Darth Kalverys

Sure. I'd be very happy to. Hmm. Change that to "I'd love to!" I just read your story, and I think it's very interesting! Can't wait to see what you're gonna do with that creepy holocron. (Loved that 'abyss' line, that was just...EXTREMELY well put!)

A few things I need to tell you. I pull no punches and show no mercy. I'll kill to correctly place a comma. But, if you say you want something to stay the way it is, I promise, you won't have to put up with me nagging you or anything like that!