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Mister_Sinister

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Level 1 of Episode 1, "Havoc's Cry". This episode is set in a secret, Rebel training facility.

 

The first four shots are of the aux. hangar bay where the player starts. They're a bit old, but I'm dl'ing a huge file right now, so I can't boot up JO and take new shots. The last four are of a hallway. Oooh ahhh! Nothing is 100% final, so feel free to make suggestions/comments.

 

 

 

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I'm not sure (because the agnle of the shot) but maybe you should make the hangar higher, compared to the ship inside.

 

Amd some texture alignment :)

 

On the 3rd picture, the "columns". The top is OK, but at the bottom you can see that one of those little squares is only a half. I think it would look better if you made the texture a little smaller or bigger to not have half square on both ends.

 

The other one is in the hallway. Again the "columns". They are looking they have many laps on them. But at the two sides there are half lamps. Can that texture be shrinked a bit to make them whole?

 

I know these are little problems, if they are problems at all. :D

 

Anyway, the pictures are looking very nice to me.

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Very nice indeed. You have certainly fulfilled the odd Star Wars concept that no room should be box-like nor any corridor with straight angles. Yeah, I wonder, when real architects notice that... Yes, your map has a lot of promise, if you have a good plot to go along with it.

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