Jackisonfire Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 I have a new idea for a FanFic, set some decades after Return Of The Jedi, called Star Wars: The Legend Of Darth Severence. It's kind of short, and will see the rise and eventual fall of Darth Severence. So just read the introduction and enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 Doesn't seem like much of an introduction. Will it be posted soon? Also what was the matter with your other Fic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackisonfire Posted October 19, 2006 Author Share Posted October 19, 2006 |\|/|\|/|\|/| Introduction |\|/|\|/|\|/| 78 years after the death of Darth Vader and his master, Darth Sideous… The Republic was now back in force, and the Jedi were now the leaders of the Republic’s armies. Remembering the clone wars and the rise of Darth Vader, the Republic made sure they were all human soldiers as they were before the clones… * * * Darth Severance and his apprentice, Darth Theron were walking down a hallway in the Jedi Temple to the Jedi Council chamber, to kill the Jedi and rule the galaxy with darkness. They opened the door, and the Jedi quickly stopped what they were discussing and drew their lightsabres and the Sith did the same. They stood up pretty much in unison and ran towards the two lords of darkness. Severance cut into one Jedi, and sliced another in half. Theron shoved his lightsabre into one’s face and cut another straight down the middle. Together they kept killing the Jedi until the founder of the new Jedi council, Jedi Master Luke Skywalker, was left. “Ah, my old apprentice, Iran Leftan, or should I call you, Darth Severance?” he said calmly. “I am sorry my master,” Severance said and walked over to Luke, “But this is the end for you,” and with that, he cut Skywalker’s head off. Severance’s lightsabre died and they left the room. “We rule the Republic now, my young apprentice,” said Severance as they reached the landing space for ships. Severance heard the sound of a lightsabre being drawn behind him, and drew his own. He turned to see his apprentice with his weapon gripped tight. “Sorry, my master, but I rule the Republic now,” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted October 20, 2006 Share Posted October 20, 2006 Sideous is spelt Sidious a Lightsabre is spelt Lightsaber, for future reference. It was okay, I'll keep my eye on this. Actually Pottsie, Lightsabre and Lightsaber are both correct. Lightsaber is the American spelling and Lightsabre is the British/European one. -RH Funny that, because I'm British, but I use the American version. It's because of the films. Thanks RedHawke. What is even more funny is that I use the British versions myself, and I'm from the USA. 'Sabre' just looks better IMHO. -RH Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted October 20, 2006 Share Posted October 20, 2006 Eh? Looks Interesting...Luke is beheaded? Well, that's a tragendy. Well, I'll keep my eye on this, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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