Comfort

[Grimalkin]

How's this?:

 

Comfort

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To the dark hole

Of the inner-void

To the coldness

That I scarce avoid

 

To the recess of the inner soul

Have I lost it,

Have I lost control?

 

Conscience

Clear

Do you whisper in my ear?

Or am I lost to the cold

Did I lose control

Am I listening?

Did I ever hear?

 

To the Brightness

Of your inner mind

To the comfort

That my comfort finds

 

I pledge honour

Though my soul is weak

I pledge truth

Though my mouth can't speak

 

To the ending

Of my futile shell

In the battle

Of the soul I dwell

 

I find comfort

In the midst of pain

I find sunshine

In your holy rain.

[Metallus]

I like it! Great effort. Good to see people are using this forum again .

[MtBlanc]

*claps*