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I think I get the gist of it. Familiar general theme to me--but you'll have a different way to express the sotry, in the way it plays out as well as the outcome.
If I may suggest: don't shy away from the note of bitter and pain alongside happiness and colorful. After all, does the ending need to be *completely* happy or sad? Just something to think about.