Litofsky

"Very good, but I want to sleep. Good night!"

I use lots of them but Sabre just makes me break them into shorter sentences ;_; I don't write frenzied. Who can write while frenzied without including much capslock abuse and exclamation marks?

Heh, I'm afraid that the situation in my country is...difficult. It has to do with the quota system and bad bad BAD administration. You country is pretty difficult to move though, I imagine it has a lot of inertia, so to speak.

Label your segments! At least then there'll be no doubt as to who the narrator in that segment is. Try to strike a nice balance between them, and think about which scene would be most effective from which character's POV. But I'm sure you knew that.

I am schozzled, so good night and bai bai!