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everything on it i just made today, because, well, i wanted to. i think it's pretty good for my first page ever, especially since i had no help and had no clue what i was doing, i think it turned out pretty good.

 

the main reason i want you to go there is to read the story and tell me what you think of it, though. so here's a link to the story:

 

there you go

 

that's only chapters 1-3, though. so click the link at the bottom of the page to keep reading the rest. or, instead of using that link, you can click my homepage thingy at the bottom of this post if you want to. there's nothing much eltse there except for an update on a reality tv show (so you probably don't want to go there, i'm guessing, since near everybody here hates reality tv), and nothing else besides that and the story. i might try and add other stuff soon, but just read the story and tell me what you think.

 

thanks! :D

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I only got to chapter three because its a lot to read but so far it was really good. You came up with a good story, it is sort of creepy and sometimes hard to follow, but overall you have a good story. :)

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