jpg" border=0> Right now, Dinghy Dog is <a href="http://www.imood.com/query.cgi?email=greg@osborn.seanet.com"><img src="http://www.imood.com/query.cgi?email=greg@osborn.seanet.com&type=1&fg=FFFFFF&bg=330060" alt="The current mood of greg@osborn.seanet.com"]border="0"></a> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guybrush122 Posted November 16, 2001 Share Posted November 16, 2001 wow..........thats a great song........need any help on writing it? i can do a punk/mosher sort of a tune for ya..... ------------------ <IMG SRC="http://www.imgstudio.com/lthumb/1112017453672.jpg" border=0> RIP Bradley ------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deadmeat1587246448 Posted November 16, 2001 Share Posted November 16, 2001 Wooohoo, nice song Fender. I've written a (depressed) song, i'll post it here someday. If you want. 9 btw ------------------ <IMG SRC="http://monkeyislandclub.homestead.com/files/deadmeat.gif" border=0> I'm the root of all that's evil yeah but you can call me cookie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fender Posted November 16, 2001 Author Share Posted November 16, 2001 Originally posted by Dinghy Dog: Ummm...yeah...maybe you should revise your scale there... Actually it was on purpose. And Have a go GB122, And I'll have a look at it. ------------------ <IMG SRC="http://members.hostedscripts.com/randomimage.cgi?user=fender" border=0> <A HREF="http://www.bszone.f2s.com" TARGET=_blank> <IMG SRC="http://www.bszone.f2s.com/bilder/logo.jpg" border=0> </A> <SCRIPT LANGUAGE="JavaScript" SRC="http://members.hostedscripts.com/randomtext.cgi?user=fender"></SCRIPT> <A HREF="http://members.hostedscripts.com/guestbook.cgi?user=fender">Take my Survey!</A> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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