Samuel Dravis Posted March 29, 2006 Posted March 29, 2006 Right, I've been listening to a bit of Days of the New (awesome sounding guitar, lemme tell you) and I liked one of their songs, Shelf in the Room. I decided to rewrite the lyrics a bit though: You're so distant I'm so far away You're so sharp edged I die everyday So help me out I just want to be your friend So help me out Let's try this again You're so silent Now you show me the door You're so cold I don't know you anymore Kick me out Let me go Ask myself I don't belong here anymore Kick me out Let me go Let me go No one to listen No one to listen for Is there any way - no No, that's over, no more So help me out I just want to be your friend So help me out Let's try this again Kick me out Let me go Ask myself I don't belong here anymore So help me out I just want to be your friend So help me out Let's try this again Let's try this again What say you, insane people?
Commander Obi-Wan Posted March 29, 2006 Posted March 29, 2006 How can you write this when you die everyday?
Samuel Dravis Posted March 29, 2006 Author Posted March 29, 2006 How can you write this when you die everyday? IT'S A METAPHOR, YOU UNWASHED INGRATE! Ehehe. Sorry. Seriously though...if you don't think it's good I could change it. I thought that bit was a little clumsy myself.
Commander Obi-Wan Posted March 29, 2006 Posted March 29, 2006 IT'S A METAPHOR, YOU UNWASHED MASS OF- Ehehe. Sorry. Seriously though...if you don't think it's good I could change it. No, No....it's fine. Better than what I can do.
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