ExiledFish Posted May 5, 2007 Share Posted May 5, 2007 I began drafting this out I only have a bit of work to show but will put in more. Bestiary - Information and base stats of all creatures in my plot idea including a picture with some. [COMING SOON] Also include party member bios of Bastila (Dark Side), Juhani, Bastila ( Light Side ) and 7 new people. LINK: http://s208.photobucket.com/albums/bb48/KotorIII_2007/ Star Wars Knights Of The Old Republic Threat from the Unkown 10 years after the Battle Of Telos V the republic now stand stronger then ever. With the success of the Telos Restoration project other planets have now had work begun on them. The Jedi Order slowly being rebuilt some of the Jedi who lived in hiding during the first Jedi Purge have returned ready to teach the force sensitives they can find. With the Jedi Exile gone and Revan still missing it is up to those trained by the exile to build the first line of Defense again the True Sith Threat. The Republic ship. The Feminar lays wasted after an attack from an unknown enemy its engines off line its life support running low you remain fast asleep oblivious of the battle going on just outside your room. Character Creation Before Character Creation There are something I must ask you… Was Revan Light or Dark side at the end of the Jedi Civil war? -Light -Dark Was Revan Male or Female? -Male -Female What is your Nickname -Choice 1 Light -Choice 2 Light -Choice 3 Dark -Choice 4 Dark -Choice 5 Neutral -Choice 6 Neutral A Force Sensitive who has worked for the republic for 2 years. You have gone through the ranks not knowing of your Force Sensitivity the Jedi Order slowly being rebuilt you are approached. By a Dark Jedi/ Jedi by the name of Bastila Shan / Juhani. Presents your character choice Race: A choice out of Human, Zabrak or Twi’lek Class and Gender Choice Male Force Adept Soldier Male Force Adept Scout Male Force Adept Scoundrel Female Force Adept Soldier Female Force Adept Scout Female Force Adept Scoundrel Portrait: Includes 10 for each gender and race totalling to 60 different choices 30 for each gender. Abilities: The Bog Standard Kotor Build Skills: Nothing Different Here Feats: Same as always. Players gain the normal feats for the original version of there class. Character Name: Class Information New Classes Force Adept Soldier Unique Power: Force Rage Starting Powers -Force Push -Energy Resistance - Force Rage Starting Equipment -Blaster Rifle -Clothing -Short Sword Force Adept Scoundrel Starting Powers -Force Push -Energy Resistance -Force Stealth Unique Power: Force Stealth -Blaster Pistol -Clothing -Short sword Force Adept Scout Unique Power: Force Scout Starting Powers -Force Push -Energy Resistance -Force Stealth Starting Equipment -Blaster Pistol -Clothing -Short sword Force Scout Allows you to create a strange ghost like you and send it ahead to explore. Disappears when spotted. Can be used to manipulate door mechanisms (open doors from the other side) or go up ahead so that you can prepare your self for what your going to face. Later upgrade allows you to stealth the scout. Force Stealth Allows yourself to be cloaked with the force and remain unseen upgrade gives you a bonus to Stealth. Force Rage Increases your strength score by 4 and your constitution by 4 but decreases defence by 2. Later upgrade increases strength and constitution by 6. [b[beginning Cut Scene.[/b] A lone republic ship far away from any planet is stranded in space. Explosions can be seen all over the hull parts of it already beginning to float away. A large freighter of unknown type appears out of hyperspace and flies towards the ship. The Shell of a ship. Troop quarters As you lay in your room your eyes open you look around tables and chairs knocked over the red emergency light on you wander what the hell is happening. You put your hand to your head and feel a strange device on your head which you remove revealing it’s a sonic nullifier. Probably why you had slept so long. You jump out of bed ready for action. Notes On Room Storage locker on the far side of your room contains base equipment. Force Adept Soldier -Blaster Rifle -Clothing -Short Sword Force Adept Scoundrel -Blaster Pistol -Clothing -Short sword Force Adept Scout -Blaster Pistol -Clothing -Short sword Door is unlocked but broken and can only be bashed open by as little as a Shortsword or Blaster Pistol/ Rifle. After the door is open you walk into a corridor bodies of both Republic soldiers and strange alien like humanoids looking like this. Energy scars are marked all over the walls including several of the exits on the corridor blocked off by rubble or locked down due hull breech after exploring all the way up the corridor you find all the doors locked down and return back to room. This time a figure is stood there cloaked in either a brown robe or black robe. (depends on weather you have said revan is evil or light.) The person gets up and after a while of you both staring removes there hood revealing Light Bastila (Revan Light) or Dark Bastila ( Revan Dark). “Ahhh so someone has survived the first of many attacks,” She says ( Light Side ) “Oh, Sorry I thought someone was here but it seems not,” She says ( Dark Side) Options 1 Who are you? 2 Are you responsible for what’s happened here? 3 What are those things out in the corridor? Answers [Light] 1 My name is Bastila I am a Jedi. 2 No I am not but I fear the galaxy is in danger. This is the first of many attacks to come. 3 They are the Rakata. A race that once rule the Infinite Empire and in turn the whole galaxy. Answers [Dark] 1 I am Bastila apprentice of…. Never mind. 2 No, Even I do not control such powerful creatures. 3 They are the Rakata. A race that once rule the Infinite Empire and in turn the whole galaxy. “Who are you and are there any other survivors?” 1 I am <FULL NAME> though people call me <NICKNAME> I think I’m the only one left. 2 [LIE] I am <FULLNAME> though people call me <NICKNAME> There was another but I dealt with that annoying slime. DSpts 3 I am <FULL NAME> though people call me <NICKNAME> It seems there are none left it’s a shame they were great soldiers. LSpts Replys 1 <NICKNAME> We must leave this place you are in danger and I fear there is a reason you were spared. Your attacks will return to the sith. 2 <NICKNAME> do you insist on lying. An act like killing someone would send a ripple through the force one that I could sense. [ Minus Influence ] 3 <NICKNAME> though I understand how you feel we must leave I have yet to figure out why you were spared. And the attackers may return. [ LS answer] + Influence] 3 <NICKNAME> Such thoughts are best kept to yourself now lets leave you are in great danger. [ - influence DS answer] Bastila Joins the party. As soon as you pass room 2. ( The other room with a green door ) Bastila stops and if you are a scout says the following. “ Hmm I wander lies behind this door they say some force sensitive beings can travel through a place in their mind” [ As a Force Adept scout you have the Force Scout ability, use this to go through certain walls to open otherwise unopenable door.] ( If you are not a scout ) This room it may contain something of use. (activate lightsaber yellow for Light Bastila and Red for Dark Bastila then walks over and strikes at the door. Opening it. Room Notes Contains Locker Locker -Medpac- [ After Getting Medpac ] “Ahh a Medpacs these are useful for healing yourself when the force is not available. “ Bastila says then switch back to player control. The door at the end of the hallway is now open you open it step into the corridor and see three Rakata Scouts up a head they pulls out there swords and run at you. 3 Rakata Scouts Force Powers -Push -Energy Resistance -Burst Of Speed - Force Aura Weapon: Vibroblades. After defeating them you can go through two doors into quick access barrack that will get you some grenades and more Medpacs. Then you continue through the door up ahead to a new area. The Bridge. The Bridge You will step into another corridor. Three Rakata Scouts stand in front of you and three others to your right. They both pull out there weapons and head towards you. “This battle will be a hard one look with in yourself use the force I sense within you to help us in this battle” Bastila says. “This battle shall be easily one use the power of the force within you and strike these creatures down!” Bastila says. Gain Level up at end of battle. After finishing the battle you notice the corridor leads out in a cross road one path going up ahead another going down to what seems to look like a large heavy Defense door on your right. Along the north path you will come across a single door that is unlocked when opened you’ll notice several corpses laid out on the bed. “ These men they were once soldiers along with you but what’s wrong with them there faces though calm look as if they have been corrupted by the dark side” Bastila says which automatically makes each of them gets up and begin walking towards you each holding a vibrosword ( There are 6 in total) “ I have never seen such a great use of the dark side of the force these things there undead…” Bastila says as the zombies get up. ( 6 in total still) Each one has the following loot - 25 Credits. Along the path to the right of you will come across two doors the first leading into the briefing where you can find a console. This console contains holo logs of the captain and also one of a desperate soldier who locked down the computers leaving an access code for any republic soldier who finds it. You take this from the computer then head to the next door. The next door leads to a smaller room with another door. Ignore this room for it has little value then open the door to head into the bridge. Immediately four Rakata scouts will attempt an attack (and fail). You can then head over to the compute unlock it and then unlock the elevator. After you exit you come across one more door. This leads into a med bay with 6 force zombies who immediately rise. There is also a console that activates the three bacta tanks that heal you and revitalize your fp. Each One Has the Following Loot - 25 credits You can also just leave in the elevator and go to… The Hangar. Hangar COMING SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Spitfire Posted May 5, 2007 Share Posted May 5, 2007 I like it . . . Except I think Bastila should be in your party no matter what allignment Revan is in. Bastila Rox! Anyways, I really like this. This would be an ideal storyline. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExiledFish Posted May 5, 2007 Author Share Posted May 5, 2007 I added some more and a map. See post above. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jesusfreaks_90 Posted May 5, 2007 Share Posted May 5, 2007 Bastila should be in your party because you can save her as light side revan to. (like I did and i want her back ). But I like the detail that you have given so far. Keep working on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExiledFish Posted May 5, 2007 Author Share Posted May 5, 2007 I added more plus new area map. EDIT: I also cleaned up charecter creation giving you more of an idea of what it would be like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Kalverys Posted May 6, 2007 Share Posted May 6, 2007 The powers... I have a few problems with that... Juhani joining your party if Revan is set to the Lightside... the nicknames, and the Cathar's at Character Creation, other than that I like it. After playing K1 and K2, I don't think you should have Force Powers at the beggining of the game. Juhani almost everyone hates... the nicknames you should get to make up, like the names of the characters... and Juhani was the last Cathar, the rest died on Cathar when the Mandalorians destroyed the planet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titanius Anglesmith Posted May 6, 2007 Share Posted May 6, 2007 Not bad, but there are a few things I don't like. 1.) The questions about Revan are way too direct. They answers should be decided in a dialogue option. 2.) What about the Exile? Does he have no part in this? 3.) The nickname thing is probably a little too informal and unnecessary. 4.) I think your character should be human no matter what. 5.) I think you're dialogue choices could use some work. 6.) If Bastila is in the game, she should either join you or not, no matter what your alignment is. And I would prefer it if Juhani didn't join. I don't really like her, but I guess you can't please everybody. BTW, how many years after TSL is this? And this would be about the True Sith, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExiledFish Posted May 6, 2007 Author Share Posted May 6, 2007 [Notes Fixed The Race Options] [Nicknames: Uhh no they use your nickname to refer to you. SO they have to be set.] [Powers at beggining: I'm keeping it for now though later I may think differently.] [Juhani:I replaced her with Light Bastila] [ Exile: Wait And See I haven't even finished drafting first part which is like an intro...] [Exactly 10 years since the Battle Of Telos V] I have began work on a bestiary. To go along with this. I will post the hangar tomorrow... Well today here in the uk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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