Darth_Yuthura

Okay, I know this is long in the coming, but I finally read your rough draft. I like it very much, and I thinki that this is some of the best, if not the best, emotion you have written. The only thing I would sufggest is a bit more physical description of perhaps the robe fallling off or the surrounding area. But that is my writing style...honestly there is not much I can offer with this. Other than a bit more physical description...no other suggestions. When I read this I was like "wow!" I'll save the rest of my thoughts on the chapter for SiD.

Sorry this took so long.

~HOP