MtBlanc Posted January 11, 2002 Posted January 11, 2002 Our understated existence Relies on faith. The collapse of life: A fault in belief. No beacon can pierce The darkness, Our existence. The valleys, The mountains: Our struggle is Our existence. The black does not mask, but only perceives. It is the medium of pain, It is life. Yay, 30 second poems are fun.
Metallus Posted January 11, 2002 Posted January 11, 2002 *snap snap* Thanks for the submission. May I pry as to what it's about? What inspired you to write it?
MtBlanc Posted January 11, 2002 Author Posted January 11, 2002 I was inspired to write it because you were complaining about the lack of content. As for what it's about: I think it's blatantly obvious. Come on Met. Actually, harshness of life, importance of faith, you know: hackneyed stuff. What else am I to think of in 30 seconds?
Metallus Posted January 11, 2002 Posted January 11, 2002 Heh, I have an idea about what it's about. Is there anything else you want to share about it? Contrary to popular theory, I don't like to hear myself talk all the time.
MtBlanc Posted January 11, 2002 Author Posted January 11, 2002 Not really, except there's an emphasis on blind faith. If you'd like to give your idea a go, I'd be interested to hear if what you think is what I was thinking.
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