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Kingzjester

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Let's start with a writing critique. I'll be the first Guinea pig. Here's a thing I wrote when I was in one of my ****ed moods:

 

http://theadventuregame.mixnmojo.com/misc/Veryverybadday.doc

 

 

Since I don't know any of you, I'm sure I'll be seeing some pretty negative critiques. It matters not as long as they're constructive.

 

 

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-Yorick the King's Jester

 

Backfire Killed the Sly - The Adventure Game

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