Need some constructive criticism

[Pwnzor326]

I've started up a video game blog because people in the press side of the video game industry say that making a blog is a good thing for your resume because its like a portfolio of your writing skills. I just made it today and wrote one review. If you guys could go on their and give me some props or criticism on my writing it would help me alot.

 

heres the link:

 

http://new-hiscore.blogspot.com/