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    Chloe O'Brian and Cameron Phillips fanboy. I am a high school student. People tell me that I'm quirky. I like reading, writing, drawing. Sometimes I have a short attention span - oooh look, a beetle!
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  1. Burnseyy

    HOP, biiiig question that could ruin the whole first chapter if you've written it differently!

     

    Okay, it's not that bad, but I needed to catch your attention.

     

    Well, in my Bastila and Carth scene, they have only just set off the 'rumour' that the Temple on Coruscant is being rebuilt instead of the Dantooine Enclave, to divert attention from the Sith. If you're writing the Mission and Dustil scene, now I see 3 different ways it could work out

     

    1. Dustil and Mission discover Dantooine's Enclave before Bastila and Carth because either Mission or Dustil or both, is already on Dantooine.

    2. You write at the beginning "2 weeks later" or something.

    3. You don't set their piece on Dantooine, but somewhere else. I don't see how that could work, since they've lost contact, but I'm sure you could come up with something.

     

    Pick and choose, unless you have a better idea/have it already covered. :xp:

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