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I posted this as a song in Escape MI...but can also be a poem too...so I just copied and pasted it from EscapeMI to Here...

 

Morning Mist Dew

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I sit here all alone,

I stare to the sky in the dark,

I find no remorse,

This place an evil source,

The sting...like a whip to the face,

The aftereffect like burning mace...

 

All the stuff you say,

All that light the way,

All you feel inside,

Like morning mist dew,

Tonight....

 

I love the way you are,

I love the way you love me,

I love the playful kiss,

But still you cant see this,

Oh, I say, you still cant see this...

 

All the stuff you say,

All that light the way,

All you feel inside,

Like morning mist dew,

Tonight....

 

All the stuff you say,

All that light the way,

All you feel inside,

Like morning mist dew,

Tonight....

 

I said I love (love) you (you)

I said I need (need) you (you)

Oh yeah...

 

All the stuff you say,

All that light the way,

All you feel inside,

Like morning mist dew,

Tonight....

 

*Talks*

I love you, girl

-------------no copywright...yet...so do not copy--------------

 

 

 

( ) = Echo

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I don't know if I would say that?

look forum members are viewing it,

not everyone will respond, most might

just read your poem, feel moved and then

go out and be a better person, or get

drunk or high or have sex, all worthy

activities. so I think the health

and well being of forum members

is in your hands so keep at it

;)

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that's right.

a real poet beatnik

recites just so he can

hear himself talking bonedaddy.

he\she\it is the only form

of public forum they require.

I post SAD in 3 categories

not to be told I am great

*oh I LIE! yes I do.*

no I post them

and started posting them

because the Blue Casket says poetry.

And since I came on forum

I think it has gotten

a little busier than it was.

I mean High Rollers

and Calavera Cafe

will always get more posts,

but you must not concern yourself

with postage man,

or a stamp of approval;

that's for uptight

rain or sleet or snow,

bacon smelling carrier pidgeons

of the capitalist burocracy.

*snap, snap*

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