HK-42 Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 1 year after TJO, War had killed many as the sith and jedi fought the asoume battles. Darth Grivis as the new emporer had made a seconed Star Forge. That had the power of both the first one and the Death Star. Jaden had lost many jedi to it. The repulic had elected a new Supreme Chancellor. Grivis was making a plan to assanite him and Jaden. Now set back and read SWTWOTD I shal hopefully post chap 1 today Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niner_777 Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 I'm looking forward to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted July 1, 2006 Author Share Posted July 1, 2006 thanks, i finnaly got a pic on my sig but you have to click [click here] on the sig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niner_777 Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 That's a sweet pic. Where'd you get it? EDIT: I think that I just got it, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted July 1, 2006 Author Share Posted July 1, 2006 got it from click here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niner_777 Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 Those are cool pictures. You're not using Darth Yoda in this fic, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted July 1, 2006 Author Share Posted July 1, 2006 yep, i now have darth yoda as my background NO way on using darth yoda in this fic EDIT: im about in 5-10min work on chap 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted July 1, 2006 Author Share Posted July 1, 2006 Chapter 1 The Beginning of the War The battle continued, sith and jedi dying, the Cruins had gone to Yavin 5 to await the jedi. Luke had never seen such a battle. He told Kyle to retreat the jedi. He entered his ship, thinking the same Grivis will soon think- War had begun. Grivis blocked Nordis’s attack as he sung at him. Nordis turned and jumped into a leaving jedi cruiser. Grivis left to his throne. There he thought- the battle was over and The War of the Dead had begun. Grivis walked through the hall leading to his throne, the biggest room in the Star Forge. The jedi were overwhelmed by the power of the Star Forge 2. The speakers came on; “Intruder Jedi inside the emperor’s throne full alert” said the voice. Grivis entered his throne, jumped up and removed the Jedi’s head. Grivis walked to his huge window. There were hundreds of jedi ships approaching! Grivis jumped into his ship and flew into the battle. He flew toward the head ship were Skywalker, Katarn, and the Korrs would be. He entered there hangar, as he flew in he opened his cockpit he jumped out pushing his ship into a group of jedi ships. He ran to the command center and planted a det pack. Then he entered the Jedi consul. Tell me how you liked it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 Why is the Star Forge in it? If there is a second one I doubt it would be as powerful as the first. Grammar has improved slightly and I also liked the Pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted July 1, 2006 Author Share Posted July 1, 2006 i thought about making a misture of the star forge and the death star Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 i thought about making a misture of the star forge and the death star A Mixture of the Star Forge and the Death Star? Interesting... What would it be called? The Death Forge? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted July 1, 2006 Author Share Posted July 1, 2006 i don't know but mean while another darth yoda click here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 I prefer the first Pic... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted July 1, 2006 Author Share Posted July 1, 2006 so do i Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted July 1, 2006 Author Share Posted July 1, 2006 im working 0n chap 2 so hold up it should be poster in less then a hour:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niner_777 Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 Good chapter, connor. I like the idea of Death Forge, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted July 1, 2006 Author Share Posted July 1, 2006 Chapter 2 Fight to the death Grivis walked up to Skywalker. “Hello, Luke he said. I have a proposition for you, it is…Die!” He through his saber at him then ripped out his X-saber. “I only use this on special accessions”. He activated all 4 blades and charged in a powerful Kata. Luke jumped up and landed behind him. Jaden jumped in front of him, Kyle jumped to his left and Mordale to his right. “Where is Luke Korr” Grivis asked. “Right above you Grivis” Luke K answered as he dropped from the roof. Grivis sung up stabbing him. “NO” Jaden yelled in rage. Grivis jumped up as Jaden’s lightsaber slung where he was standing. “Yes release your anger and turn to the dark side Grivis said hopefully Join me”. “No Jaden, he’s not dead” Luke said. Suddenly a bodyguard entered the room slinging his saber at Grivis. Grivis dodged it ignited his Y-saber and threw it at the jedi, one blade went through his heart and the other his side… Grivis took out his detonator and hit the button, the explosion distracted the jedi as Grivis jumped to Jaden’s desk and hit the ships self destruct button he jumped back into a escape pod and escaped. Jaden and Luke got the others into another escape pod. Jaden hit the abandon ship alarm and left. Grivis exited the escape pod and looked around he was on Kamino. EDIT: and pottsie i see you have detroyed the TMJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted July 1, 2006 Author Share Posted July 1, 2006 has anyone seen a hutt jedi that thought just appered in my mind????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 Anyway, I've only noticed this, but is Grivis supposed to be Grevious out of RotS? If it is, Grevious is the correct spelling. Several spelling mistakes, but nothing editing can't fix. Yes I used the Death Star's power to destroy my Fic . I'm thinking of writing a Trilogy but I don't know what to write about. It might be something around KOTOR. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted July 2, 2006 Author Share Posted July 2, 2006 grivis is not grevious Grivis is just grivis ah,... mabey a mission of kyle and jan... ah continue vote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted July 2, 2006 Author Share Posted July 2, 2006 how do you do pic tiltles guys i want to make one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 grnday2006: Don't Spam! connor: You can request to get someone to make a Title Pic for you in the Avatar/Sig Pic Request/ Discussion Thread in the Ahto Spaceport Cantina and put your Request there. Also I started the whole Title Pic idea (I first got the idea of Alkonium's Fics). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted July 2, 2006 Author Share Posted July 2, 2006 thanks pottsie i did what you said :D EDIT: chap 3 should be up tomorrow since i got a headache (ahhhhhhh) sorry while you waitdarth potter, darth yoda3, a lot of funny sw pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niner_777 Posted July 3, 2006 Share Posted July 3, 2006 Good chapter, connor. Btw, those are some pretty funny pictures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted July 3, 2006 Author Share Posted July 3, 2006 i shall now start working on chapter 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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