Bee Hoon

Bee, what's your new title say? It looks like a sanskrit/Arabic-type language.

My idea came to me during... I think it was Social Studies homework (yeah, ideas come when I'm doing work ) It occurred to me to have someone breaking their morals- and what better place then in war? And then, remembering that it'd be boring reading only one story, I've decided to do two point of views, each intertwined. If I do this correctly, it should work out nicely.

As for your story, I hope it goes well! I'm more than happy to help you in any way that I can. Take things slow, think about the plot as a whole, and move on from there. If you're dedicated to finishing it, I've got no doubt that you will.